How Much Should Critique Affect You?
butters
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JohnnyBlaze said:
Never hurts to set an example that everyone can benefit from.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/366667-the-narrowing/
that's quite true. so glad i'm not a mod any longer.
i've visited his two poems and left some advice, though given it in a more direct form applied only to the poem as a piece of writing as preferred to his own, abrasive style. there are some good elements to it but it's marred by poor punctuation choices and excessive wordage.
Never hurts to set an example that everyone can benefit from.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/366667-the-narrowing/
that's quite true. so glad i'm not a mod any longer.
i've visited his two poems and left some advice, though given it in a more direct form applied only to the poem as a piece of writing as preferred to his own, abrasive style. there are some good elements to it but it's marred by poor punctuation choices and excessive wordage.
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lepperochan
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Cool, you both rock. ...you rock more, Butters. when he gets back hes gonna be so happy and grateful to you both. proper Christmas miracle stuff going on here, well done
butters
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lepperochan said:Cool, you both rock. ...you rock more, Butters. when he gets back hes gonna be so happy and grateful to you both. proper Christmas miracle stuff going on here, well done *raises eyebrow
no, just giving him the benefit of the doubt for the moment as i can't decide if he's simply trolling, someone who believes his own writing way above its actual level, or somewhere on the autistic spectrum where he REALLY doesn't get it (the poems) and doesn't use the same filters as others when replying. probably a blend of the first two, but i'm open to possibilities.
no, just giving him the benefit of the doubt for the moment as i can't decide if he's simply trolling, someone who believes his own writing way above its actual level, or somewhere on the autistic spectrum where he REALLY doesn't get it (the poems) and doesn't use the same filters as others when replying. probably a blend of the first two, but i'm open to possibilities.
Rachel_Lauren
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I’m.... amused...
I rate him 0 as a critic and about 5.5 (out of 10) as a troll. He overuses the words “pointless” and “tedious”
These are my favorites:
“Ahh pornography.Good to see its alive and well and living in poetry.There is nothing more tedious than writing pornography except pornography itself.Waste of my time”
“This is offensive.I hate the word "cuz".Its not English and should never be in a poem.To describe a person as a skinny bitch is not even funny by accident. Its just plain wrong”
Listen, a woman loves when you call her a “skinny bitch”. It means you thought she was skinny.
I rate him 0 as a critic and about 5.5 (out of 10) as a troll. He overuses the words “pointless” and “tedious”
These are my favorites:
“Ahh pornography.Good to see its alive and well and living in poetry.There is nothing more tedious than writing pornography except pornography itself.Waste of my time”
“This is offensive.I hate the word "cuz".Its not English and should never be in a poem.To describe a person as a skinny bitch is not even funny by accident. Its just plain wrong”
Listen, a woman loves when you call her a “skinny bitch”. It means you thought she was skinny.
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"Judging from your moronic critique I think that nothing will make you a better writer"
That's what he thought of your critique., Blaze..
That's what he thought of your critique., Blaze..
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Nothing justifies being rude when critiquing. This person is at least middle aged. No need to pamper a Bull.
JohnnyBlaze
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lepperochan said:"Judging from your moronic critique I think that nothing will make you a better writer"
That's what he thought of your critique., Blaze..
That's okay!
It was meant to be an example of a constructive critique for everyone to learn from.
:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
That's what he thought of your critique., Blaze..
That's okay!
It was meant to be an example of a constructive critique for everyone to learn from.
:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
JohnnyBlaze
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Magdalena
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