Your talent is unique
It is personally you
It has the flavor of some pro writers but it is distinctly yours
Just something quick I wrote on the phone, as I was walking around tidying up.
I’ll give you my definitive break down of it;
* Got an old Jumanji video sitting on the window-sill.
* Wiping down the electronic wires, and watching “The Ring” movie, seeing that boy playing with that toy lol.
* The OFAH reference to the tank room, was like my online “brother from another mother” - stranger, poet, poking fun and neither getting straight to the point about a situation when knowing the truth; to then joking about “taking things too seriously” when he knew the Blossom character was lying about rape, because it was her “hobby”. Not interfering I raped anyone in the context of what I wrote in the poem, just those not online but others in real life who do some real shady shit and then pure try to get out of it, when the facts are right in front of them. It’s sad. They will not own up to it.
* With the snap back to reality, I originally was gonna do a parody flow of lose yourself, but than looked at the time and moved onto that lol.
* Inspiration about the butterfly, was from someone’s DU username obviously. Well, to me anyway. A thumbs up for the going back and forth.
* Last part of the poem, a random scene from the Back to the Future film just popped in my head out of nowhere.
Job centre thing, was watching a YouTube thing about the unemployment soaring.
Maybe people are becoming more friendlier in there, I don’t know. Haven’t been in there for 92 years; spin the number around and that’s how long this writer has not been working for lol.
“No-one’s diary: Saturday, 19th December, 2020”
It’s now twelve-twenty five.
Yes, that’s the time as well as the price for the packet of gobstoppers to make
myself come alive, on the bare lines
on the Deep Underground Poetry site
But I’m writing some references
from Only Fools and Horses:
If they could see us now
And for the title I’ll get it in
“Only Drool is Pouring: If only I could keep it down”
Wasn’t at all expecting Damien
would have come and started thumping me
while I was eating a slice pizza
and talking about running a company
Had lost the knife, so I stabbed him with a fork
said here’s your platform against me
seeing yourself on the floor
I’ll win the acting award
so I said “Get up Harris, you dork!
What have you got in your right hand?!”
He struggled but said before dying
“What was on the side of the van?!
Peckham, Paris, New York.”
Twenty-minutes until one
so I’m one against twenty minutes
because I’m gonna have to meet myself
and for whole minute wait until another one comes being two, get it?
Their Matrix image is wrong
I am a horse
with a bow on a violin
maybe not timeless would become this song
So a bow, with a pouch of arrows
and they say something’s wrong with my mind
just take a look at my eyes
they’re too far apart for someone to be in their right mind
But as you see, a few would have trespassed
and I would not have taken that bow
I mean, kneeling on one knee
I’m returning to my YouTube video
and finishing Carry on Camping is what it could be