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Dangerous Mind
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& i put dis on "Where Do I Belong" by Blackwolf....

i like da things u jus described
but i dont think u r lookn 2 belong 2 a group or a tribe
u spoke about da individuals curse
it jus exists freely...it cant b rehursed
bcuz Life jus cums as we c it
& God wont do 4 us wut we can do 4 self so so b it
all we can do is simply giv da effort...jus try
da effort alone wil reduce many tears from da eye

poet Anonymous

Tender and so very beautiful Alip..like angel wings brushing across the page..peace Crim


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lepperochan
lepperochan
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Guardian of Shadows
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where that go?

poet Anonymous

From Miss_Sub
"This actually made me cry a little. The time we have is so precious. All we want for our children is for them to not make the mistakes we did in life.

Beautiful. A chronic reminder of the fragile state of human life. I hope your daughters have the life you wish for them."


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poet Anonymous

AliP said:From Miss_Sub
"This actually made me cry a little.


Well. I never made a comment I didn't mean

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Alistair Plint
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South Africa
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No Ordinary Day

 
One day  
the sadness came
and it never went away
An understanding
we all have to die
and that meant everyone
and maybe everything  
in the whole world  
would leave one day too
Mother  
father
family and friends
kittens and dogs
and wishes and dreams
even the five year old boy
with a grubby tear in his eye
holding back in the playground line
waiting  
to bat out his turn
Written by Abracadabra
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It was No Ordinary Day!
It was a hilarious special day!




An interaction of comments,  I'll hold dear forever!

poet Anonymous

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Wafflenose
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Ellie
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United Kingdom
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Lol @ reviving an 11 year old thread! It's a nice one though.

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