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runaway-mindtrain
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solar eclipse / space inspired

gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
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Joined 6th Mar 2014
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Poetry Contest

see below
please submit a  poem or 2 about the eclipse or other space phenomenon.

rules:
new or old
Max 2 per poet
no collabs
recordings accepted (provide youtube link)
may be open to a vote depending on level of response
have fun and be creative!

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runaway-mindtrain
Dangerous Mind
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the eden geometry

Deep rift from the center of space  
The cross of Henday, the axis displaced  
Procession of equinox the long year count  
Peruvian caves hidden refuge under mount...
 
Fulcanelli and the Gothic cathedrals divine  
Alchemical wedding, the hermetic intertwine  
"Nature renewed in fire", the Latin scribe the age  
Biblical revelation, cosmic writing the page...
 
Iridium dust to flow from the angry sun mentor  
Earthen conjunction with milky way center  
Axis on right angles and resolution of time  
Judgement to the soul to drink the heavenly wine...
 
Earth, Water, Air and Fire...
Aquarian age water bearer rising  
Zodiac points to form the cardinal line  
The spirit to fly, the soul to shine...
 
Winter solstice, the galactic alignment  
Ancient sage speaks historical refinement  
The point of consciousness, to rapture the tree  
Rosy cross the Christ, all men on bended knee...
 
The only hope dispensation from time of the fish  
Horus and Isis union to bring the future wish  
Seek the math of Kabbalah, the Eden geometry  
Release the grain of the mind, the mental astronomy...
 
The warning of temples built to worship the sun  
Show hidden equalization, communion with the son...
Written by runaway-mindtrain
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gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
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Dope ink mindtrain! thanks for starting us off with a big bang! :P

Canullia
canulliaqt
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Joined 18th Mar 2017
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Beukez
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 20th Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 78

One with the sun

watching from afar
moving outwards in space
world entombed by our star
this is our planets fate

come back to being
one with the sun
return to the beginning
chemical bonds are undone

we melt in the sun
everything is lost
our hopes and dreams
nothing more than dust

nothing more than dust (we are)
nothing more than dust (we become)
Nothing more than dust (we are)
nothing more than dust
Written by Beukez
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Beukez
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 20th Mar 2013
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The veil

Watching the swirling slow motion movement of the stars at night.
When i have a moment a chance to glance at space and time.

Dragged through a vision of a cosmic history and unbelievable time travel,
the moment, i stare up and the light touches my eye.

One star, in the lonely darkness of the night sky  
Reaches or reached out a millennia ago to meet itself in another time, it millions of years ago...

Reached out into the dark of the abyss and searched for life
The veil seems a little broken, tattered tonight. Maybe i've lost my mind...

poet Anonymous

gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
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Beukez and doggerelsheets thank you both for your excellent entries!

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dachaoticmind
gffxgfcvkjkh
Lost Thinker
Joined 31st Aug 2017
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dejure
vick
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 17th Aug 2015
Forum Posts: 2879

Shooting Stars

 


we are the
constellation
stronger than
the Orion’s belt

riding the bears
thrusting the
celestial sphere

just you and me

let’s dance in the
meteor showers
over the rings
of Saturn

a walk along
the milky way
hand in hand

shoot ourselves
across the galaxy
and wish upon
ourselves

you upon me
I upon you

and let them
wish upon us


Written by dejure (vick)
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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

Can You Cry in Space

 
Once you venture into the jar      
there's no place left to go      
as planets recede into dark matter.

Light years close in on me.
Every vein restricts, the heart
beats backwards, hair snaking

choking, floating beads of tears
quivering in the vacuum
reflected in visor and iris,

as eyes bulge and bleed,
turning to ruby gems,
sharp-angled

threading with my tears,
coiling around my neck and hands,
trying to fend them off.

Am I in a clinical waiting room
in a hell adrift, which has already
seen and been the death of me.

Through a portal, solar flares
rotating as the capsule
slowly tumbles, baseless.

As horizons slip away,
the only sound left:
the broken static from Houston.  
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 9th Nov 2015
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Escape from Planet Microverse

Its porous surface of all-seeing eyes  
with volcanic sties at polar ends,  
 
from the erratic tug of satellites that scan  
across the static of elliptical rings,  
 
when spirit had released its  
circle into a sea of impetus--  
 
the will of force, to start and end  
a journey past, and then begin again.  
 
Traditional spells aside,  
with much to abort and to abide,  
 
to assuage the widow moon's bridge-keeper  
with bribes of all that you promised her,  
 
Lest you wade the murky depths in the  
guise of an albino salamander,  
 
avoiding consumption while traversing  
the oily maze of surface fires  
 
that block the way, and flotillas of  
man-o-war jellyfish,  
 
their tentacles rife with voltage  
to your slithering genitalia.  
 
And from the mantle of your blindness  
you sense amid the current  
 
a jagged danger on the far side  
where brittle struts from bone of baleen  
 
threaten to sabotage the integrity  
of your shape-shifting escape.  
 
Little-known the consequences.  
No book of shadows to guide us,  
 
nor the written divination of runes, or  
reed scriptures from the after world.  
 
The encryption simply reads that  
there is nothing more, once it is begun.  
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
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My thanks to you, host Brad, for the opportunity, and for the runner-up slot, and my congratulations to mindtrain & Beukez!

gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
United States 6awards
Joined 6th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 372

Jade-Pandora said:My thanks to you, host Brad, for the opportunity, and for the runner-up slot, and my congratulations to mindtrain & Beukez!

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