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Words Are Weapons

UndergroundOverALL
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 22nd June 2017
Forum Posts: 20

So I saw a recent post in the competition section that asks to use certain words- only after writing it I noticed it was already closed so I would like to share it here... the words it asked to create the poem with are as follows...

Audience  
Horseback  
Canyon
Error  
Wearable
Hearse  
According
Flamethrower


To the audience I can be a ventriloquist...
Guiding your thoughts through emotions abyss...
Awoken by this- spiritual sought pretense
Where thoughts deepen-
Look in the sky and stare at the stars-
I... Search for answers... like I already know what they are-
You; learn that the cancers send you from earth to the stars...
Deaths decay....  through heavens "Space"
In the outer limits horseback riding with four horseman
The doors open- I exit through a force coursing
Through mortal sources- focused, openly
Forming poetry- into imaginary canyons
Established on a plateau; glancing at the phantoms.
Found wisdom through error...  systems and variables
There are things you can inherit that aren't wearable...
Prepare for truths before you decay in the dirt...
I've had cravings to lay in a hearse...
But I would rather relay a report, being
More than just a label of sorts, displayed through the force that is forcing
My third eye to open, foreseeing a source of four things...
What I think, what I know, what I will, and according
To my deepest thought... I don't short change my days order...
But I pray for the day I can be another day older....
If words are weapons I'm an ordained flamethrower...
Life is a short game start playing then game over....

SamiBmuse
Thought Provoker
United Kingdom
Joined 9th July 2017
Forum Posts: 63

I am no expert, but i really like this, the way you have managed to get all the words in the poem. I like the flow of the poem to, more like a rap! very cool, i applaud you sir.... bravo

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