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Calling all rhymers

Blackwolf
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JohnnyBlaze said:Male ... Female ... it's not a thread, but rather a solicitation to comment on his or hers poem pages, with the promise that he or she will comment on your pages.

Now, that doesn't mean you can't make it a thread to drop some KILLER rhymes in.

We know Blackwolf can .....


Thank you , good sir !

Let's see if I can come up with a few more lines for the page , no rage...

poet Anonymous

I can get dialect right on heads
lie again might be best time for bed

poet Anonymous

Youíre not backwards is what youíll sit and tell me
Rhymes like Eminem and have studied the dictionary
Shouldnít have to dumb it down for anyone so be heard
many I guess want straight to the point
skip over you and not have to do research
Their fault or yours?
Thatís the only reason others
would have called you for
Dusty and Blackwolf the colloba-tasers
with lies and deceit they go at the papers
Throwing back her knickers at her
Blackwolf wrapping and giving a nutty shit in a Snickers wrapper

poet Anonymous

Iíll always give you the 7th
while every passage of yours tells me
that you donít need to go after the F
youíve got plenty G
Youíll always try and take better
while every passage of yours tells me
trapped 1970
His fault but I got the blame
like a spat lit cigarette from laughing in her cleavage
Guess his name is ing-mean
and still canít bring a verse meaning
Was someone else trying to take his crown
back flipping on tables style Harry Wormwood
A Nazi would want to take this down
havenít the right to express myself unless itís as soft as their look
Fuck what people think, follow my gut over the real artists
an onion on the page, donít cry, the peels just started
In reality, itís false, them saying Rickíll end ya
enjoy a flick to the skin
feeling of your atomic bombs detonating on my little finger
At night, donít doubt you sleep in the right position
closed the door I do
as your headstand asleep paranoid your brain might go missing
But on the microphone leave a dump
As hard as it is, I have to respect mumble rap
so show me what youíve got squeaky pump

poet Anonymous

Sometimes Iíll look back at some stuff and think okay maybe that was a bit harsh, but when I observe others and their tactics. Itís not so bad. They arenít anyone to say anything, so itís all good lol.

poet Anonymous

People will forget what youíve said
but wonít forget how you made them feel
I think thats been spoken from a wise head
let me speak my truth like them be real
Is your alter ego name Rap Star?
I think it is and Iím just plain old Rasta
live a simple life not only eating pasta
I had an empath show sociopathic qualities ha-ha
Reminds me of an old school teacher
joins kids online and talks polite
gets you home and drunks
without consent tries to please ya
Are my walls too high?
You gonna try and put me down
lie to yourself and say you fine?
I just attack ghosts from my pasts
and demons come try and take my rights
But I do shine sublime in mind on lines

Rubiksmind91
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I havenít checked this thing in months , looks like I missed a bit huh guys

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Love

Blackwolf
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Best to you , as well

poet Anonymous

Nothing happening here.
All the Rhymers on my WhatsApp, or Instagram. More on WhatsApp in a group. Itís too funny lol.

poet Anonymous

Ricky-sJournals said:Nothing happening here.
All the Rhymers on my WhatsApp, or Instagram. More on WhatsApp in a group. Itís too funny lol.

to rhyme or not to rhyme
is the question
for a forced rhyme is a crime
hard for digestion
no am not asking
for suggestions
'cause my mind's already
had enough of congestions
as for you my brother Rick-ee
don't take the mickey
out of poets who don't rhyme
coz it's not worth ya time
like squeezing a prime lime
on a wheel covered with grime
and dust you must trust the thrust
of the free flow and let it go
for not everyone and everything
is for the show as some take it slow
and easy for their path is greasy
not necessarily sleazy although
it may seem that way but hey
by the way it's all in good fun
as life these days is but a run
like it or not one day you gonna leave
even what you've got up ya sleeve
no pet peeve for Adam and Steve
for they are doing what they need to
no need to pay heed to
the hatred or the politics
for it both stinks and sticks
and appeals mostly to the pricks
who fall for the tricks
i got more to say but you know
i gotta go but before i do
i must tell you so
no one should stop tryin'
for not everything on display is for buying
and not every rhymer out there is lying
it takes a lot...of courage for a poet to stop shying
now you my brother pull your act together  
and gimme full marks for vying!










poet Anonymous

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poet Anonymous

Ricky-sJournals said:ďNo need to pay heed to the hatred or politics
for it both stinks and sticks
to the pricks who fall for the tricks.Ē

I thought that was quite funny.
I donít poke fun at people who donít rhyme. In fact, Iím thinking to change my style here. The one I have now is so much better.
Good work.

thank bro.... just gave it a shot ya know.
and am glad you saw the humor in it...coz it was meant to be ...i kept the fake smileys out well almost!jk

and ya know i added Wolfie too in it at one point..but sed lets just speak to one poet at time... he's in a place of his own though.

poet Anonymous

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DCLXVI_1989
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I try not to rhyme
But each and every time
As if it didn't matter
I rhyme in my pattern

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