It's a personal piece about drugs and friends dying, so content is entirely personal, as is layout, I personally won't comment on that, it's just subjective preference.
It has potential to be a really good piece, really good, but...
Honestly, it could do with another going over for any errors in syntax and spelling errors. There are too many to point out but don't toss out the baby with the bathwater. I think that's ALL that needs fixing.
If this is a personal account, I'm so fucking sorry for your loss, man.