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Posted: 17th October 2021 8:07am
geekslutnerdgirl
geekslutnerdgirl
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you can call me a bitch,
but if you do it again
you’re gonna be the one with the hole
where your dick should’ve been.


(3 words over but couldn’t resist)

Posted: 17th October 2021 10:29am
Northern_Soul
Northern_Soul
-Missy-
Tyrant of Words
England 33awards
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geekslutnerdgirl said:rest in pieces,
God is broken

This evoked several emotions in me. Firstly it rips apart the classic saying of ‘rest in peace’ into this state of eternal restlessness. Then to say God is broken as an immortal image that you can rely on sends the shatter of restlessness out into the atmosphere.

Bit of a punch this one, I liked it 👌🏻

Posted: 17th October 2021 9:14pm
Edited: 17th October 2021 9:25pm
rabbitquest
rabbitquest
Dangerous Mind
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Love

Posted: 17th October 2021 9:15pm
Edited: 17th October 2021 9:25pm - edited 3 times
rabbitquest
rabbitquest
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Love Jade

Posted: 17th October 2021 11:07pm
cold_fusion
cold_fusion
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Forum Posts: 5299
rabbitquest said:Love Jade


👏👏👏

Posted: 18th October 2021 3:12am
geekslutnerdgirl
geekslutnerdgirl
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Thank you.

Posted: 18th October 2021 3:13am
geekslutnerdgirl
geekslutnerdgirl
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that’s what accidents are for-
to do things without reason,
    on purpose

Posted: 18th October 2021 3:28am
_feral
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deceit
       
is asking
if serpents
sing.

Posted: 18th October 2021 10:44am
poet Anonymous
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Posted: 18th October 2021 2:47pm
Ely
Ely
E.A.Rothwell
Dangerous Mind
Mexico 6awards
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Why waste words?

Posted: 18th October 2021 9:26pm
poet Anonymous
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Posted: 19th October 2021 1:25am
_feral
_feral
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Related submission no longer exists.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/432765-nascence/

Posted: 19th October 2021 4:25am
Edited: 19th October 2021 11:43pm
cold_fusion
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patience

is sheer respect
ultimately winning
over
absolute rage.






#admiration #respect #rage

Posted: 19th October 2021 3:38pm
_feral
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eyes

two bright
lamps—
    flickering
    moth.

Posted: 19th October 2021 11:51pm
Edited: 19th October 2021 11:51pm
_feral
_feral
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cold_fusion said:

patience

is sheer respect
ultimately winning
over
absolute rage.








#admiration #respect #rage

#winning!

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