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JohnnyBlaze
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Ahavati said:Val that is beautiful! Very befitting of the word.

Nimiety ( An Acrostic )

Needed rest and
idle cares are necessary—
maternal levels treasure
intellectual affinities;
earthen pleasures manifest—
tiny flames engulf
young lovers in love.
~

Feeling romantic since Johnny mentioned Byron on the Classic Corner discussion thread!
Been reading him since! LOL!


Now I know who to vote for in the latest Classic Corner poll.


Valeriyabeyond
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Oct. 8, 2020

Valeriyabeyond
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Adust cutis, curls, founders
onto desert  pavement 

Dry-shod and caked 
into a geometric blueprint 

Scrub oak with her crooked
branches, naked and twisted
cry out  to an empty sky

As unforgiveness falls
from the mouth
of the sun

Mistletoe thrives on bits
of life,  she clings to.
Nesting, like an organic
hoi polloi

She seeks silence
In her desolate mind










LunaGreyhawk
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Valeriyabeyond said:Adust cutis, curls, founders
onto desert  pavement 

Dry-shod and caked 
into a geometric blueprint 

Scrub oak with her crooked
branches, naked and twisted
cry out  to an empty sky

As unforgiveness falls
from the mouth
of the sun

Mistletoe thrives on bits
of life,  she clings to
An organic hoi polloi

Desolate, her mind,
Left silent










Wow, V that is beautiful 💜

Valeriyabeyond
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LunaGreyhawk said:

Wow, V that is beautiful 💜


Thank you so much Luna

LunaGreyhawk
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Hoi Polloi

competitive living,
the hunt for the holy grail
is all for show;
everyone is certain
their neighbor has it,
and they covet
to the point
of conspicuous
gluttony

the hoi polloi,
with an inability
to conduct their own
investigations,
jet fueled by Vyvance,
noses to the grind
~fake it til you make it, baby ~
while consuming
Costco cases of wine
and joking about it
on Facebook,
not realizing
 that chronic dis-ease
and irreplaceable moments
are the only prize awarded
for the quest
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Valeriyabeyond
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Hoi Polloi

competitive living,
the hunt for the holy grail
is all for show;
everyone is certain
their neighbor has it,
and they covet
to the point
of conspicuous
gluttony

the hoi polloi,
with an inability
to conduct their own
investigations,
jet fueled by Vyvance,
noses to the grind
~fake it til you make it, baby ~
while consuming
Costco cases of wine
and joking about it
on Facebook,
not realizing
 that chronic dis-ease
and irreplaceable moments
are the only prize awarded
for the quest
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LunaGreyhawk said:


Yes!! Great piece you've built from such an odd word
Bravo Luna

Anarchitect
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[ WotD ] Pay to Play

   
This hoi polloi?    
It's all a decoy---    
a cardboard cutout nimiety    
     
Sans the live fans    
cheering from the stands    
your life's an arena      
empty --- a'void'ing null    
as self-esteem is held hostage
daily; ransom demands    
never paid in full    
     
 
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Valeriyabeyond
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[ WotD ] Pay to Play

   
This hoi polloi?    
It's all a decoy---    
a cardboard cutout nimiety    
     
Sans the live fans    
cheering from the stands    
your life's an arena      
empty --- a'void'ing null    
as self-esteem is held hostage
daily; ransom demands    
never paid in full    
     
 
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Anarchitect said:

Great take on this word Anarchitect
Thank you

Valeriyabeyond
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Oct. 10, 2020

LunaGreyhawk
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Aphrodite, Immortalized

Aphrodite, Immortalized
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Valeriyabeyond
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LunaGreyhawk said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/399261-aphrodite-immortalized/

I absolutely love this
It's as if I were reading
A rare classic
Just beautiful

LunaGreyhawk
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Valeriyabeyond said:

I absolutely love this
It's as if I were reading
A rare classic
Just beautiful


Thank you so much, V 💜

David_Macleod
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Like eburnean
the elephant weeps
it weeps for humanity
it knows their sin
and their pending destruction
it will be unforgettable

poet Anonymous


Enkil & Akasha


In eburnean form
they sit continually still,
seemingly lifeless
turned to stone as centuries spill
until—
The sound of mankind's
wicked evil hate
was enough putrid ire
to rouse them awake,
after years, thousands spanned
it is now —
Enkil and Akasha's
time to rightfully stand,
and hungrily reclaim
their King and Queen's place
(to all mankind's disgrace)
T h e i r 's....
is now
a brand new
Vampire race



*Inspired by Anne Rice's book:
 The Queen of the Damned

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