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Valeriyabeyond
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SweetKittyCat5 said:You Give Me Fever

Your sweetness is like the coating of honey on my lips  
Ripping my clothes, mouth zooming to the perkiness of my perky nipple tips  
Fever in the absence of light  
Pulling me closer to swim inside my passion in the cloak of midnight  

When your tongue is rolling over my skin mmm…. so right  
Oh, big daddy you know what to do  
To get my butter rum juices raining only for you  
Baring my soul to the tenor of your robust tempo  
Once deep inside me, losing all sight while milking the streams of your pearly flow  
You Give Me Fever  
The flame of your scorching kisses, my heart, my soul to you I lose it

In the height of ecstasy burning me, desires pursuing for your wet gift  
Intellectual loving, when we’re interlocked, the tip of your finger inside me, a silken teaser  
Moaning for you to go deeper, your tantalizing caresses making me a believer  

Oh God you give me fever  
Back arched, pleading, my emotions you’re silently reading  
My emotions following, the maestro of your touches playing the melodies of my body, each cadence, I’m seeping, you’re leading  
Consuming my being, your family jewels, seducing, ravishing the pinkish crown of this Queen  

You Give Me Fever  
My body on fire for you, no medications, no cure  
Needing you deep inside me, hips seesawing, craving the thrusting of your releasing tumultuous pour  
Tasting me, losing myself, in your soul, sizzling
An addict waiting for your manly drizzling  

Legs trapping you to me, my body in a fevered heat  
Tongue dipping inside my ear, whispering, I love it when I make you lose control in my sheets  
Cat scratches to his back, intense passionate bites decorating his skin  
Bringing out the animalistic hunger deemed an illicit sin  
 
He gives me fever, mm… he’s so good to me  
Twist me baby within the cyclone of your weakening appease


SKC
You certainly light the flame in this joint👍🤩

poet Anonymous

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poet Anonymous

Valeriyabeyond said:

Nah nah nah
Ricky was helpful and precise
He let Hannah know exactly what to do
If Hannah were offended she would say this is where we MYOB until something rises

Haha good pun for this thread


Ricky-sJournals said:I didn’t brush no-one off.
Could have been wrote better, but was far from brushing anyone off.

As said, maybe Webmiss can make it simpler for new comers. Like writing “post once in the welcome party and you can post poems straight away” or with what else I wrote.


Bluevelvete said:
Newcomer information was there...
it's gone because Cafe critique is gone /changed and perhaps it's an oversight from Webmiss.
Apologies then, it certainly felt like you weren't helping... my bad and I'm sorry.
Thank you for listening
🌹


I apologized to Ricky further down the thread as indicated above. If you read even further, he acknowledges that he worded his reply to Hannah badly and he addresses my apology as well.


Ricky-sJournals said:Oh, didn’t know that.
Don’t apologise, I should have wrote what I had a bit better.



I normally do mind my own business however, Hannah was brand new to DUP and I didn't want her first encounter with us to leave a bad taste in her mouth, resulting in her leaving. No one helped her answer her questions, so I did.
Ricky, Hannah and I handled any and all miscommunication or misunderstanding and it was completely resolved amicably.
Just FYI
much love,
💜
B

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Valeriyabeyond
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Bluevelvete said:


I normally do mind my own business however, Hannah was brand new to DUP and I didn't want her first encounter with us to leave a bad taste in her mouth, resulting in her leaving. No one helped her answer her questions, so I did.
Ricky, Hannah and I handled any and all miscommunication or misunderstanding and it was completely resolved amicably.
Just FYI
much love,
💜
B


I didn't see your interaction with Ricky until after forgive my intrusion
I feel like his watchdog he is misunderstood by many
Clearly I am the pot calling the kettle black with the MYOB comment ❤️

poet Anonymous

Valeriyabeyond said:

I didn't see your interaction with Ricky until after forgive my intrusion
I feel like his watchdog he is misunderstood by many
Clearly I am the pot calling the kettle black with the MYOB comment ❤️


😘😘😘
No worries at all!
xoxo
💜

Valeriyabeyond
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Taking this baby on a test drive for a new member 💓

arortiz73
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(Removed for improvement)

Valeriyabeyond
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arortiz73 said:Okay, I'll play...

* Hymen-HappyMeal = Hamburglar 'N HotDog Deal *


🕴️I'm the guy with guns and the grill,
George Foreman 💪 I'll fistya F'real🍦🥊
Good girls get to go to hell🔥Hallo Wiener 🙋🌭
Hunde, heel!💞🐩Ha-ha-hymen-HappyMeal =
Hamburglar 'n HOTDOG Deal!🍔🌭
Grab my fire 🥓💥🚀we'll fuck the farewell!
Flame-broil my S-cartel, 🐌 goofy gaga-
eloping snail!💦Grool me, goopy Orajel👄👅
-galloping groom👰🏼🏇 gouda-grate and congeal!🧀
🔪🥘🔥 Dorian😈Ray & AG-Cait💃🏼
kiss-'n-tell👫📸say CHEESE 🖼️ and
take... fate by the wheel! <💏3 🎡

(MTP)
Ray & Cait


Well hell
I'm game
Hold TIGHT brb

Valeriyabeyond
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Feed your fetish
with knotted jute
Flushed red,
pink
Is pink

Slap,
sounding off walls
that sweat
 
Boundaries relaxed
defined,  urgent
within,
their superior
margin.

You butt
against the still
pressure,
to brand me
yours

Slipstream,
   backwash,
       agitate
your potency against
the rubber
stops
that bollard,
my demeanor

Willing to be
willing begins to
work into a lather

Muffle, smother
and strangle
my autonomy
with
your tall
caliber
Of dominance
As I relinquish
to you
subordination


arortiz73
MTP
Fire of Insight
United States 4awards
Joined 24th Sep 2013
Forum Posts: 298

Valeriyabeyond said:
Feed your fetish
with knotted jute
Flushed red,
pink
Is pink

Slap,
sounding off walls
that sweat
 
Boundaries relaxed
defined,  urgent
within,
their superior
margin.

You butt
against the still
pressure,
to brand me
yours

Slipstream,
   backwash,
       agitate
your potency against
the rubber
stops
that bollard,
my demeanor

Willing to be
willing begins to
work into a lather

Muffle, smother
and strangle
my autonomy
with
your tall
caliber
Of dominance
As I relinquish
to you
subordination


Hot Hot Hot! Okay, Here I go!

- SUB Ordained -

Sub ordained, I am your nation
underwater and in your brain.
Ship master of you basin;
umbrella my face-in,
in case it rains!!
Cat 'n mousin'
while on vacation,
festerbation-cravin' strange?
Manual of alter-Caitions,
masturbations cry man-vein!
If you got Slime Under Basin??
Just call me, I'll snake your drain!
({¡})"`'c====3
.,.,.,.({¡}).,.,.,.,  <* ;.d 3

(MTP) Ray  
Master Tasteless Poetaster

arortiz73
MTP
Fire of Insight
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Joined 24th Sep 2013
Forum Posts: 298

(Removed. Made it better.)

Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
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Forum Posts: 2668

arortiz73 said:- SUB Ordained -

Sub ordained, I am your nation
underwater and in your brain.
Ship master of you basin;
umbrella my face-in,
in case it rains!!
Cat 'n mousin'
while on vacation,
festerbation-cravin' strange?
Manual of alter-Caitions,
masturbations cry man-vein!
If you got Slime Under Basin??
Just call me, I'll snake your drain!
({¡})"`'c====3
.,.,.,.({¡}).,.,.,.,  <* ;.d 3

(MTP) Ray  
Master Tasteless Poetaster


Nice very nice

Repost-


Pretty little whore
four on the floor
backdoor
Bang more, hard wood
she's a carnivore

Fishnets, I  adore
bore that cunt  
hardcore

Pretty little  whore
cruel tease abilities
V squeeze
busting arteries
Make me wheeze
no apologies,  anxieties
She's a  sleaze  
Loves to please

 
Pretty little whore
dirty deeds, does excede
feed her greed
proceed ,
milk my seed

Balls in hand, knead
my steed
stampede buried
deep  indeed
Nosebleed

Pretty little whore
four on the floor
Ready for more

arortiz73
MTP
Fire of Insight
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Forum Posts: 298

Hehehe! Thanks!  < ;.D 3

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