Topic Battle
Anonymous
Benzy_420 said:How about Host posts a pic, we all write a 32line (16bar) verse/stanza, host pics a winner when time runs out. Host? take your pic
Hi, Benzy ...
I think what the host wants
is a ``rap battle`` type of poem.
16 Bar isn`t 32 lines of verse/stanza
it`s actually 4 lines repeated 4 times
to equal 16 lines (bar):
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
and so on.
Each 4 lines can break
or they can be continuous;
it`s up to you.
Also, when one battles,
usually the first 2 lines will end in a rhyme
with the other 2 lines ending in a different rhyme:
`you can`t rap
so stand the hell back
you must think you`re Slick Rick
you ain`t nothin` but a colossal prick`
Also, rappers will incorporate
internal rhymes into each line like:
`stop talkin` all that ghetto crap `cause you`re gonna get smacked
you ain`t nothin` but a little hood rat with a mouth for a trap`
and that can get pretty technical
if you don`t know how to battle.
Anyway, I hope that kind of helps.
Also, you can check out my poem
to get a better feel for it.
Hi, Benzy ...
I think what the host wants
is a ``rap battle`` type of poem.
16 Bar isn`t 32 lines of verse/stanza
it`s actually 4 lines repeated 4 times
to equal 16 lines (bar):
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
and so on.
Each 4 lines can break
or they can be continuous;
it`s up to you.
Also, when one battles,
usually the first 2 lines will end in a rhyme
with the other 2 lines ending in a different rhyme:
`you can`t rap
so stand the hell back
you must think you`re Slick Rick
you ain`t nothin` but a colossal prick`
Also, rappers will incorporate
internal rhymes into each line like:
`stop talkin` all that ghetto crap `cause you`re gonna get smacked
you ain`t nothin` but a little hood rat with a mouth for a trap`
and that can get pretty technical
if you don`t know how to battle.
Anyway, I hope that kind of helps.
Also, you can check out my poem
to get a better feel for it.
Benzy_420
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DevlinDLC said:
Hi, Benzy ...
I think what the host wants
is a ``rap battle`` type of poem.
16 Bar isn`t 32 lines of verse/stanza
it`s actually 4 lines repeated 4 times
to equal 16 lines (bar):
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
and so on.
Each 4 lines can break
or they can be continuous;
it`s up to you.
Also, when one battles,
usually the first 2 lines will end in a rhyme
with the other 2 lines ending in a different rhyme:
`you can`t rap
so stand the hell back
you must think you`re Slick Rick
you ain`t nothin` but a colossal prick`
Also, rappers will incorporate
internal rhymes into each line like:
`stop talkin` all that ghetto crap `cause you`re gonna get smacked
you ain`t nothin` but a little hood rat with a mouth for a trap`
and that can get pretty technical
if you don`t know how to battle.
Anyway, I hope that kind of helps.
Also, you can check out my poem
to get a better feel for it.
Not the place to argue but I am a rapper, bars are whatever constitutes a complete rhyme scheme as in
A,B,C,B
or
A,B,B,A
etc
but usually, it's common for a rapper to stick to A,A,B,B,C,C in a battle because it's easier to follow and easier to work with.
And I don't know how you're meant to battle about a picture, I assume just write a poem or rap about it and Host picks a winner? Cause you can't exactly insult each other when you don't have anything to go on and have to base it on the picture.
I guess if we were using the only one featured it'd go something like:
You're a girl, little bitch, let your balloon fly high
I don't give an F when it comes to your life
Live your lie, after all, you are just another brick,
in the wall, if you fall, you'll be replaced, quick
Get a grip, on reality, your theory is a string
meddling, in my life, ends in battery and stings
on your eye, you and I, we could never get along
I hate your being so damn much that I put it in a song...
I suppose
Hi, Benzy ...
I think what the host wants
is a ``rap battle`` type of poem.
16 Bar isn`t 32 lines of verse/stanza
it`s actually 4 lines repeated 4 times
to equal 16 lines (bar):
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
xxxx
and so on.
Each 4 lines can break
or they can be continuous;
it`s up to you.
Also, when one battles,
usually the first 2 lines will end in a rhyme
with the other 2 lines ending in a different rhyme:
`you can`t rap
so stand the hell back
you must think you`re Slick Rick
you ain`t nothin` but a colossal prick`
Also, rappers will incorporate
internal rhymes into each line like:
`stop talkin` all that ghetto crap `cause you`re gonna get smacked
you ain`t nothin` but a little hood rat with a mouth for a trap`
and that can get pretty technical
if you don`t know how to battle.
Anyway, I hope that kind of helps.
Also, you can check out my poem
to get a better feel for it.
Not the place to argue but I am a rapper, bars are whatever constitutes a complete rhyme scheme as in
A,B,C,B
or
A,B,B,A
etc
but usually, it's common for a rapper to stick to A,A,B,B,C,C in a battle because it's easier to follow and easier to work with.
And I don't know how you're meant to battle about a picture, I assume just write a poem or rap about it and Host picks a winner? Cause you can't exactly insult each other when you don't have anything to go on and have to base it on the picture.
I guess if we were using the only one featured it'd go something like:
You're a girl, little bitch, let your balloon fly high
I don't give an F when it comes to your life
Live your lie, after all, you are just another brick,
in the wall, if you fall, you'll be replaced, quick
Get a grip, on reality, your theory is a string
meddling, in my life, ends in battery and stings
on your eye, you and I, we could never get along
I hate your being so damn much that I put it in a song...
I suppose
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I've set this competition to cancelled, as I'm not sure people were clear about the rules. Due to the confusion, I can't be sure if either of the two entries met the entry criteria, sorry.