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eswaller
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LUDO LOVE

mysteriouslady
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Poetry Contest

Pick any Ludo song and write a poem bout it in your own unique way.
One entry
Ill need to know the song you picked
Not too long, Ill get lost
Rhyme is good but not a must
No collabs

Feel free to PM any questions that you have. Have fun :)

snugglebuck
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ROXY

Roxy
You’re so foxy
I’m so in love with you
So please take a chance on me
And let me convince you
That you can love me too

mysteriouslady
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Ha!  That was great Snuggle! Thanks for the indulgence! <3

eswaller
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Love Me Dead (Inspired by LUDO’s Love Me Dead)

Love me until my bones are dry
And dead. Drink me ever so slowly
Until there is nothing left. You try
To be anything but holy and animalistic
If we are ever going to make it to
The afterlife. You are everything ballistic,
Psycho and crazy. You know I love you
Because you are far from normal and
Stable. Your blood runs blue from
Sucking it all up. I can no longer stand
When you wear me down. You are some
Kind of strange creature that follows me to bed
In your coffin. Your edges soften like a flower.
You are going to love me until we are both dead
Because we both have that kind of power.
You know just the right way to hold me
When the world is coming to an end.
You come alive in the moonlight from the tree.
Both God and the devil has found a way to send
You to me for more than an eternity.
There is always that sign that says to love me dead
And beyond. We find our way to insanity.
The words on our gravestones are left unsaid.

mysteriouslady
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eswaller, that was perfect!  Thanks for the entry! <3

mysteriouslady
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BUMP!

mysteriouslady
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come yall. this is fun. :D

mysteriouslady
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Broaden your music/poetic horizons my friends!

mysteriouslady
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BUMP!

Jade-Pandora
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(Inspired from "The Horror of Our Love" by Ludo)

BITTER

So as the rain falls muting soft our screams
The terror of our thunder's haunting dreams

You give to me the life of seizing brain
That quivers tight from clutch of strangled veins

Aaarrrggghhhh...

I cannot live without your death in me
From night sweats colder than the murdered sea

It never is enough to satisfy
And never will for all eternity

Your flesh, your heaving organs in the rain
That I will soon devour with my pain

Aaarrrggghhhh...

But do not take away from what I feel
It isn't there for you to know or steal

This is a stormy night that will surround
Of what we've lost of love, this bitter sound

AAARRRGGGHHHH...!


mysteriouslady
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Thanks Jade!  Awesome entry!  Your indulgence is appreciated! <3

LobodeSanPedro
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Laundry Girl

she has apple eyes
And rag doll thighs

That have been tied in knots
By those who called themselves lovers

I share my cigarettes outside with her
It gives her chance to unload their covers

She tells me everybody's load has a story

Three months ago
That old man did laundry for two
Now it's just a colorless
One
Lost his partner to cancer
Who lived the life of a forgotten son

That women there
is a foster care pimp
12 loads for six kids

She does rescue work too    
Saves dogs and kittens
Just call her Noah

We sip coffee from my cup together
Because I'm too broke to buy her
Her own

She says the next cup is on her
She finds treasures left in the machine
But decides to buy one cup again

She wants to make sure we become friends first
Before we become lovers

This laundry story girl
With her apple eyes
And rag doll thighs



mysteriouslady
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WOW!  Thanks for your fantastic entry, LobodeSanPedro!  made me smile! <3

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BUMPITY BUMP!

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