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how are my poems

Posted: 16th July 2019 8:31am
Lord_Raven
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I am very curious as to , if what I write is any good, I know oddout I had some scrambles but for the rest... how are they? honest thoughts … lol be brutal or as blunt … I appreciate flat out truth... please and thanks

Posted: 16th July 2019 9:34am
Tallen
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Maybe post some ink here:

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/groups/poetry-medics/discussion/

and ask for the critique You seek

Posted: 27th August 2020 12:51pm
Edited: 3rd September 2020 10:28pm
poet Anonymous
.(under construction).

Posted: 30th August 2020 1:39pm
Lord_Raven
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Haha , lol , thanks 🤣🤣🤣

Posted: 3rd September 2020 7:36am
Edited: 3rd September 2020 4:22pm
Ingredients
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Emoji's aside I've looked through a couple of your poems and Free-Verse is one of the things I've come to realize is much more subjective than a rhymed piece. People will either resonate with your work or not, and if they don't... then the reasons why can fluctuate so hard because prose does not have the same foundations which rhyme do which you can work off of. Save for a few things. The theme, tone, and flow. If you feel like your work isn't getting as much attention as you believe it should I would advise looking at what you write about, how you write it, and how people read it.

Posted: 3rd September 2020 9:14pm
Lord_Raven
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Thank you , now that gives me something to think about .... though would be nice with an example,  that way I can adjust accordingly

Posted: 21st November 2020 8:14pm
adagio
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I am very interested in knowing, how many people like "dark" in writing?

Posted: 21st November 2020 8:30pm
poet Anonymous
adagio said:I am very interested in knowing, how many people like "dark" in writing?

You know me,
I'm a total lover of the 'darkness' ... I like the shadows.
They comfort me and you learn a lot from lurking and watching from afar

Posted: 21st November 2020 8:40pm
adagio
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I do my best lurking with a pen, filled with macabre ink.

Posted: 21st November 2020 10:13pm
poet Anonymous
I’m trying to get as dark as other poets.
They get likes, I don’t.
Think my stuff is more singing
“Fuck all of you in auto tune.” lol

Posted: 21st November 2020 10:14pm
poet Anonymous
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Posted: 21st November 2020 10:15pm
poet Anonymous
How many accounts do you want to be on?

Posted: 21st November 2020 10:19pm
adagio
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How many am I on?

Posted: 21st November 2020 10:20pm
poet Anonymous
Nah, I was asking Tim, if he was responding to me lol

Posted: 21st November 2020 10:20pm
poet Anonymous
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