Poetry competition CLOSED 15th February 2017 11:17pm
WINNER
afriendoftina (Hendy)
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RUNNERS-UP: eswaller and Afroqn73

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Darkness my friend...

composedWITHrazors
Blade Artist
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom 6awards
Joined 2nd Feb 2017
Forum Posts: 84

The cumuppance.............

This is my mobile rape van
To be fair it was all going to plan
I was driving around, all was chill
When she got in went all downhill

She looked so weak and broken
I pulled over and no words were spoken
I opened the door she climbed in
My sick mind registered this is an easy win

We drove for a time in silence
Then sudden erupts of violence
Shapeshifting before my eyes
Werewolf, what! No surprise

Bored of tired vampire clichés
Meeting their hypnotic gaze
Fuck you werewolf you gave me a fright
I guess I’m just getting eaten tonight

Miss wolf I deserve to be your dinner
Me the dirty rapist sinner
Predator becomes the prey this time
Can I complete one more rhyme?

Please don’t kill me I repent
My evil ways are all so spent
Please don’t rip my throat, gargle, breath
Rip, rend, tear, violent death.

poetryaccident
Poetry Accident
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 30th Oct 2016
Forum Posts: 193

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Comfort

When peace is the only goal
forever goal rarely found
phantom relic of past times
the dark appeals to the soul
longing to escape the pain
comfort sought near at hand
no matter what is left behind
the forward motion only counts
beyond the realm of discontent
subdued anger set free to roam
where strife is the currency
with nothing gained in the end
everything put to the test
dust to mouth, ash to hold
joyful hope has left the land
emotions left fell the heart
in cemeteries of dreams lost
optimism drowned by doubt
escape is the only way
away from sun of the lies
to the darkness of the night
or to the comfort of the grave.

ReBekahBehave
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 29th Jan 2017
Forum Posts: 5

Hark
my friend the Dark
I like you more than ever
  I want you to cover me so i cannot see what i have become
an enemy

Artemios
Thought Provoker
Greece 12awards
Joined 11th Jan 2016
Forum Posts: 393

Here you have the winner! Congratulations to all. It was a very difficult choice!
Thank you once again for participating in my need to see the darkness! :))

eswaller
Dangerous Mind
United States 31awards
Joined 22nd Dec 2015
Forum Posts: 763

Thanks for choosing me and Afroqn73 as runners up to this competition. Also a congratulations to Tom as the winner.

afriendoftina
Hendy
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom 5awards
Joined 21st Apr 2016
Forum Posts: 73

OMG. I AM SO SHOCKED. Thank you. I literally wrote that straight out onto the page, perhaps off the cuff is a good way for me to write. This is some lovely news to hear

Congratulations to my runners-up and to everyone who participated, there were some excellent submissions.

Thanks again!

Afroqn73
Thought Provoker
United States 3awards
Joined 24th Dec 2016
Forum Posts: 414

I just saw this sorry been very busy lololol...i am stunned...ty so much!! Big props to the winner!!! Ty again!!

P.S. congrats to the above contender as well....sorry I'm half asleep

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