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Serial Killer

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David_Macleod
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Poetry Contest

write from the POV of a serial killer
I want you to write with the mind of a serial killer
I want you to tell me what you do and why

New writes only
any length
any genre
yes to collabs
can be serious or fun

Three weeks only

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Zazzles
Broom
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I will try and get back to this tomorrow David
Great idea!!🦊
Zazzles

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David_Macleod
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Zazzles said:I will try and get back to this tomorrow David
Great idea!!🦊
Zazzles


thank you sweetie I have missed your poems :-(

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Phoenix_Risen
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Judgement

I find my purpose in you
My first
Your blood tells a story

A tale of my own
The world must know
That judgment falls

Gods hand I have become
A holy burden
For me alone

Weakness
Evil
Insanity

All must be purged
My blade
Consecrated, blessed

My mission
To bear the light of truth
My willingness

Undeniable
Let the world bleed
As I exact judgment

The heavens rejoice
In the cleansing fire
This razor

Seeks the truth
These hands
Guided by fate

Shape the world
Your blood
Brings renewal

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FromTheAsh
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another one for the pile

for hours Iíve been watching you
stalking your every move
just waiting
biding my time
until you approach
where your eyes are clear
youíre that close
youíre not the first
Iíve already made many pursuits
but this time itís all about you
and I never miss
my prey always goes down
when I set my sights
breath catches in throat
pulse increases a notch
muscles tighten
my trap has been set
and you walk right in
no cover of darkness to hide me
tracking in daylight excites me
in moments youíll lay
your corpse curled at my feet
until I finish the deed
and toss you in with the others
all dangly legs
and stiffened bodies
you were warned
but you didnít listen
so boldly you creep
where my weapon can reach
and SWAT!
another spider in the pot

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Zazzles
Broom
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Among The Leaves

 
 
That day I saw her body † † † † † † † †
laying dead among some leaves † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
so weird to see this woman † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
who looks a lot like me. † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
I closed my eyes and rubbed them † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
I was sure this wasn't real † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
I then reached out to touch her † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
her pain has never healed. † † † † † † † † † † †  
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
I saw into her anguished eyes † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
she wanted me to see, † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
the brutal way he took her life † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
right there in front of me. † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
I heard the cold wind crackle † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
as I fell upon those leaves † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
I had fallen down beside her † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
screaming bizarre obscenities † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
At the same; † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
A quiet man stumbles † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
as he gets up on his feet † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
he begins his daily walk † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
down a crowded lonely street † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
Clad in his broken work boots † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
and a pair of filthy jeans † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
a smelly shirt a dusty hat † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
he conjures endlessly † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
He thinks about the day ahead † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
and the task he must complete † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
he knows that time is running out † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
he must remain discreet † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
Meanwhile; † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
On the ground I backed away † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
I did not want to know † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
where this woman came from † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
But knew I had to go. † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
I saw him from a distance † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
but approaching nonetheless † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
I had to leave just disappear † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
I knew I could be next † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
That man he did not see me † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
I was behind a hollowed tree † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
he hurried through some mossy grass † † † † † † † † † † † † †
then upon those fallen leaves. † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
So there I was † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † †and there he stood † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
I went insane † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † †he knew I would † † † † † † † † †
out came my gun † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † one to the head † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
I shot him twice † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † now he lays dead. † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
And there she was alone again † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
laying dead among the leaves † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
If I wasn't there to see it † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
I would never have believed † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
†† † † † † † † † † † † † † † †  
I knew just where to find him † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
and for that I eat my pie † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
I killed the man who killed me † † † † † † † † † † † † † † †
so for now I'm still alive... † † † † † †

Copyright © 2012 Maureen Doucette† † † † †
All rights reserved. †
Written by Zazzles (Broom)
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Zazzles
Broom
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Whoops! David,  you said new only, sorry i take back my entry...
I'll see what i can come up with something new...
loves you Bro xo

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David_Macleod
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Zazzles said:Whoops! David,  you said new only, sorry i take back my entry...
I'll see what i can come up with something new...
loves you Bro xo


don't take it back you can submit more than 1 - I really enjoyed that a lot :-)

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thank you Phoenix_Risen, FromTheAsh and Zazzles three excellent entries to kick things off

I am so impressed :-)

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scratchme13
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soon they will all bear witness to such tranquil design
this serenity shall dictate the hour of reckoning

Oh Diana

if only you were here to whitnes how far I've exceeded the repetition
how true I have remained to your instruction
your direction

Oh Diana

her eyes are under the crawl space
she didn't understand how to listen
not like you

she didn't know how to follow direction
it was just this once I have found reincarnation through living exalted eyes

Oh Diana

i didn't make mess of the linen
the bathroom or your room
I used 10mm plastic across the hall and over the walls
soon we shall
cleanse
shave
strip
ourselves clean of this humanity

sweet sister
i can loosen up the knot
i may even let you speak
promise not to yell at me
this will be our last piece
our last sculpture
our final dinner

Oh Diana
silly sister

not this female face do I compare to you
not a single note rings forth for this soulless heart

there's too much blood
we wouldn't want them to think we have poor taste
now do we

it took so long to get these arms to rise just right
it took hours to realize how quickly one must move to break the bones just right before rigor mortis sets in

Oh Diana

the post holes are filled with the butchered unnecessary
I saved the delicacies for our special dinner
the concrete has set
i will be building the deck tomorrow

shush sweet sister
i promised anesthesia
i only need one of those precious pupils
consider it reward to not have to glance upon this twisted
unclean society

Oh Diana

the anticipation for the final moment of our masterpiece
Severed limbs from perfect calamities
making a most exquisite anti- Christ demi-God
this last step
last stitch gives way to your sight

Oh sweet Diana

I hope you can see the chaos through her eyes

I hope you can once again feel my love



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Grackle
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Empty puzzle pieces cloaked by an image,
Mimicking the full puzzles of society, maybe i'll feel a bit then,
Shallow emotions flutter throughout my being,
Showing everything that possesses absolutely no meaning.

Plastered smiles and warm eyes,
Manipulating the world with my horrible lies,
Convincing her that everything was real,
Barbed intentions cloaked by disarming grins,
Slow acting poison that latches onto the psyche,
When nothing but murderous intentions boil in my head,
All i want is her dead.

She sees the signs, slowly as she sinks further into the ground,
Away from the heavens, where her delusions of paradise are found.

People are so damn easy to fool,
With their absolute ignorance that is almost cruel,
As I orchestrate the concert from behind,
The blood rushes around in my ears,
As anticipation for the next phase comes near.

Her dark curls fan out around her, stark against the pale background of the snow. She stares blankly up at my face, the perfect picture of innocence.

A whisper floated from my space on the stage,
One that would set people into a panicked rage,
As blood drips from my hands, ruining the purity of the snow.

ďDon't you know, everyone is not as they seem?"

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HoldMyHand
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Constant nagging, eating at my brain
Chaotic voices driving me insane
Memories of countless beatings
Fathers face, always repeating
Even in my sleep I cant unwind
Ohhh but let me tell you, the one cure I did find

My only solace comes from giving
Exactly what the child in me kept receiving
As my fist crashes into his face
And as I hear his heartbeat race
I know he soon will be dead
And then, only in that moment silence for my head
As I watch the glimmer from his eyes go away
I know that today will be a happy day
I unload my torture onto him
As I catch it all on film
My trophy to re watch and feel
The only peace I know to be real

Ahh sweet silence inside my brain
As I stare at this corpse with no name
The sweet metallic taste of his blood comes to mind
I finally can sleep, finally unwind
New memories take over the old
I am the victor, I am bold
My father could never touch me now
Forget that, let me tell you how
How victorious I was this time
In acting out this delicious crime  

I found this man in need of a friend
So I started the beginning to his end
I have waited countless days, months for his trust
Only to return his body to the dust
I burned him once for every burn from dear dad
I stabbed away every way with me he had
I beat him in ways father could have never thought up
That makes me the winner of the cup
I am more man than he ever was
And now I must go and enjoy this buzz


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Zazzles
Broom
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David_Macleod said:

don't take it back you can submit more than 1 - I really enjoyed that a lot :-)


okay pookie
im working on something new
i'll give you a hint the title is
Trinity.. !!! †

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David_Macleod
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thank you so much - HoldMyHand, Grackle and scratchme13 - three excellent entries and all so different :-)

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David_Macleod
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Zazzles said:

okay pookie
im working on something new
i'll give you a hint the title is
Trinity.. !!! †


Fascinated and awaiting with bated breath :-)

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