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Hannah_Hall
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Thank you so much❤️

Hannah_Hall
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I don't mind anything its fine
Btw thank you Ricky

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Ricky-sJournals said:I didn’t brush no-one off.
Could have been wrote better, but was far from brushing anyone off.

As said, maybe Webmiss can make it simpler for new comers. Like writing “post once in the welcome party and you can post poems straight away” or with what else I wrote.

Newcomer information was there...
it's gone because Cafe critique is gone /changed and perhaps it's an oversight from Webmiss.
Apologies then, it certainly felt like you weren't helping... my bad and I'm sorry.
Thank you for listening
🌹

poet Anonymous

Oh, didn’t know that.
Don’t apologise, I should have wrote what I had a bit better.

And no problem Hannah...enjoy.

Bluevelvete
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His touch is all
she ever wanted to know
"Mine"
is heard, gruffly
as he whispers low

Hannah_Hall
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Yeah it's fine Ricky

SweetKittyCat5
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You Give Me Fever

Your sweetness is like the coating of honey on my lips  
Ripping my clothes, mouth zooming to the perkiness of my perky nipple tips  
Fever in the absence of light  
Pulling me closer to swim inside my passion in the cloak of midnight  

When your tongue is rolling over my skin mmm…. so right  
Oh, big daddy you know what to do  
To get my butter rum juices raining only for you  
Baring my soul to the tenor of your robust tempo  
Once deep inside me, losing all sight while milking the streams of your pearly flow  
You Give Me Fever  
The flame of your scorching kisses, my heart, my soul to you I lose it

In the height of ecstasy burning me, desires pursuing for your wet gift  
Intellectual loving, when we’re interlocked, the tip of your finger inside me, a silken teaser  
Moaning for you to go deeper, your tantalizing caresses making me a believer  

Oh God you give me fever  
Back arched, pleading, my emotions you’re silently reading  
My emotions following, the maestro of your touches playing the melodies of my body, each cadence, I’m seeping, you’re leading  
Consuming my being, your family jewels, seducing, ravishing the pinkish crown of this Queen  

You Give Me Fever  
My body on fire for you, no medications, no cure  
Needing you deep inside me, hips seesawing, craving the thrusting of your releasing tumultuous pour  
Tasting me, losing myself, in your soul, sizzling
An addict waiting for your manly drizzling  

Legs trapping you to me, my body in a fevered heat  
Tongue dipping inside my ear, whispering, I love it when I make you lose control in my sheets  
Cat scratches to his back, intense passionate bites decorating his skin  
Bringing out the animalistic hunger deemed an illicit sin  
 
He gives me fever, mm… he’s so good to me  
Twist me baby within the cyclone of your weakening appease

SweetKittyCat5
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Gratifying droplets felt within the absence of famished desires
Through the fire we befall unto the sweetest asunder of its partaking, surrendering
Discovery of fiery passion we plunge
Sinking into the abyss of rapture we submerge, frolicking in wet pools of ecstasy
Through the fire, scorched sheets of yesterday’s relished serenades, echoes on the wisp of carried winds

Wh1skeySwagger
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Wh1skeySwagger
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Bluevelvete said:

His touch is all
she ever wanted to know
"Mine"
is heard, gruffly
as he whispers low


Nicely done blue

Love it

Wh1skeySwagger
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SweetKittyCat5 said:You Give Me Fever

Your sweetness is like the coating of honey on my lips  
Ripping my clothes, mouth zooming to the perkiness of my perky nipple tips  
Fever in the absence of light  
Pulling me closer to swim inside my passion in the cloak of midnight  

When your tongue is rolling over my skin mmm…. so right  
Oh, big daddy you know what to do  
To get my butter rum juices raining only for you  
Baring my soul to the tenor of your robust tempo  
Once deep inside me, losing all sight while milking the streams of your pearly flow  
You Give Me Fever  
The flame of your scorching kisses, my heart, my soul to you I lose it

In the height of ecstasy burning me, desires pursuing for your wet gift  
Intellectual loving, when we’re interlocked, the tip of your finger inside me, a silken teaser  
Moaning for you to go deeper, your tantalizing caresses making me a believer  

Oh God you give me fever  
Back arched, pleading, my emotions you’re silently reading  
My emotions following, the maestro of your touches playing the melodies of my body, each cadence, I’m seeping, you’re leading  
Consuming my being, your family jewels, seducing, ravishing the pinkish crown of this Queen  

You Give Me Fever  
My body on fire for you, no medications, no cure  
Needing you deep inside me, hips seesawing, craving the thrusting of your releasing tumultuous pour  
Tasting me, losing myself, in your soul, sizzling
An addict waiting for your manly drizzling  

Legs trapping you to me, my body in a fevered heat  
Tongue dipping inside my ear, whispering, I love it when I make you lose control in my sheets  
Cat scratches to his back, intense passionate bites decorating his skin  
Bringing out the animalistic hunger deemed an illicit sin  
 
He gives me fever, mm… he’s so good to me  
Twist me baby within the cyclone of your weakening appease


Just fuckin WOW SKC

Your spills are truly delicious

SweetKittyCat5
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Wh1skeySwagger said:https://soundcloud.com/j-hayes-160725292/kitty-kitty-kitty/s-hLqbZ4WP3bZ



Mm… I’m a tasty cream puff when pursued in making this kitty purr…. meow🐾🐾

SweetKittyCat5
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And thank you my poet👄

Bluevelvete
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Summer

I look down from our second floor bedroom window with my cock in my hand and burn, fucking burn, with desire.
You love the heat. Lie in the sun. On the deck.
A black one piece bathing suit covers your body. And reveals it.
Oil gives your skin an impossibly erotic glow. The sun, like a spotlight, accentuates your sensuality.
Your body, my altar.
Your thighs; thighs that I can grip and lick and caress. Thighs that own me.
Breasts that are confident; bold, beautiful, straining the limts of the bathing suit.
But you are not done.
You lower the straps to exult in the feel of intense heat on your breasts.
Unknown to you, I experience intense heat as I stroke my cock harder; faster.
A shared experience that you are not aware of.
Sweat forms; it trickles down your neck, across your breasts, and pools on your belly.
Your nipples are hard and my dick is throbbing.
I cum.
Wildly, in complete abandon. Looking directly at you as tissue absorbs my cum.
Later we will fuck and you will know why.
You drive me crazy, in innocent or not so innocent moments.
You understand more than I ever will.
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Valeriyabeyond
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Bluevelvete said:

No one asked you to leave Ricky.
However Hannah asked for help and got a brush off by you instead ... that's all.
I simply asked you to be nice to a brand new member here, who was needing help.
*If you would've given her that info about comments... she'd be a leg up already....

Thank you for listening.
🌹


Nah nah nah
Ricky was helpful and precise
He let Hannah know exactly what to do
If Hannah were offended she would say this is where we MYOB until something rises

Haha good pun for this thread

Hi Swagger
She's back and better than ever
Leaving negative energy behind pressing on with a positive note
I will conquer all

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