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DISNEY VILLAIN BLACK METAL

HadesRising
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Poetry Contest

Black Metal poetry tribute to a Disney villain
Who are your favorite Disney villains? Let me know in Black Metal (Cradle of Filth, Dimmu Borgir, Behemoth etc.) style poetry. Raise your horns and own the night.

TWO WEEKS

NEW WRITES

NO COLLABS

MAX OF THREE POEMS PER POET

EDIT YOUR WORK

STRUCTURE YOUR WORK

GET TO IT


HadesRising
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bump

mysteriouslady
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I shall return! GREAT subject by the way <3

HadesRising
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awsome! can't wait

dejure
vick
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Maleficent

 
unkindness of ravens
drawing the omens  
on the pink canvas
in the evening sky

melodic caws chanting
while clouds growl
silver bolts draw lines
connecting all together

being carried hidden
inside the ravens
she was revealed
once her foot emerged
from the flock

the stunning silhouette
shadowed across the hall
from the lightning
flashed through the glass

magnificent, she was
Maleficent she is

her shadow followed
leaving the crawling
creatures of the night
behind her

magnificent, she was
Maleficent she is

the smoke from
all the lanterns
gathered below her
misting up the
atmosphere

(prophecies were given
prophecies gone
sweet Aurora
about to be born)

she slid on the smoke
like a ghost in the snow
thrusting the mist
with green eyes
burning bright

should she curse?
should she bless?
should she reverse
all of his wish?

magnificent, she was
Maleficent she is

a knock from her staff
clouds cleared the sky
ravens calmed night
not a pin point sound
she inhaled all the silence

(the cry of a new born)





 
Written by dejure (vick)
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archetype23
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THE WICKEDEST BITCH

Mirror mirror, sticking on the wall
Who's the hottest slickest chick to court them all
Who's the sexiest whore behind the door
Who keeps them coming back for more?

Snow White!  Snow White!  SNOW WHITE!!!!
"AAAHHHHH!!!!"

Just lace a ruby red with hypnol
watch her fall to the floor like a pretty rag doll
no one would ever suspect anything at all
Prepare the purest fruit for her fatal fall

Snow White!  Snow White!  SNOW WHITE!!!!
"AAAHHHH!!!!"

----Nobody's stepping in-
    ----TO HIDE HER!
----She's never gonna be-
    ----MUCH TIGHTER!
----They're all lined up taking turns
    ----TO RIDE HER!
----She's got seven midget dicks
    ----INSIDE HER!

Snow White!  Snow White!  SNOW WHITE!!!!
"AAAHHHH!!!!"

Passed out virgin upon the floor
awoken in the morning a newly born whore
A flesh jacket worn by a room full of scorn
Unspoken token of broken purity torn

Snow  White!  Snow White!  SNOW WHITE!!!!
"AAAHHHH!!!!"

Now blinded mirror on the wall
after seeing the sweetest snowflake fall
from the wickedest witch to cause it all
Whose the sexiest bitch of them all

Snow White!  Snow White!  SNOW WHITE!!!!
"AAAHHHH!!!!"

Spanking smooth white flesh with black leather to bind her
All innocence left alone crying behind her
demanding pleasurable pain within an insatiable hollar
all waiting in chains for princess prisoner's collar

Snow White!  Snow White!  SNOW WHITE!!!!
"AAAHHHH!!!!"
Written by archetype23
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mysteriouslady
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Cruelness Divine

Evil speeds through my veins
I breathe death and decay
all with spots are my prey

I need over 100
for the perfect fitting skin
let this dance of death begin

With a fag in one hand
and a blade in the other
shall I slice, dice or maybe smother?

Run if you will, here I come
Making my wicked stride
cant wait to rip off your fabulous hide!

Your screams delight me
with every morbid tare
I will get every last little hair

Carcasses crawling with maggots
Ive gotten all I need
Oh how I love to watch them all bleed

My work of art is totally done
a matching hat makes it complete
earrings out of claws, a necklace made of teeth

I saved their insides for last
my special fabulous feast
they are delicious, to say the very least!

























HadesRising
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wow! Great stuff, everyone! Keep them coming!

Jadedembers
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Related submission no longer exists.

HadesRising
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so, there we have it. I must say that you all did a kick ass job but there could be only one. After careful deliberation, with my inner demons, I chose the one that seemed the most like a black metal song. I decided not to award runner-ups since I believe singling out two more entries out of three would have been unfair since I believe everyone deserves a trophy. Well done, all!

dejure
vick
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Congratulations Myss!!!!!
black spots on black :)

mysteriouslady
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Wow!  Im honored thanks!  <3  

archetype23
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Kick ass metal, mysterious lady. And kick-ass competition, Hades Rising.

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