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KristopherSanders
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This is of my style. Straight and it goes like a drop on the glass to the edge and it causes an itch.

KristopherSanders
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Lingam with inlay divine art in appreciation of Shiva and his Shakti.

KS

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The symbol of truth, purity, creativity and divine bliss.
KS

Bluevelvete
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an unspoken rose


He's sternly
waiting  
  
she's already  
disobeyed  
due to  
her late arrival  
   
Slightly  
shaking  
and noticeably  
rattled  
   
Heightening  
awareness  
of added  
punishment  
when breaking the rules  
   
leaves her heart racing  
   
An air  
of his slight annoyance  
and domineering control  
mixes with  
submissive greed  
and a pinch of fear  
   
B l o s s o m i n g  
gorgeously  
into ardent  
acquiescence  
from  
corporal commands  
   
she  
begs.  
   
pleads.  
   
   
squirms.  
   
   
HE.  
   
IS.  
   
FUCKING.  
   
RELENTLESS.  
   
   
UNYIELDING.  
.  
.  
.  
.  
.  
a  
knowing  
smile.  
   
   
(safely
hides
 away)  
   
   
behind  
the  
taughtness  
   
   
   
   
of her ball gag  
   
   
   
   
   
   
   
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The metaphor of rose is indeed turning point and an expression of submission and acceptance. I never realised that you are a woman with such intensity of passion and quicky sense of tease. You are my amuse.
Love.

KS

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You portray the canvas of the complete act of BDMS. It is not easy to put it in the form of poem. I admire your pesnhip.

KS.

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A beautiful expression is a submission and acceptance by dominance. A woman said, "I take out the art of your dominance with my utmost submission. I wasn't aware of it before her statement. I find the same feeling reading your words. She remained mine for many years, I being unaware of my traits. My brown skin was also her attraction that mesmerized her. I read your words and feel as.if I go through that scene.

KS

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The openness, uninhibited expression with no control and without an iota of judgement is key to a loving, passionate and sexual relationship that is beyond sex. This is what I experienced in my past relationship that was way more than vanilla. This is what you portrayed and at then end a seal of approval.
I hold you in the highest esteem.

Love

KS

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Mmm.
That hidden smile.
Beautifully penned.
❣️🙏🏽

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Kinkpoet said:Mmm.
That hidden smile.
Beautifully penned.
❣️🙏🏽

.... it says much


Thank you, KP
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KristopherSanders said:The openness, uninhibited expression with no control and without an iota of judgement is key to a loving, passionate and sexual relationship that is beyond sex. This is what I experienced in my past relationship that was way more than vanilla. This is what you portrayed and at then end a seal of approval.
I hold you in the highest esteem.

Love

KS


Sending out multiple thank you's for all the very kind comments, KS. You're extremely generous in your time and thought. I'm glad you're enjoying the forum and we're all appreciative for the visits.

*Sometimes hitting 'quote' instead of reply when responding to a particular posting makes it much easier for other readers (and yourself) to see, refer back to and to keep track of what piece it is that you're speaking of, exactly. Especially when you are kind enough to reply multiple times to different postings. I only want make it a better more functional experience for you by helping you streamline your comments, in return making it easier for everyone to read.

Again, thank you for the tremendous support.
-B

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Bluevelvete
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AspergerPoet56 said:devil's
flirtatious
whisper
thrusts
deeply
in

naked
curved
lines
beautifully
expressive
sin

flawless
darkness
embraced
as senses
spontaneously
combust

breathless
unrestrained
passion
luscious
eyes
rolling

rhythmic
soul
sighs
as warm
glows slowly
disapates


Wow, AP... just wow.
x

AspergerPoet56 said:
in
darkened
thoughts
i fiercely
want
you....


and this other poem?!?!... I mean...

Romantically erotic like only you pen!
superb 👌🏻
🌹

Bluevelvete
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Blackdove said:390372-dildo-named-bilbo/[/url]

Blackdove!!!

Welcome back, what a lovely surprise! I'm all smiles to see you 🦋


Hope you're back on DUP in more frequency as you were missed!
🌹 - 💙

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kbridgman27 said:Right on!

Much obliged for the kind words!!
We hope to see more of you.... and perhaps some poetry, too
;p


🌹 - B

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Wh1skeySwagger said:

You know most how much I love this one....
*gulp

Gorgeously crafted visual / poem.
🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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