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Valeriyabeyond
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Valeriya
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dustyJournals said:The time is nearly quarter-past-seven.
Two minutes to be precise, if someone can bother to manage anymore letters.
So is no-one giving me an awkward L?
With poetry and scenes
Hi my names Allen. Welcome to your local job centre, free dirty looks to come enjoy
like could you tell your child to be quiet and not touch that toy. What’s your name?”
“Jumanji shoot angry. You think I like being unemployed, and working at fuck all?
And marbles on a metal line huh?
when he can’t even get a bacterial wipe and clean the electronic device wires.
I won’t kiss but I’ll tell
few people got me feeling like Billy Trotter sometimes
and he’s Del
putting me in a hospital tank room
and sending out that card saying
“quicker be well”
Anyway, not having slept or eaten
and my testicles in both boots
to keep them really warm
if you’re hearing me
and all he can say is
“Like you, I’m not dodgy. your problem is, Rodney, you take things too seriously.”
Then Allen said
“Drink this like some Smith gin
it will be a big calamity like a smidgen
With an alligator will you might go swimming?”
Then he just started bopping his head like a pigeon
flying off like one after


Snap back to reality
It’s nineteen seconds before twenty three years
I’m not sure, can you get it?
This twenty four hour clock is weird
Told my momma butterfly
I’m one and all free
Won’t return and really attack
although badly she had my nails filed
Continued to take tests
and failed bile
like I told Shawty
before going back to the future on my train
I would have derailed vile


Gawd Ricky
I dig this spill

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Thanks.
I think it looks trash, but when writing it, I had an unexplainable feeling lol

Valeriyabeyond
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dustyJournals said:Thanks.
I think it looks trash, but when writing it, I had an unexplainable feeling lol


Your talent is unique
It is personally you
It has the flavor of some pro writers but it is distinctly yours

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Valeriyabeyond said:

Your talent is unique
It is personally you
It has the flavor of some pro writers but it is distinctly yours


Just something quick I wrote on the phone, as I was walking around tidying up.
I’ll give you my definitive break down of it;

* Got an old Jumanji video sitting on the window-sill.
* Wiping down the electronic wires, and watching “The Ring” movie, seeing that boy playing with that toy lol.
* The OFAH reference to the tank room, was like my online “brother from another mother” - stranger, poet, poking fun and neither getting straight to the point about a situation when knowing the truth; to then joking about “taking things too seriously” when he knew the Blossom character was lying about rape, because it was her “hobby”. Not interfering I raped anyone in the context of what I wrote in the poem, just those not online but others in real life who do some real shady shit and then pure try to get out of it, when the facts are right in front of them. It’s sad. They will not own up to it.
*  With the snap back to reality, I originally was gonna do a parody flow of lose yourself, but than looked at the time and moved onto that lol.
*  Inspiration about the butterfly, was from someone’s DU username obviously. Well, to me anyway. A thumbs up for the going back and forth.
*  Last part of the poem, a random scene from the Back to the Future film just popped in my head out of nowhere.

Job centre thing, was watching a YouTube thing about the unemployment soaring.
Maybe people are becoming more friendlier in there, I don’t know. Haven’t been in there for 92 years; spin the number around and that’s how long this writer has not been working for lol.

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“No-one’s diary: Saturday, 19th December, 2020”

It’s now twelve-twenty five.
Yes, that’s the time as well as the price for the packet of gobstoppers to make
myself come alive, on the bare lines
on the Deep Underground Poetry site
But I’m writing some references
from Only Fools and Horses:
If they could see us now
And for the title I’ll get it in
“Only Drool is Pouring: If only I could keep it down”
Wasn’t at all expecting Damien
would have come and started thumping me
while I was eating a slice pizza
and talking about running a company
Had lost the knife, so I stabbed him with a fork
said here’s your platform against me
seeing yourself on the floor
I’ll win the acting award
so I said “Get up Harris, you dork!
What have you got in your right hand?!”
He struggled but said before dying
“What was on the side of the van?!
Peckham, Paris, New York.”


Twenty-minutes until one
so I’m one against twenty minutes
because I’m gonna have to meet myself
and for whole minute wait until another one comes being two, get it?
Their Matrix image is wrong
I am a horse
with a bow on a violin
maybe not timeless would become this song
So a bow, with a pouch of arrows
and they say something’s wrong with my mind
just take a look at my eyes
they’re too far apart for someone to be in their right mind
But as you see, a few would have trespassed
and I would not have taken that bow
I mean, kneeling on one knee
I’m returning to my YouTube video
and finishing Carry on Camping is what it could be

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Everyone have a great night or day and do have fun tonight.

Wrote two new poems "Madam President, Regret of Men and Women."

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Were you shaking.  

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