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Can someone help me?
I recently just wrote a poem but i don't know if it's good or not. I mean i just can't tell if it's just me looking and lately that's what it is considering my parents think it's a waste and my friends say it just to be nice. can someone look at the one i recently published here and comment on it please that'd be a big help.
Man fuck wat all them ppl think about ur poem. Do they write ur poems? No u do and with that being said post it and I guarantee u someone will be nice enough to critique it and hey u may even get likes. U like to write right? Well post it and u will see how someone will relate to ur poem. So welcome to the DUP family and keep that pen pushing
My only criticism regarding the 5 poems you uploaded so far is that you are recycling material to the point that some of the poems are indistinguishable from the others. If you plan on writing more and want to maintain a person's interest, be diverse in the words you choose and the stories you tell.
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Truthfully I don't know what you want.
Writing out emotions can be the coolest therapy (it's free as well).
Posting what you write on the internet and asking strangers what they think of it,
is both brave and foolish though, because you may not like what people say.
If a thousand people told you, your poems are wonderful,
would that change the way you feel about events in your life?
A rant is not a poem, it's just you writing out the hurt you're experiencing.
It's the way you describe your world that makes you a poet (or not).
No-one becomes a writer overnight. It requires never ending practice and sacrifice.
I've read your poems and understand where you are now in writing terms.
They are honest and raw -- but that's all.
Find some poetry that makes you laugh or cry, anything that strokes your soul,
then write more of your own and you'll improve.
Best ~ Abra
Writing out emotions can be the coolest therapy (it's free as well).
Posting what you write on the internet and asking strangers what they think of it,
is both brave and foolish though, because you may not like what people say.
If a thousand people told you, your poems are wonderful,
would that change the way you feel about events in your life?
A rant is not a poem, it's just you writing out the hurt you're experiencing.
It's the way you describe your world that makes you a poet (or not).
No-one becomes a writer overnight. It requires never ending practice and sacrifice.
I've read your poems and understand where you are now in writing terms.
They are honest and raw -- but that's all.
Find some poetry that makes you laugh or cry, anything that strokes your soul,
then write more of your own and you'll improve.
Best ~ Abra
Abracadabra said:Truthfully I don't know what you want.
Writing out emotions can be the coolest therapy (it's free as well).
Posting what you write on the internet and asking strangers what they think of it,
is both brave and foolish though, because you may not like what people say.
If a thousand people told you, your poems are wonderful,
would that change the way you feel about events in your life?
A rant is not a poem, it's just you writing out the hurt you're experiencing.
It's the way you describe your world that makes you a poet (or not).
No-one becomes a writer overnight. It requires never ending practice and sacrifice.
I've read your poems and understand where you are now in writing terms.
They are honest and raw -- but that's all.
Find some poetry that makes you laugh or cry, anything that strokes your soul,
then write more of your own and you'll improve.
Best ~ Abra
^^^^^^^^^^
#Truth !
I chose to share some opinion based on your pages.
But I wish I added what the poetic magician said above!
Nice Abra solid advice there!
Writing out emotions can be the coolest therapy (it's free as well).
Posting what you write on the internet and asking strangers what they think of it,
is both brave and foolish though, because you may not like what people say.
If a thousand people told you, your poems are wonderful,
would that change the way you feel about events in your life?
A rant is not a poem, it's just you writing out the hurt you're experiencing.
It's the way you describe your world that makes you a poet (or not).
No-one becomes a writer overnight. It requires never ending practice and sacrifice.
I've read your poems and understand where you are now in writing terms.
They are honest and raw -- but that's all.
Find some poetry that makes you laugh or cry, anything that strokes your soul,
then write more of your own and you'll improve.
Best ~ Abra
^^^^^^^^^^
#Truth !
I chose to share some opinion based on your pages.
But I wish I added what the poetic magician said above!
Nice Abra solid advice there!
Anonymous
I'd love to help, ignore those who say "fuck this", "screw that", I LOVE it when people critique my works, good or bad, it helps me develop my skills, please send me a private message with links to the works you want looked at friend 
