SMOKED OUT DIVINE STRAWBERRY
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DIVINEDEADLYDARK
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Lost Thinker
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This is Damn good thanks
DIVINEDEADLYDARK
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Lost Thinker
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GREAT POEM CLEVER AND JUICY lol
DIVINEDEADLYDARK
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Lost Thinker
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I will B ready for competition today its later on at 6ish..Correct I will see when it says Vote then that's it thanks
Abracadabra
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Tyrant of Words
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Give us berry bliss
they cried
We're down to our
last pip
soon the fruit bowl
will be emptier
than a frozen cobweb
Where shall we find our
vitamin C?
And as if by magic
the moon shed
its skin of cheese
and morphed
into a magnificent
golden peach
beaming lusciously
for all to see
The stars
became fat red cherries
twinkling rosy romantic
for the encouragement of lovers
but still guiding sailors lost at sea
(when old peachy
took the night off)
How wonderful,
they drooled
but it's all so far away
we'll get bandy legs
and die of rickets
if we don't eat fruit
And then it rained
a strawberry monsoon
Give us berry bliss
they cried
We're down to our
last pip
soon the fruit bowl
will be emptier
than a frozen cobweb
Where shall we find our
vitamin C?
And as if by magic
the moon shed
its skin of cheese
and morphed
into a magnificent
golden peach
beaming lusciously
for all to see
The stars
became fat red cherries
twinkling rosy romantic
for the encouragement of lovers
but still guiding sailors lost at sea
(when old peachy
took the night off)
How wonderful,
they drooled
but it's all so far away
we'll get bandy legs
and die of rickets
if we don't eat fruit
And then it rained
a strawberry monsoon
DIVINEDEADLYDARK
Joined 20th Oct 2016
Forum Posts: 34
Lost Thinker
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Really cool Thanks 4 joining in
DIVINEDEADLYDARK
Joined 20th Oct 2016
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Lost Thinker
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Hi When can I vote do I do it now it closes at 6:44 or do I wait until 6;00 I know already who I want to vote 4.
Good Day
Good Day
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
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DIVINEDEADLYDARK said:Hi When can I vote do I do it now it closes at 6:44 or do I wait until 6;00 I know already who I want to vote 4.
Good Day
Ohhh Divine, you managed to close it and make your host's picks perfectly!
And while I'm at it:
Thank you so much for honoring me with the cup! This was a wild competition, and a lot of fun! I also congratulate thebladeartist & Abracadabra for 2nd & 3rd - well done!
And Divine, I'm so glad to say again: Welcome to DUP!
-Jadey
Good Day
Ohhh Divine, you managed to close it and make your host's picks perfectly!
And while I'm at it:
Thank you so much for honoring me with the cup! This was a wild competition, and a lot of fun! I also congratulate thebladeartist & Abracadabra for 2nd & 3rd - well done!
And Divine, I'm so glad to say again: Welcome to DUP!
-Jadey
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Alistair Plint
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Alistair Plint
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Madam for a newbie, you have a good poetry eye. Your choices in winners are technically brilliant! Especially as the entries were all, really well penned.
Good stuff.
So what's next from you? We had a comp a few forum comments etc... Which direction do you intend going now?
Thanx for a cool comp
Blue Skies
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P.S.* kicks the Nemo guy under the table*
P.S.S " hey cool poem sir magician I like it, any chance you'll pop some flowers out z hat for lady Jade... Cool rit madam!
Good stuff.
So what's next from you? We had a comp a few forum comments etc... Which direction do you intend going now?
Thanx for a cool comp
Blue Skies
Al-x-
P.S.* kicks the Nemo guy under the table*
P.S.S " hey cool poem sir magician I like it, any chance you'll pop some flowers out z hat for lady Jade... Cool rit madam!
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DIVINEDEADLYDARK
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Lost Thinker
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Thanks so much everyone was good it was hard choice.
DIVINEDEADLYDARK
Joined 20th Oct 2016
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Lost Thinker
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Thanks so much you were awesome the poem was creative & so cool. I wish I knew what you are referring about on your comp. I am confused if I did it wrong lets forget no big deal.
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