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Too forward
like I thought humans were simple  and aren’t backwards
but which way is everyones head going
when “heads up” is shouted?
I may have not touched upon some originality
and I mean drawing and colouring
that yellow school bus
for Trish’s air freshener in Jeepers Creepers
Who else on the planet thought to do that?
Now for Liam, in some angels arms I hope they keep him tight
and hope he didn’t commit suicide
over some pussy on the DU site
Who do I have in mind mostly when writing these lines?
Give me time, I’d mirror their style
because the “bobble head” was inspired by an outlaw called Jade
And Ricky fears only not trying, how hard would it be for them to
repeat that all day?
I’m no tiger, just a fool
who’s got his back to one of those
while a six foot suction hole follows me behind

the5thRiddler
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Dear, God

Some day when I leave the DU
my last message for everyone would have been
thanks for inspiring me
People were their own masters at the game they weren’t playing
Was a lover, reminiscing on memories
to become a hater they couldn’t see
I won’t forget
I wasn’t praised enough for being an asshole in an angry poem
or more to the truth, I wasn’t praised at all
It’s either, they knew they’d be fucking slaughtered
or I am just really a big softy
I just can’t jump under every poem
because if it doesn’t move me it doesn’t move me
I’m sure they feel the same
Of course they wouldn’t want me to feel good about it
just myself against their whole clique to get whatever they wanted about me off their chest
I’d take every fucker on at once

# people don’t like inspiring others

the5thRiddler
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Queen Elizabeth’s Speech


I told Ricky that he was corny
and he’d be in his grave before me
All because of these jewels and gold
sitting on my seat
telling people they should live within in their means
So that hate tells me
they haven’t enough brain power to become as wealthy
He won’t like or buy my naked pictures
so I can’t admire a perverts verse
People only hated Hitler because they’d never be able to pull
in a whole nation to do their dirty work
Now it’s only funny if you’re honest
that’s why you can’t get close to have my body chalked around
I know you ought to shout
that I have no idea what I’m talking bout
Same goes for you in a fucking wheelchair
in this room
and telling me you’re walking out

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Everyone does want to be heard
like Royce da 5’9” says “Real G’s move in silence.”
Not sure why then he’s still distributing albums
Doesn’t make you smart
because you’re wearing glasses
Who am I though to have an opinion
because what have I achieved?
Isn’t hard to see him and Marshall go at each other in their flow
On the “All I Think About” song
Royce says he just kicked a chair away
because what did Eminem do in the Not Afraid video? Push one?
Sure, that was funny
but defeat Royce also has to suck it in
because if he isn’t sucking dick
Why’s he always sat with puckered lips?
But it’s what they’re like, that’s real friendship
and has nothing at all to do with business

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I once put a Facebook status up saying
“when life gets you down, have a chocolate biscuit”
Few weeks later, I should have took my own advice and not left two comments
Another status
and one replying with laughter
until I caused an argument by saying “its the only one left, and I’m not giving you that one.”

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Shop keepers do look at the money in your hand and test you
The shop round the corner
I went in with 5.70 exactly
I wanted five-pound top-up credit
and bought a small sugar with 60p wrote on the top of it
Got to the counter and he said “Five pound sixty one”
One of those moments where I gave it all over and said keep the change
because I’m neither poor
and your family in Pakistan obviously need it more
I don’t at all go in there anymore
over blatant bullshit
And no I sure as fuck won’t move out the cue
I’m counting the change
because although I held the twenty pound note up to the light before leaving
the cashier is having a problem
at myself thinking him untrustworthy

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the5thRiddler said:*post removed for them easily offended.

I am offended that you removed this
now what am I to do
to get my triggered snow flake on

Ah fuck the lot of yas
My dick gets offended and vomits in dark crevasses

Sky_dancer
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I should rename this thread, "If you're manic and you know it clap your hands!"

the5thRiddler
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Thanks for the inbox message Eamon
Still laughing and I sure as hell got some inspiration from it

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Am I bothered about the opinions? No
I’m patient and his time will come
Might be considered a monster in the process of mentally fighting one
but he took it a step further and
physically attacked me at my most vulnerable and kept at it
I’m not walking away

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Sky_dancer said:I should rename this thread, "If you're manic and you know it clap your hands!"

oooooooooooor the

5thRiddler's revenge!  

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