Submissions by Crazontheinside (Joanna Ryan-McDonald)

im working on this to make it more a rap to add as a spoken word, hopefully my verse voices will work out. just trying new things. if anyone has tips let me know.*

“I think deep inside
everyone hears a voice, some of us hear many… whether they admit it or not.”  

I’ll be your constant reminder,  
I’m stuck to you like glue,  
And I’ll always be the broken child  
The one inside of you.  

Am I that stranger,  
Your inner child, in your head?
Or am I the nightmares
The ones you feared would come back.

A...

UPDATED - Special thanks to Daniel Christensen - The Fire Elemental, for editing my words on Café Critique.
“Let me in, inside your mind, my goals are simple...I am the worst they come, a cold-blooded monster, wanting your soul. There is no end, I will not stop till blood is on my hands.”

In darkness, he follows
As he hunts in the shadows
He'll prey on your weakness
Like a contagious sickness

While Stalking deep slumber
You'll get chills right after

One can't be enough
Why would he stop
Since what is art ...