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romance

sirBoring
Thought Provoker
Joined 31st Oct 2016
Forum Posts: 143

Poetry Contest

Share romantic poems.
Romance: a feeling of excitement and mystery associated with love; love, especially when sentimental or idealized.

Poems will get comments explaining good features as well as subjective areas of improvement. If you want comments, then put your poem webpage's full url link (or just the 6 digits that are within that url) at the bottom of your posts.

You are allowed to submit a poem that you've written before, even if I've commented on it or it's been in my previous romance contest.

You can submit 3 poems maximum. Don't edit your posts, after the contest has closed.

Please send me a private message with any questions.

Here's some inspiration from last competition:

wallyroo92 said:Make Her Smile


She’s a vision, a dream
Some may dare to compare it to heaven on earth,
Like vast and deep oceans with uncharted emotions
No one has ever ventured swim before.
When he sees her it feels like his heart
Gives way to a different rhythm and beat,
And then it repeats,
When her demure allure gets his attention,
Effortlessly,
Little by little, he wants more.

She sways in such a way,
Nonchalantly without any provocation or intention,
Enticing like innuendos, hinted and implied,
He finds it fascinating, mysterious and exhilarating,
Anticipating that at any minute
Their eyes will connect,
And they’ll bond beyond anything’s ever known,
With body and soul,
Yearning,
So he searches for the right words,
To make her smile again.


KublaiSwan said:One Like You


Ode to thee thy giver of dreams
Those golden curls of Icarus wings
Arise, arise this tender supplication
From lowly poet to lovely creation
Thy voice which forbears me the sweetest of song
Which follows thy beauty with thee all along
To lend forth thy spirit so faithful and true
Never have I met one like you.


_shadoe_ said:werbepause ~ {xvi}


i cannot romanticize
you or the startled
flutter of wings
against the cage
of my ribs
when you
turn your gaze
to
the potential
of my mouth ~
... you steal my breath,
make my lungs
seize in anticipation
of the next
oleander sweet whisper
into
the dividing aether...
i have no
saccharine lines
but
.
.
.
i think of you.
constantly.
is that enough[?]
//

KublaiSwan
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 23rd June 2017
Forum Posts: 59

Lemonie 1

Shall we gaze upon your star
Whose twinkle luminates so far?
Shall we walk beside our ocean?
Long and far from Man's commotion
Suffer we to remain us here
Eternal company brings good cheer!
I gaze into your eye and feel
Warm & bold & full of zeal
What powers you possess, my love
Focused trial's perfect dove
If none of us be from above
Alas! I perish with words of Love.
Written by KublaiSwan
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summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1301

time-lapse

 
 
 
 
gathered my wanton disarrayed debris messed allover  
running till nowhere, in numbed residues smashed  
to beautiful ruins
 
(lips)  
 
trying hard to pull back the lukewarmly (mother) tongues  
of looming warps and wafts  
 
(lips*lips)  
 
i shrink and shrivel in repetitive convulsive episodes  
of an inward shrieking ecstasy unto an abyss of release  
 
(lspipils)  
 
still ruminating after all the conception  
 
'to be or not to be'  
 
to be that unleashing response longed for with your such divinity stimuli  
or to not to be- and drown selves in bogging silence  
of a plasticized solitude  
 
had ardently missed you like ever-elongating eons  
had kissed you instantly back now in all that robustive quench  
 
 
those small luminosities.. no-sheepish cool smiles in answering  
steadfast angers I burn often  
 
that was [and is] love

 
 
 
 
 
Written by summultima (uma)
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snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
United States 77awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 1873

LOVE’S SOUND

Not a word was said
Between lovers transfixed
Save the sound of a kiss
No other acoustics
Can grant such bliss

snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
United States 77awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 1873

TIME TO LEAVE

Wake up please!
Hurry, get dressed
It’s time for you to leave
Don’t expect breakfast

Addresses and numbers needn’t be exchanged
I don’t want to know who you are
I don’t even what to hear your name
We both just needed to get laid

Just leave quietly
No need to cause a scene
If you need to use the toilet
Do so quickly and leave up the seat

So let me make this simple and plain
You’re nothing more than a one-night-stand
“UNDERSTAND?”
‘Sex’ was the ‘name of the game’

So Audios, Sayonara, Auf Wiedersehen
HIT THE ROAD…GET LOST!
Now go back from wherever you came
Don’t leave a thing behind to come back and claim

To me your were nothing more
Then another good little screw
So leave before I say something hurtful
Like, “I think I love you!”

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

SATURN: the Lovers


He'd observed her since late Autumn,
Wanting to bide his earthly time,
Until the skies mixed their pallet  
With the pastels of a Spring rhyme.
 
Banking off the rings of Saturn,
She came to him in Winter's cold
When the air made his blue eyes turn,
The taste of her would make him bold.
 
She laid on his snow-covered soil
As naked as the leafless trees.
And as their joined bodies would coil,
Their flame made horizons unfreeze.
 
Unlike the lethargy of Summer,
When the ripples of mirage heat
Make it impossible to think  
While drunk on the sweat off a peach.
 
Of her, finds himself wishing for
A fifth season, could it exist?
A timelessness of perfect storm,
For she whom he cannot resist.
 
And won't want to for all his will,
The numbing of body & mind.
But doesn't notice Winter's chill,
He'll keep her from Spring's thaw to find.
Written by Jade-Pandora (jade tiger)
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Astyanax
Ceejay
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom 9awards
Joined 23rd Feb 2010
Forum Posts: 748

Time's Defier

Time mopes and sulks, disconsolate, in his lair -
Try as he might, things just aren’t going his way.
“It shouldn’t be like this, it isn’t fair,”
He grumbles, hour by hour, day after day.
“I run the world, I bend it to my will,
If I say ‘Fall!’ things fall, if ‘Cease!’ they cease.
I freeze the seas, I lengthen winter’s chill,
I set the lengths of wars, the dates of peace.
So why does she defy my mighty power
By staying beautiful, year after year?
Her loveliness continues yet to flower;
I chide her, but she doesn’t seem to hear.”

And who is this who makes Time so irate?
Why, who else could it be? My lovely Kate.

David_Macleod
14397816
Tyrant of Words
United Kingdom 39awards
Joined 5th Nov 2014
Forum Posts: 2983

You and Me

You see life  all around
I see death and dirty ground
You see flowers buds and seed
I see thorns and rotting weeds
You see  sunshine, I see rain
You see comfort, I see pain
You see fairies, woods and trees
I see wasps and killer bees

You like happy, I like sad
You like good, I like bad
You like Disney and chic flix
I like horror,slash and sick
You like soft, warm and fluffy
I like rough, scratch and scruffy
You like safe, plan preparing
I like risk and random daring
You like kittens, baby seals
I like animals that make good meals

You want jewellery, shiny stuff
I want cigars so I can puff
You want fitness to compare
I just want my comfy chair
You want order, no decay
I want war and anarchy
You want quiet, all is still
I want loud and overkill
You want sensual, soft porn, arty
I want racy, loose and tarty

We are strange, like chalk and cheese
And yet we’re truly devotees
We disagree on lots of things
And yet , together we bounce like springs
We should be in so much trouble
And yet we’re still a happy couple
Opposites at either end
Others just can’t comprehend
Joined securely at the hip
We still know how to jump and skip

OxyMoronicMe
G.L.
Dangerous Mind
Philippines 24awards
Joined 15th Feb 2016
Forum Posts: 1470

Lov\E/voL

 
Time is passing by, and you and I  
      are still us  
Forever? Neither of us is brave enough  
      to promise you nor I  
Right now is what matters  
      for the sun has yet to set  
What a bliss to hope for morn  
      upon the darkness' embrace  
Bitter and sweet, better with sweat  
      we smile, we cry sometime  
We hurt, we healed, we crave, we starve  
      for lust, for trust, for love  
 
For lust, for trust, for love  
      we got hurt, healed, suffer cravings and starved  
But we still could smile, even if we cry sometime  
      bitter or sweet, Isn't it better to sweat?  
For upon the darkness' embrace  
      hoping for morn is a kind of bliss  
The sun has yet to set  
      what matters more than right now?  
Lets promise each other, you and I  
      for us to be brave, that until forever  
There will still be us  
      even as time passed by,  both you and I.  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
                                                  
 
Written by OxyMoronicMe (G.L.)
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snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
United States 77awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 1873

PC in Love

Once attached to PC’s usb, he node that she was more than a printer; she was his lover. This printer was nothing like that used bubble-jet that had infected him with viruses.  She did more than download his hard-drive.  She was so compatible, she made him feel user friendly.  From the very modem they were connected, PC realized he could never live with router.
Written by snugglebuck
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Oceanicwords
Strange Creature
Joined 30th June 2017
Forum Posts: 4

Young love

Eyes meet
Hearts pound
Mouths plead
No sounds
Hands touch
My trust
Your lust
Our love
Written by Oceanicwords
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wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
United States 147awards
Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1757

Bolero

When I saw her I approached her
And asked her to dance,
She smiled and nodded without saying much,
She had a certain touch,
The way we waltzed and pranced
Across the galaxies,
She was indeed beautiful,
But after a million years,
The lights gave out.

Sometime later…

During the epochs of kings and empires,
I saw her again,
She was by a well,
With her eyes veiled,
But I recognized her.
I had crossed the desert and mountains,
On an arduous journey.
Later that night we danced,
This time we looked into each other eyes
A little closer,
With curious smiles and nervous laughter,
But after the festivities I had continue,
On with the journey.
I died at sea during a storm.

It was some centuries later when I saw her,
This time in the midst of revolution
Of all places,
She tended to the wounded,
While I carried a drum,
We recognized each other,
But we couldn’t dance then.
Fate wouldn’t have it,
The war and circumstances got in the way.

It was 1966 when I saw her again,
I recognized her by her smile,
It had been a while but we were young,
But this time we danced into the night.

(Bolero)
The band played, not knowing our history,
But it was a mystery,
The songs they played seemed to tell our story,
As we swayed on the dance floor,
We’d been searching for each other
Through the millenniums and centuries,
But that night was the right time,
In the warm tropical air, it was all there,
As we danced to boleros all night long.

I finally said..
Remember when we were stars?
And we waltzed across the constellations,
Or that time we danced watching the desert dunes
Under the light of the moon,
Or when I lost you during the revolution,
How many times did we cross paths?
All those dreams you and I have had,
Are our memories of the past lives we’ve shared…
So for this lifetime, and for the next,
Let's dance until the morning light.


KublaiSwan
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 23rd June 2017
Forum Posts: 59

Free, small Wasp (irrational fear)

I was a worm in times ago
Who died at fate of Wasp
I captured one & let him go
Today, in stormy frost

The fear so large, the love so real
'Twas far surreal

In glass like cup
I picked him up

And off into the storm he flew.
Yonder, masterful cookoo

It took some time it took some prayer
The cup was rather wiggly
The storm was raging; I heard the Sayer
The frequency rather squiggly

Irrational fears! much bigger I AM
Than ANYTHING man can adore
Of freeing the Wasp and seeing Cyan
My weakness flew right out the door.
Written by KublaiSwan
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