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I am temptation

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eswaller
Fire of Insight
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Temptation and Sin In the Flesh

Darling, your eyes wink at me from across
The room. Temptation follows you around
With the sway of your hips. You are the boss
Of this city with danger that has drowned
Me alive. You and I both live it every night
When I want to be nothing more than
Tangled up with you when there is no light,
But complete darkness. All over again
I am falling for the plumpness of your
Lips and your soft curves I cannot take
My hands off of. I am begging for more.
Darling, I know that you can never fake
Real confidence like that as I watch you
Move across the room like a charming
Dancer, hypnotizing me like you always do.
With every smile you are disarming
And disrobing me. I feel stark naked under
Your gaze. Darling, you hit me right in
The heart like a quick rumble of thunder
And flash of lightening. You are walking sin.
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AEMelia564
Y
Dangerous Mind
Norway
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Venusian train of White Doves

Born from duality
I, daughter of Jupiter
Wearing garlands
of red sunsets

Forever fleeting
from mankind`s foam


You and I
are globes apart
In holographic
union

We walk
Earth`s heartbeat
Writing epic notes

Love speaks
language of All

through
kindred kisses

I become
a climax
of you

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calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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jj....i really loved both!
This is exciting

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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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you never dissapoint Amelia doll....like to peek in that brain of yours

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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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ES....this makes me want to read more of you....Thanks

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AEMelia564
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calamitygin said:you never dissapoint Amelia doll....like to peek in that brain of yours

thank you for your kind words, Jennifer

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eswaller
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Thank you so much. That means a lot to me.

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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jj I love reading your work...thanks so much

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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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I enjoyed and considered every one of these pieces...
In the end both ladies poems embodied temptation in such a unique and well thought out perspective. And beautiful to boot
....thanks and congrats to all

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Grace
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Congratulations AEMelia564!!...awesome...and yay Me...thank you Calamity for the honour.:) All the entries were awesome too.

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WOW that was a nice surprise when I checked in
Thank you so much Jennifer for choosing my poem and for an inspiring comp
Congrats to Grace for a fine poem
love and light
Melia

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