Darkness my friend...
composedWITHrazors
Blade Artist
Forum Posts: 84
Blade Artist
Twisted Dreamer
6
Joined 2nd Feb 2017Forum Posts: 84
The cumuppance.............
This is my mobile rape van
To be fair it was all going to plan
I was driving around, all was chill
When she got in went all downhill
She looked so weak and broken
I pulled over and no words were spoken
I opened the door she climbed in
My sick mind registered this is an easy win
We drove for a time in silence
Then sudden erupts of violence
Shapeshifting before my eyes
Werewolf, what! No surprise
Bored of tired vampire clichés
Meeting their hypnotic gaze
Fuck you werewolf you gave me a fright
I guess I’m just getting eaten tonight
Miss wolf I deserve to be your dinner
Me the dirty rapist sinner
Predator becomes the prey this time
Can I complete one more rhyme?
Please don’t kill me I repent
My evil ways are all so spent
Please don’t rip my throat, gargle, breath
Rip, rend, tear, violent death.
This is my mobile rape van
To be fair it was all going to plan
I was driving around, all was chill
When she got in went all downhill
She looked so weak and broken
I pulled over and no words were spoken
I opened the door she climbed in
My sick mind registered this is an easy win
We drove for a time in silence
Then sudden erupts of violence
Shapeshifting before my eyes
Werewolf, what! No surprise
Bored of tired vampire clichés
Meeting their hypnotic gaze
Fuck you werewolf you gave me a fright
I guess I’m just getting eaten tonight
Miss wolf I deserve to be your dinner
Me the dirty rapist sinner
Predator becomes the prey this time
Can I complete one more rhyme?
Please don’t kill me I repent
My evil ways are all so spent
Please don’t rip my throat, gargle, breath
Rip, rend, tear, violent death.
poetryaccident
Poetry Accident
Forum Posts: 193
Poetry Accident
Dangerous Mind
15
Joined 30th Oct 2016Forum Posts: 193
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Comfort
When peace is the only goal
forever goal rarely found
phantom relic of past times
the dark appeals to the soul
longing to escape the pain
comfort sought near at hand
no matter what is left behind
the forward motion only counts
beyond the realm of discontent
subdued anger set free to roam
where strife is the currency
with nothing gained in the end
everything put to the test
dust to mouth, ash to hold
joyful hope has left the land
emotions left fell the heart
in cemeteries of dreams lost
optimism drowned by doubt
escape is the only way
away from sun of the lies
to the darkness of the night
or to the comfort of the grave.
Comfort
When peace is the only goal
forever goal rarely found
phantom relic of past times
the dark appeals to the soul
longing to escape the pain
comfort sought near at hand
no matter what is left behind
the forward motion only counts
beyond the realm of discontent
subdued anger set free to roam
where strife is the currency
with nothing gained in the end
everything put to the test
dust to mouth, ash to hold
joyful hope has left the land
emotions left fell the heart
in cemeteries of dreams lost
optimism drowned by doubt
escape is the only way
away from sun of the lies
to the darkness of the night
or to the comfort of the grave.
ReBekahBehave
Joined 29th Jan 2017
Forum Posts: 5
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 5
Hark
my friend the Dark
I like you more than ever
I want you to cover me so i cannot see what i have become
an enemy
my friend the Dark
I like you more than ever
I want you to cover me so i cannot see what i have become
an enemy
Artemios
Forum Posts: 393
Thought Provoker
12
Joined 11th Jan 2016Forum Posts: 393
Here you have the winner! Congratulations to all. It was a very difficult choice!
Thank you once again for participating in my need to see the darkness! :))
Thank you once again for participating in my need to see the darkness! :))
eswaller
Forum Posts: 763
Dangerous Mind
31
Joined 22nd Dec 2015Forum Posts: 763
Thanks for choosing me and Afroqn73 as runners up to this competition. Also a congratulations to Tom as the winner.
afriendoftina
Hendy
Forum Posts: 73
Hendy
Twisted Dreamer
5
Joined 21st Apr 2016 Forum Posts: 73
OMG. I AM SO SHOCKED. Thank you. I literally wrote that straight out onto the page, perhaps off the cuff is a good way for me to write. This is some lovely news to hear
Congratulations to my runners-up and to everyone who participated, there were some excellent submissions.
Thanks again!
Congratulations to my runners-up and to everyone who participated, there were some excellent submissions.
Thanks again!
Afroqn73
Forum Posts: 414
Thought Provoker
3
Joined 24th Dec 2016Forum Posts: 414
I just saw this sorry been very busy lololol...i am stunned...ty so much!! Big props to the winner!!! Ty again!!
P.S. congrats to the above contender as well....sorry I'm half asleep
P.S. congrats to the above contender as well....sorry I'm half asleep