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Sweet Love
Night closes in quickly...they close their eyes
The chirpers sing their song...they whisper their love
Warm wind blows on their skin...they gently touch
The boat bobs up and down...they rise and fall
Blue moon hanging in the sky...they glisten in the light
The chirpers sing their song...they whisper their love
Warm wind blows on their skin...they gently touch
The boat bobs up and down...they rise and fall
Blue moon hanging in the sky...they glisten in the light
Published 8th Apr 2013
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8th Apr 2013 1:40am
8th Apr 2013 4:22am
Anonymous
8th Apr 2013 2:14am
Nice write
strider...
strider...
8th Apr 2013 4:23am
8th Apr 2013 6:31am
8th Apr 2013 11:18am
8th Apr 2013 7:35am
Tommielynn, this poem is incredible! Short, yes, but SO effective! You've wasted no words; each one counts and paints a vivid romantic picture! Brilliant, seriously!
8th Apr 2013 11:20am
8th Apr 2013 1:33pm
8th Apr 2013 1:42pm
