Poetry competition CLOSED 22nd January 2017 7:53pm
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eswaller
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gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
United States 6awards
Joined 6th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 372

Poetry Contest

poems that
I am looking for YOU to submit a new or old poem that is lit af fam!

..meaning:

content that is charged with energy, rhythm, and passion.  The type of stuff you would tell me to sit down before sharing.  Fast pace rhyming is encouraged!  

EXAMPLE OF A FIRE DROP YOU ASK?  tune in to 1:30
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SofXomLLHXI&index=16&list=PLuG_Wwjvha5be2WL80ZfRsGHv2xSlNMxi

RULES:
1. any topic will do..   some will be more challenging than others!
2. if it is long, it best stay lit the whole time!
3. one entry per user!
4. BONUS POINTS FOR RECORDINGS (youtube or soundcloud links please)

(i apologize for my vernacular in this description, but it fit so i rolled with it)

BRING ON THOSE FIRE VERSES!

<3

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

Apology to host Brad.., I entered my piece in the wrong competition, but there are some great entries by other members already posted. You guys are rockin'!  

Peace out✌️
Jade

drone
Tyrant of Words
Greece 10awards
Joined 3rd Sep 2011
Forum Posts: 2254

On your downward spiral
do you not see
the doors
at every turn
the choices
you could make
if only you break
these phyicalogical claws
from the thoughts
that you entertain
the ones that whisper
within your mind
there is
no key to find
for there is
no lock
your choice
stands before you
just push

poet Anonymous


beat still my Apashe heart … when I loved you in L.A. `cause dirty thoughts, they talk

Yo, Dev
drop those bass
                                           bombs

and go kamikaze on my flesh
turn this skel~a~bitch
into a menopausal rage in her dirty cage,
and her army of none to a reckon of one
don`t speak when audio senses
reap what they can`t sow
so drop that bass low …

a slip of the Devil`s tongue
he`s got my demons on the run
quagmire is my breath
siphoned from a bottle of rum
so I packed my pistols and whips
but I think I fucked up …

pretty little bitch I`m busy in a tight leather skinned dress
strapped with a shooter, I`m just five seconds away
from finding myself in a Tokyo mess
I fucked up `cause I put a `lil curse on him
if the man wasn`t such a bitch I may have taken
mercy on him. but instead I`m in over my head
with the unlucky one preaching in my bed …

days counted back nothing fades to black
I kick back the sheets pounce on his cock
liquored tears smolder these black lacquer lies
and black lips serenade in hand grenades and chopsticks
almond eyes scour the dingy of dives that I hive in
and there beneath the whores and pachinko scores
he casts the dice 7`s and 11`s
before he hits snake eyes our love dies; (eyes meet)
across the room a deserts doom (in a crowded room)
smoldering heat, hair slick, body thick,
instead of a hit he opts for a split
of Aces on the black jack felts
as he remembered our rendezvous deep in the Alps
of machetes and chains where I yelped and screamed
somewhere amidst a Dubai dream, steaming showers
in the highest tower, our fuck is quick
and thrashed out, hollow an` blew
I`m done runnin` dead circles `round you,
I`ve got that player love by the cask of my Glock
religion ain`t gonna save you from me
gonna turn your ass into a lament  
can you hear them bone thugs an` harmony?
jack it up for me, baby, `cause I`m god sent,
heaven scent, barrel spent …
please pass me the flask only `cause you asked
let me thirst my thrill `fore I slug my itch,
`cause I`ve been a Diva longer than your mama`s
been a bitch …

and you say I`m fucked up
`cause I`m a sucker for pain
bashed~out purple and sweat
runs down the nape of my neck
naked as the day I was born
you take this body and tatt her `scorned`
you`ve been forewarned …
unpack my pistol so you can whip me with it
tie me down and break me down
so you can rip into it
with a gram of rope
you sodomize that dope
as we become one with a symbol of hope
through a cinematic scope
a nickelodeon for the abused and the used
plaster posters `round the city how I`m a sucker for torture
how I love to fornicate with gangsta vultures
no one to blame but my addiction to shame
I`m a pyro freak, an s&m junkie on the loose
put my body in a tri~diemensional noose then toss me
in a river with chains
tonight we`ll blow the Devil
fuck with Mary Jane so she can declare me
clinically insane
but just watch how you cane me
`cause I like it rough
in pink leather cuffs, release the beast
impaled by a black leash, I`ll open up
so you can flog me down south,
finger fuck that silver tongue in my dirty mouth
`cause dirty thoughts
they do talk … to you
when I loved you in L.A.



https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/249595-beat-still-my-apashe-heart-when-i-loved/


wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
United States 147awards
Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1794

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How to Spit Fire

I’m no rapper,
I’ve never been able to spit fire,
But I’m sick with this ire,
I’m tired of feeling irate,
It’s a trait that’s much less to be desired,
But I’m going to address this dead weight.

I’m sorry I’m wired that way,
But I’ve been working on my anger and languor these days,
These last few years, this past decade,
Learning to let go and forgive, yearning to peacefully live,
Being positive that everything is going to be okay.

I see the text and read the words and sense the sword,
Feeling the fuel that’s trying so hard to get me doused,
But I back away and detach, no I won’t light up the match,
I refuse to fall for it, it’s sick so no I won’t be roused.

I choose not to get angry, it’s not really worth it,
Why on earth unearth the venom that was buried long ago?
Why rebirth the callous malice handed in underhanded innuendos?
I can see the war of words in a tsunami higher than all crescendos.

Relax and smoke some endo,
It’s legal now so there’s no need for you to be like “no entiendo”,
Pull out that old Nintendo or find some other away to unwind,
Let’s not be sour grapes, we’re too old for this kind of whine.

Let’s be civil, let’s be sincere,
Let’s be modest and honest and the animosity will disappear,
I believe in my heart that we can accomplish this,
There’s no need really to be pissed.

But if you’re going to bait me like that I will go on a quest,
I’ll aspire to traverse the ocean and the universe
From here to China and the Shire in search of the best,
I’ll work my charm and get my classic swag on
For Mushu and Smaug and Puff the Magic Dragon,
I’ll be inspired by my dire straits and inquire,
I’ll acquire the knowledge while I study them,
I’LL DISCOVER THE SECRET I SO GREATLY DESIRE
AND IN THE END I’LL LEARN FROM THEM…
How to spit fire!

gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
United States 6awards
Joined 6th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 372

Thank you for the submissions ya'll! I can sense this will be a good comp!

<3

Artemios
Thought Provoker
Greece 12awards
Joined 11th Jan 2016
Forum Posts: 393

Just wrote it for another comp. but it's one of my most powerful poems, so I submit it here as well as I recorded it as well for soundcloud.

https://soundcloud.com/artemios/ugly-overdose

Ugly overdose

Please forgive me, ugly overdose,  
I will never miss you  
I will always remember you.  
You built the earth of my feelings  
you destroyed the happiness of my outlook  
and now you ask for some holly forgiveness  
like you never hold my tears on your back  
like you never touched my delirium  
while it was filming my white nonsense.  
 
Please forget me, ugly overdose,  
I will never feel you again  
I will always disrespect you.  
You destroyed what is called “future”  
you built my anonymous faith  
and now I pray to lost gods  
as if I was a meatloaf, waiting for its honey,  
as if I was an umbrella, seeking for simple rain  
while I was my own dude kind of sunny thing.  
 
Please trust me, I’ll be nice with destiny,  
please hate me, I’ll be bad with the acceptance.



JohnFeddeler
Tyrant of Words
United States 83awards
Joined 18th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 325

              kahuna


(thought to action)
words to dance
dance like a river
cahuna river, kahuna dance

(muse invades: inspire to poem)
lightning strikes  -  poem afire
fire and water
dancer and river

river flowing, dancer dancing
dance like a river
flow of the dancer
cahuna river, kahuna dance

fire on water, dancer rushing
rush like a river
river of fire
River Cahuna  -  Kahuna Dance


MsRockyJackson
Dangerous Mind
United States 8awards
Joined 1st July 2014
Forum Posts: 318

Never Gonna Back Down

I'm a fighter,
I'm an achiever,
I'm a dreamer, I ain't a realist, but I know I'll always be the realist even when you stop believing in me.
Leave me, but just know I'll be alright.
Fight me and just know I'll have my fists up ready for the knock out,
You kick me down just know I always come back up swinging.
Ain't willing to lose
I won't stop till I win.
Never gonna back down.
Even if hell's hounds have me by the throat,
Even if I'm choking for oxygen,
Even if I'm going out of my mind,
I won't back down.
You can beat me till I'm numb, all I would do is ask you " is that all you mother fuckers got?"
You will not shake me,
You will not take me from me.
Hurt me, but you can never change me.
Offend me by calling me strange but you will never know the real me.
Dare to try to tame me and you will feel my wrath.
Bitch get ready to feel the aftermath of an undercover psychopath.
Laugh in my face and I'll give you something to laugh about.
Shout in my face I'll scream louder till your eardrums rupture and bleed all over.
I'll smother any mother fucker who'd cross me,
Get back at any vulture who's out to get me.
You talk about me being cold?, where were you when I needed you?
Oh yeah that's right you were giving me the cold shoulder like the faker you are.
You can kiss my ass 'cause this will be the last time you'd come anywhere near something with class while you'd much rather leave with trash n' bash me.
Bitch please I'm still standing, you ain't hurting me
You ain't effecting me, you just irritating me.
Aggravate me I'll aggravate you even more,
You hate me? Good! I hate you too.
No matter where you are or where you're hiding I'll break down any door or any door to get to you to see if you're for real.
Never gonna back down.
Even if hell's hounds have me by the throat,
Even if I'm choking for oxygen,
Even if I'm going out of my mind,
I won't back down.
Don't tell me to sit down, you sit the fuck down.
Suck my dirty sock stupid trick and spit it out now you got fungus on ya tongue.
There's just too many devils among us for me to waste my time and energy on.
You can never bring me down 'cause I always stand up with my chin up ready for that bell to ring,
Ding! ding!
I guess miss Balboa 'bout to go toe to toe with another.
I'm too blessed to ever let you take my faith away,
You're not a wraith to me you ain't nothing to me.
You don't know what the fuck I've been through!
I'm revived,
I'm more alive than I've ever been,
Better than what I was, steadier than what I was I'm not gonna fall off the top
I'll stay on top till I got no more strength left to stay on stop.
Never gonna back down.
Even if hell's hounds have me by the throat,
Even if I'm choking for oxygen,
Even if I'm going out of my mind,
I won't back down.

poetryaccident
Poetry Accident
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 30th Oct 2016
Forum Posts: 193

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Fell Too Deep

I fell too deep in love
ground vanished in a blink
into devotion’s arms
before I knew I'd tripped
a tumble helped by Cupid
his arrow in my side
in state I'll remain
until he takes it back.

I gave my heart away
surprised that it was gone
when I looked to see
the hole now in its place
it was a sleight of hand
magician's most sly trick
to make this hollow
another must fully sate.

I found lunacy when
sanity slipped its leash
chasing dreams
that made devils blush
as angels fitted me
with madman's chains
constraints only fit for
love's darkest dreams.

I'm now stuck in this pit
wondering where the exit is
feeling nothing where my heart
used to beat to compliment
my mind escaped to dream of one
with cobwebs left to silent scream
love, sweet love, be gone my friend
remove your barbs, set me free.

eswaller
Dangerous Mind
United States 30awards
Joined 22nd Dec 2015
Forum Posts: 752

Wrong Direction

I got spit, fire and rhythm.
Like a ghost, I will be back
Again. I am not any logarithm.

Everything on this track
Is slick and smooth.
I am about to jack

Up this party. I soothe
The hate and anger.
We are still in our youth.

I am still the amber
That sparkles and shines.
I take the dagger

And sink it deep in the mines.
I might be looking
For the wrong signs.

tmra69
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 11th Jan 2017
Forum Posts: 9

Justice...
one of these days
I'll find justice.
Justice will prevail
upon the spineless snail,
that leaves an evil trail
of his religious spells.
BUT THERE WILL BE JUSTICE.

Sounds of the church bells
drown out cries for help.
The Reverend unbuckles his belt.
His evil scum was exhaled.
Humiliation was inhaled,
at the dirty alter where I knelt.

Thunderous waves were felt
as my dying spirit, in pain, wails.
But a day of reckoning will be held!
I'll be there with my rusty nails,
and a crown of thorns as well.
AND I WILL FIND JUSTICE!

His evil deeds will be unveiled.
So many souls he tried to sell
for his perverse cocktail.
His pride began to swell
as kindness soon went stale.
But soon....
THERE WILL BE JUSTICE!

And soon the rotten smell
from the vomit he expels
upon the church's Holy Grail
will tell the ugly tale
in disgusting shamed detail
of lies and justice!

One of these days
I'll find justice.
AND THERE WILL BE HELL...
WHEN I FIND JUSTICE!

*for all the wolves in  suits and ties behind the pulpit....

gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
United States 6awards
Joined 6th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 372

Thank you to everyone who submitted thus far! one stands out to me as the winner at this point, but there is still time left!!

<3

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
United States 28awards
Joined 22nd June 2015
Forum Posts: 2047

Bitch


She cum kind drivel off shiny red lip
To flex hot breath
Laying her words
on your willing ears......

She tumble your mind
With wet pussy grind
On your  growing shaft
She r rrrrev your gears.....

With Machiavellian  turn
Of psuedo astute verse
She pervert the good stuff
of your nasty fears....

She look so pretty
Awwwe bounce of sweet titty...
While Cum trickle salty croc tears....

Poor damsel in Lilly white breasts
She have you sweaty fight back
Her Dragons that  piercing ROAR!

While looking up with gentle flutter of lash
From under your cock
Calling herself your little whore.. .

She foxily do wily trick
Where she vulpine swallow
Your saline spill through wicked red lip
As she sing on high C!!
Her very favorite word MORE...

She look so pretty
Janus faced
Curly Genius of tongue
Vitriol laced
She arsenic kiss
Your cherub face....

While she left hand claws
Down to ya draw' s
Leaving you oozing red brand
While she right fingers her gash
With her Darlin Nicki she devil's hand...

She leave me astounded
Completely dumbfounded....
That I ever allowed you
To be my man........













lanooz
Twisted Dreamer
United States 14awards
Joined 21st July 2012
Forum Posts: 240

Scandalized

Yes, I'm a jerk of the greatest kind,
Where can you find such a wild child?
What's on my mind? Nothing, I'm blind,
Unkind to the masses, my humor has died.

Signed a pact with the devil to stay behind,
Let me hide my evil grin from suicide.

On my grind, but I'll never be signed,
All I do is whine, the only way I'm defined
Not bred to decline comments, never mild
You and I, we will collide but on the upside
You get to smack up the conflict I occupy.

Let me confide in you, the world I defiled
Untied it's panties, now it's paralyzed,
Losers I idolize while I sit back vaporized
Who the hell are you to criticize?

You have the right to crucify,
I'm going nowhere, it's been finalized.
Am I justified for taking ignorance nationwide?

I came to capitalize on anything crystallized,
I act hard but inside I'm petrified,
Maybe I've been humanized, and I don't realize
The torture I've been putting on my real life
Maybe it's time to change, am I systematized?

From humanity I should be disqualified
From now to eternity I will be disorganized.

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