Listen man. I don't edit my voice, I speak the truth, a lot of times I'm confusing and can't be followed. Who cares? Put your art and yourself out there. We like to think our voice will reach the masses, but most of the masses don't even know what they need. Speak in your voice, study the old scriptures of literature that call to you, and do you. Your style is yours and it reflects who you are in tone. You can take a class on studying the great poets, but in the end, they used the diction of their time and people rejected them openly. I also feel the interpretations of historical works is overloaded with too many voices and opinions. Most of the writers we worship to this day were exhiles in their community. So seriously, why care for the opinion of sheep? What do any of the poets of this site know other than the same camaraderie found in any other institution? Many will tell you you are shit, ignore you, or simply not get your concept. It's not your bag to help any understand. It's not your problem to reach the world. Sometimes the select few is enough. Hope this helps.