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Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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DU yes very often, wherever you are, never and sins of the fathers, not lately.

Where is here for you?

Amorous_tryst
Dangerous Mind
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Viddax said:As long a time as that father was a holy mother for the son: none at all. The sins of the parent, never mind being based off a religion wrapped idea that is no longer necessarily relevant, should not reflect on the child as it doesn't take the world's greatest detectives to see that the parent and child are two distinct entities and punishment should be the father/parent if anything to get to the root of the problem.

Do you come here often?


Your answer was enlightening, mine would have been just a short never.

I come here more often than I should, it has become an addiction since I work from home and it's right there, if you're speaking of DU. If you're referring to this forum, not very up to now.

my question will follow Grace's

Amorous_tryst
Dangerous Mind
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Here for me is State side, Indiana, born, raised and stuck.

I do I find it?, turn left at Ohio.

How has being on DU improved your writing?

anonymouslyhere
Pariah Shadow
Dangerous Mind
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It's opened it to critique, I hardly think I'd be as good of a writer as I am (though I'm still not very good) if I never received any constructive criticism.



Do you think you've helped people be a better writer?

Amorous_tryst
Dangerous Mind
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I don't feel I have enough knowledge about writing to be of much assistance to anyone other than possibly passing on things I've been told as to a better way of saying things or structuring.
Having mild OCD, I'm more prone to seeing the misuse of words or lack of punctuation when it is needed to clarify what is being intended. Spelling is high on my list of ways of improving ones writing also and I will bring these matters to their attention if "Honest Critique" if chosen.

Should someone go back a modify a piece, if a critique points out an error in it, even if it is only to show they care that the critiquer took time to point it out?

 

lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
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I think an author should only make a change if (s)he feels it would enhance the poem. critique should maybe be
more suggestive than anything else. sure, spelling could be concrete. punctuation is hit and miss with poets. its become subjective,  a personal preference type thing. terms of changing something out of respect or appreciation of critique, it may prove counterproductive in the long run

when you read the word 'purple' what's the first thing springs to mind

poet Anonymous

Purple rain.... which I can also belt out I’ll have you know.

What about green?

Viddax
Lord Viddax
Guardian of Shadows
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Green for grass and nature. Purple for space and the 'warp': thanks to 40k constantly using purple in pictures of space.

What about yellow and orange?

cold_fusion
Tyrant of Words
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gold and hue, the way i see it. Though will take the golden hue any day.

what about red?

poet Anonymous

Well that’s the colour of lurve. Or blood. This is not coincidental I feel.

What about sky blue polka dot with pink accents?

cold_fusion
Tyrant of Words
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awesome i say... lest they are on fat guy's speedo's

Your answer?

anonymouslyhere
Pariah Shadow
Dangerous Mind
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First thing that comes to mind is a pair of shorts I had when I was eight or so, they were terribly ugly.



What about navy blue and white?

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Our school uniform-blue pinafore and white shirt underneath.

Have you ever thought of going into service when you were growing up?

Umm
Dangerous Mind
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Forum Posts: 2373

honestly, no..never

What do you think about the most?

poet Anonymous

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