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Road Trip

souladareatease
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Poetry Contest

Take me on a roadtrip
No word limit
Dirt roads, dead-ends and dust-
Mean streets, alley-ways, highway
Give me visuals,, situations, or altercations
The Nature or the beast!!!

2-Wk's to burn-rubber!!!

***Extended for another wk for You fine folk to join in***

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
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Hearbreak Avenue

     
     
     
     
     
Took to the long road      
windows rolled down      
hard hot breaths      
of dry wind filling the      
lungs, beating the skin      
     
The unkempt road boasting      
cracks and potholes became      
a canvas for the scenery      
as weeds popped their      
heads out through cracks      
a group hallelujah to the heavens      
A worship to the hot burning sun      
     
There is something wonderful      
about weeds growing through      
concrete. An honest freedom. A risky dare      
to the authority that could have      
them killed for no reason other      
than their geographic stance      
While the sun almost melts their      
soft leaves to the tarmac that      
begs for the nutriance of the      
liquid in photosynthesis      
Their posture retains it's      
confidence and strength.      
     
The blonde in the passenger seat      
using the heated wind to style      
her nylon like whips of hair      
beat the headrest of that      
seat like a merciless viking      
flogging a bare fair skinned back      
Has her clean bare feet on the dashboard      
Her head nodding      
in time to the bass beats      
some techno radio station      
is filling our ears with      
Turns and pierces my soul with      
her green eyes smiling      
     
"I'm a weed"      
she softly mumbles      
     
"I'm as hard as concrete"      
I whisper in the nicotine of the      
second hand exhale I blow at      
the stained windscreen from      
the newly lit Camel cigarette      
     
"I know" she retorts as she leans over      
to take the warm beer saved in      
the console to her lips      
"The sun glares through      
your cracks"      
     
Then she pulled her dark      
spectacles from her cleavage      
and      
covered her eyes      
     
-x-
Written by RevolutionAL (Alistair Plint)
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RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
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Grace
IDryad
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Travelling Light

travelling alone the wanderer
on the dark road cold hugged body
heavy blessings of rain
visiting the misty evening

the thrump thrump of the wiper
Bee Gees on the radio
singing of dead sun
and Spicks and Specks of life

taking up the air with melancholy
moving on to a holiday to love
of second hand people
a treacle of sad observation

on the road haunted by old songs
thinking of losses, picking wishes off damp air
of warm shelter and warmer food
and murmurs of people around

but there were miles yet to travel
until the warmth of home embraces
the tired mind and exhausted body
of the traveller.

JohnFeddeler
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Riviera sundown



backwoods banjo bangin’ in my head
spent the night in a virgin’s bed
the moon shines misty on a lover’s lies
sweetest bluebells in her ‘hurt-me’ eyes
banshee winds, hear them wail & moan
broke her heart & left her all alone

rickety bridge, you got to take it slow
moody river ragin’ far below
blast the highway in the stormin’ rain
Buick’s engine roars away my pain
hard luck cowboy on a lonely ride
too many women stole away my pride

swap my meals for a jug of booze
droppin’ dimes on the jukebox blues
shaky visions of the great beyond
dirty dancin’ with a low-cut blonde
white line outlaw from a nowhere town
cage me up & let the sun go down



souladareatease
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AL, Grace, John ...Greatly Appreciate seeing You all here-Thank You for Your entries!!!

poet Anonymous

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working on it...

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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My life like country roads

Long and endless
Blue Highways await
Curving slowly
Through small towns
Described with candor
By Least Heat Moon
Written in tune with their odd names
And people

A departure from what is home
To sojourn into my heart
America
Traveling the convoluted fringe
Of my mind
And the wide spaces beyond it
Stretching seemingly into infinity
Past the horizons of my yesterday

Dusty bars
Haunted by Texas ladies men
Where you can hear the jingle of their spurs
And sputtering of their horses
Will cure my awesome thirst
For what might quench my wandering heart
It is lost right now
It ran away
Trying to escape its gritty shackles
Let Lust and man be damned

I will taste the piquant beads
That collect under the lip of autonomy
Its moist offering devoured
I will lie back
Belly full
Letting my hair spill all around me
My toes curled into the beatitides of mossy Earth
And sigh freedom

souladareatease
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Thank You for The Journey Calamity!!!

(Look forward to Yours as well Miki)

Carpe_Noctem
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Down Sector Five ( a dystopian road trip)


There's no going back
no home
no job
no peace no rest
That sign just read

Welcome to the new world order
Shelter line starts at 5
Mohammed be with you

The highway is alive at night
Nobody kids about where it goes
Helicopters off in the distance
Dying campfire light

The road warrior never mentioned
bodies in the aqueduct
Preacher man pulls out a butt
takes a drag
Mumbles a pray for the dead
The first shall be last, the last shall be first

Hungry and heading for the promised land
A dog for company and a gun in hand
the wind chills these ragged rattling bones

Yea
the highway is alive at night
and everyone knows where it goes

poet Anonymous

Related submission no longer exists.
(Spoken word on the original posting via the page link)

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/212161-passing-place/

paperstains
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Destination Don't Care

Sky and asphalt blend together  
watercolor shades of grey    
in the rain  
  
Wheels keep rolling  
into a distance unseen  
embracing the illusion
an infinity of road  
  
Intentionally losing track of days  
since leaving behind something  
that passed as home  
  
Several hours separated  
from the bad idea passed out  
in a hotel bed left at 3 a.m.  

Nothing felt better than driving  
away from another mistake  
  
Everything she wanted to escape  
was never farther than tire tracks  
splashing mud on her bumper  
  
But it sure killed time  
and she liked its blood  
on her hands
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souladareatease
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Carpe' Missy and Paper-I Thank You Greatly for Your Entries!!!

drone
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Has uncertainty
slowly crept
into your reasoning  
as your crossroads
walk this way
on this broken road
of many pathways
where ignorance
likes to play

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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Antelope Valley Correspondence

To my precious friend,
I've long been away I know
but now the time to share:

How dear the images
of my recent road trip to
my sisters' memories,

where we'd go each spring
in the family car since I was
so high to a desert tortoise.

The vistas of highway
belied the tranquility of
a high desert in springtime.

The riot of wild flowers
hide hundreds of lizard mounds
in their fleeting beauty.

Surrounding valleys with
boas of orange & white and
pale blue & purple hillsides.

Splashes of Mojave hues that
vibrate from the urge of wind,
unabated & unchallenged.

Powered by a sun that relents
only when it begins to set,
tickling the sherbet horizon.

Stretching the shadows of
Joshua trees that stand tall,
arms raised in eternal welcome

as I would welcome you
my every-season friend,
with ever-loving regards.



Image of Antelope Valley poppies, California by Ruth Yang

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