I am new to this site but have been sharing many posts on Facebook poetry pages, one thing I hate is critiques of only a few words, I love it when on the rare occasion I get a detailed review of WHY they hit the "like" button, positive or negative, I show appreciation to both side, so I am hoping I can get some feelings and reactions, I normally do not post this type of erotica, but I find it a good tester for pages and sites claiming all types and erotic poems are encouraged, so please, if I can get some eyes AND words, I would love it. Thank You.
since I am new, it won't let me post a link, even to the post on THIS site, so I'm just going to put my user name, I only have one poem, so should be easy to find,
or look up: The Feel of Heaven, A Taste of Sin
I would like to tell everyone who took the time to read this work, Thank You.
I would also appreciate feedback, positive or negative, I appreciate and respect all kinds, and again...
Thank You :)
So you tell me I have little poetisism and more story telling, having read your works I no poetisism nor finesse in any fashion, a person can easily include what the rest of the world would consider brusk and/or vulgar and still be poetic, but it seem more like you are just throwing them in for the sake of shock value just to keep the reader interested just enough to continue what they would've not bothered to finish otherwise.
You wanted critique on the two poems you had submitted thus far. I gave you critique on the two poems you had submitted thus far.
What I said regarding one poem does not apply to the other and vice versa. I did not make broad judgments about your work in general. What I did focus on were aspects of each poem that were either problematic or could use improvement.
Not only did you not read all of Johnny Blaze's poetry, you also did not read the poetry I have posted under 4 other accounts. Total, I have over 380 pomes submitted here. Your hasty criticism of a minute fraction of my work in retaliation doesn't bother me in the slightest. It just illustrates that your ego is fragile and you aren't mature enough to have your work thoroughly examined.
I don't give a fuck who you are, how long you have been writing and or if you are a published author. If I see something problematic in a poem, I point it out. If I see room for improvement, I point it out. If I don't do either, then it's probably because the poem is as perfect as a poem can get in my personal opinion.
I am one of the few people here who gives Honest Critique on poems tagged desirous of Honest Critique or for writers who specifically ask for it . Reviewing the work of others takes time away from my day, but it ultimately helps me become a better writer in the process.
Do yourself a favor and choose Friendly Feedback on each of your poems from now on until you are absolutely ready to handle more than a simple pat on the head and a hardy "Good job, Buddy."
I like honest critiques, but NO ONE likes grammer/spelling Nazis
Come, that I may touch your skin tease to me
alluring baby smooth feeling of seduction
But readers do like to read sentences / statements that make actual sense.
Are they all then closet "grammer" Nazis?
Good Lord ............