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Comment your favorite poem, the one you are most proud of...
Read one of the already posted, for balance's shake
Feel free to twist the thread in any way but for the cause of helping each other to become better and more inspired
Love to you all
Let me see your treasures kept in darkness
Read one of the already posted, for balance's shake
Feel free to twist the thread in any way but for the cause of helping each other to become better and more inspired
Love to you all
Let me see your treasures kept in darkness
I'm asuming you're asking for the link... Yes?
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/236852-grow-up-kid/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/236852-grow-up-kid/
Yes, thanks you!
Wow, that was dark and intense... Love showing the devil within all of us? Love turn into hate...Scared to love and terrified to go back? The darkness in soul covers up our real needs ...disappointment triggers it?....just thoughts
Wow, that was dark and intense... Love showing the devil within all of us? Love turn into hate...Scared to love and terrified to go back? The darkness in soul covers up our real needs ...disappointment triggers it?....just thoughts
personanongrata said:all right that's mine
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/253940-angel-guide/
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The thing that catches me everytime I read that piece. Is you want to correct the language in it. You want to say how can it be "to much less" snd tore not tared and then you read it over and over and realise how it's like that purposefully and then it's just a whole angelic beem. That last line " reunite" you know I think I'll take your advice!
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https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/253940-angel-guide/
Lets see more
The thing that catches me everytime I read that piece. Is you want to correct the language in it. You want to say how can it be "to much less" snd tore not tared and then you read it over and over and realise how it's like that purposefully and then it's just a whole angelic beem. That last line " reunite" you know I think I'll take your advice!
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Anonymous
Saw the post in the Facebook group, so came to support your thread. 
I do love this one: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/249592-the-company-of-absence/
PersonaNonGrata - Firstly, hello, don't think I've said that before. Great user name by the way. I used to have this phrase on my profile. It summarised me very well for quite a while.
In terms of your poem, y'know for someone who's first language isn't English, I appreciate this piece. The idea of omens and observation is something I'm very passionate about. The Universe is talking to us all the time if we are ready to listen. I think this poem shows that you are.
Blue Skies - I don't remember reading this one for some reason, but it's the most passive-aggressive little gem I've read in ages and I totally love that about it. I can genuinely imagine you saying this one out loud. The form is spot on. Excellent read.
I do love this one: https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/249592-the-company-of-absence/
PersonaNonGrata - Firstly, hello, don't think I've said that before. Great user name by the way. I used to have this phrase on my profile. It summarised me very well for quite a while.
In terms of your poem, y'know for someone who's first language isn't English, I appreciate this piece. The idea of omens and observation is something I'm very passionate about. The Universe is talking to us all the time if we are ready to listen. I think this poem shows that you are.
Blue Skies - I don't remember reading this one for some reason, but it's the most passive-aggressive little gem I've read in ages and I totally love that about it. I can genuinely imagine you saying this one out loud. The form is spot on. Excellent read.
Hey Missy thanks for dropping by.
Loved your piece, as said.
Give m your another favorite if u want.
I had a hard time to decide my own..I appreciate your kind words.
The truth is I cant speak fluently, but many times I find myself thinking in English!
Loved your piece, as said.
Give m your another favorite if u want.
I had a hard time to decide my own..I appreciate your kind words.
The truth is I cant speak fluently, but many times I find myself thinking in English!
