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Timagination543 said:

Uh Oh, you're in trouble now dude.


In trouble, are the people who laugh at what others look like, and enjoy licking assholes out.
Iíll never understand one cousin.

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Ricky-sJournals said:

If thatís what you like, thatís absolutely fine.
Iíve dabbled in a bit of some peopleís porn writing, felt quite sick rather than turned on, so I tend to stay away from it now.



That's fair, of course... your opinion to stay away
from reading 'porn' or erotica.
However, you didn't specify that, previously.
Your post through everyone who enjoyed porn or erotica into some untoward generality. Unfairly so. We're certainly not all
"very uncreative people. '
That was an offensive assumption
as was the comment below.

Youíre not a sad little man always writing porn just because the numbers go higher.
Youíre doing alright.


If you're stay away from reading this type of writing, then how in the world would you know if it was artfully and tastefully and at times beautifully written??? It's not always about shock and awe.... and writing sex to get off.

It's an outlet of expression, just like your art /diaries /pamphlets... or whatever it is you do in these forums...
Yet, we don't disregard that and assume it's 'less than'


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Ricky-sJournals said:

In trouble, are the people who laugh at what others look like, and enjoy licking assholes out.
Iíll never understand one cousin.


Let's not forget what this thread is about.

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Timagination543 said:

Let's not forget what this thread is about.

@tim.. agreed
Thank you for the reminder

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Difference of opinion, Blue, thatís all it is.
I think Iíve come across more the ones that arenít ďbeautifully writtenĒ - thatís probably what it is.

And Tim right, totally going away from why the thread was made.
So apologises to Lord Raven, and any who Iíve offended.

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No worries, I agree, Ricky.. difference of opinion, surely.
Thank you for listening
xo
B

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Itís all love.
But I do retract my sorry to the badly written people, because they did make me feel sick lol.


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Ricky-sJournals said:Itís all love.
But I do retract my sorry to the badly written people, because they did make me feel sick lol.


Badly written people?

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Badly written work?
That sound better?

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Ricky-sJournals said:Badly written work?
That sound better?


Okay, sounds better.

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Okay? Isnít that just usually spelt ďOkĒ?

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Ricky-sJournals said:Okay? Isnít that just usually spelt ďOkĒ?

How about alright?

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I think ďfineĒ would have been so much better.

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Ricky-sJournals said:I think ďfineĒ would have been so much better.

Fine. then.

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First dot should be a comma.

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