Poetry competition CLOSED 1st March 2017 7:44pm
WINNER
LostGirl18
LostGirl18
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Dysfunctional relationship. Calling NEW MEMBERS only!!!
Poetry Contest Description
Write a poem or prose about a dysfunctional relationship with a FEMALE in your life. RULES: This competition is for NEW MEMBERS ONLY (joined this year so far in 2017). There is only ONE SUBMISSION ALLOWED per NEW MEMBER. Good luck!
NEW MEMBERS WILL BE THE ONLY ONE'S WHO QUALIFY!!!!!!
Lost
Childlike demeanour
Alittle coffee with my creamer
I miss writing on the windows
But they all turned into mirrors
Your voice was clear
"I don't want you, we are over!"
It's still ringing in my ears
"Shit I fucked up, let's start over"
Too bad I lost what kept her near
I must have left it
At the bus stop
On our last date to the fair
That lucky boy that found it
Better never hurt you dear
I write this all the fucking time
It's too bad you cannot hear
When I scream into my pillow
I'd rather whisper in your ear
That I love you
I type I hate you
I hope you know that isn't true
Because if I ever lost you
I'd be lost too
Alittle coffee with my creamer
I miss writing on the windows
But they all turned into mirrors
Your voice was clear
"I don't want you, we are over!"
It's still ringing in my ears
"Shit I fucked up, let's start over"
Too bad I lost what kept her near
I must have left it
At the bus stop
On our last date to the fair
That lucky boy that found it
Better never hurt you dear
I write this all the fucking time
It's too bad you cannot hear
When I scream into my pillow
I'd rather whisper in your ear
That I love you
I type I hate you
I hope you know that isn't true
Because if I ever lost you
I'd be lost too
Written by CircleDanceSquared
(AlyssaJane96)
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Anonymous
half-life
this relationship
with its half-life
she needs
and I am there
it's faltering
I'm a giver by nature
I give until I can't
words uttered
at the end
of a conversation
an afterthought
"how are you?"
when I mentally shrug
take a chance
and respond
it usually shifts
quickly back
to her
when asked she acknowledged
she never noticed
when I pulled away
no talk of me
of my feelings
who I was
locked away
can't she see?
this isn't how
it's supposed to be
it hurts
I need time to think
decide what I can handle
where I want to go from here
is there a future
when only one of us is there
can I survive the half-life
or do I let it go
as dead
this relationship
with its half-life
she needs
and I am there
it's faltering
I'm a giver by nature
I give until I can't
words uttered
at the end
of a conversation
an afterthought
"how are you?"
when I mentally shrug
take a chance
and respond
it usually shifts
quickly back
to her
when asked she acknowledged
she never noticed
when I pulled away
no talk of me
of my feelings
who I was
locked away
can't she see?
this isn't how
it's supposed to be
it hurts
I need time to think
decide what I can handle
where I want to go from here
is there a future
when only one of us is there
can I survive the half-life
or do I let it go
as dead
Aurora
Aurora,
I know you play games.
I'm aware of your style,
but I've come calling again.
As we touch,
your caress sparks my flame.
The soft allure ,
I'm helpless as a paper crane.
My lovely,
as colourful as an icy sprinkle.
Soft like jelly on the inside;
your shell as hard as a periwinkle.
As the sun kisses the early bird,
I await your unspoken word.
I hear only lovely sounds
as your walls fall down.
Your sweet solace,
fills my empty plate.
In sorrow,
we are no longer irate.
My darling,
such a bittersweet vice.
To hold your companionship,
I must pay the price.
Written by LostGirl18
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