Poetry competition CLOSED 13th October 2016 7:33pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNER-UP:
Vandel_Viaclovsky
Page:
Frida Kahlo
Anonymous
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snugglebuck
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd Feb 2014Forum Posts: 1873
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Dying Deer
Beauty
Broken
Crushed
Suffers
Broken not crushed
Beauty suffers in artistry
Just a quick Tyburn style poem to help kick things off.
Dying Deer
Beauty
Broken
Crushed
Suffers
Broken not crushed
Beauty suffers in artistry
Just a quick Tyburn style poem to help kick things off.
Anonymous
Title: Frida
Escaping from one chaos to another
from a child to a wife to a lover
Born in a country both exotic and poor
Named after the coyotes living outside each door
She was without perfection
One step away from dereliction
And then she wore long skirts to hide her deformity
Polio being her childhood scorn without pity
Until she painted what she knew
Adding vibrant colours to a few
And blood to the others, for no other gain
I suspect, other than depicting her private pain
Painting her reality, she insisted she did not paint dreams
instead, she depicted beheadings and screams
Always including her frowning image
But for a few still life and pilgrimage
The ripping out of fetus with womb
There are steps leading to her tomb
She was clearly distressed
and anxious, even at rest
And the men, oh the men; She relied on
One affair after another with a few spawn
Though she was life, she fought life and then tipped the beam
She thought about death; often, it would seem
Always watching round the corner, she was evil eyed
as if the confusion she portrayed lived within until she died
Her likeness sharp and keen
Sometimes man, sometimes women, it would seem
Born Magdalena Carmen Frida Kahlo y Calderon
amidst the Mexican Revolution
All her life, she kept prim and proper
all the while fighting with anyone who tried to stop her
She was deeply afraid yet brave
Any ounce of fear she would save
And then relish what she did in her thoughts in her paintings of torture or paintings of death
saying, at the end, that she hoped to never to return in her last breath
Escaping from one chaos to another
from a child to a wife to a lover
Born in a country both exotic and poor
Named after the coyotes living outside each door
She was without perfection
One step away from dereliction
And then she wore long skirts to hide her deformity
Polio being her childhood scorn without pity
Until she painted what she knew
Adding vibrant colours to a few
And blood to the others, for no other gain
I suspect, other than depicting her private pain
Painting her reality, she insisted she did not paint dreams
instead, she depicted beheadings and screams
Always including her frowning image
But for a few still life and pilgrimage
The ripping out of fetus with womb
There are steps leading to her tomb
She was clearly distressed
and anxious, even at rest
And the men, oh the men; She relied on
One affair after another with a few spawn
Though she was life, she fought life and then tipped the beam
She thought about death; often, it would seem
Always watching round the corner, she was evil eyed
as if the confusion she portrayed lived within until she died
Her likeness sharp and keen
Sometimes man, sometimes women, it would seem
Born Magdalena Carmen Frida Kahlo y Calderon
amidst the Mexican Revolution
All her life, she kept prim and proper
all the while fighting with anyone who tried to stop her
She was deeply afraid yet brave
Any ounce of fear she would save
And then relish what she did in her thoughts in her paintings of torture or paintings of death
saying, at the end, that she hoped to never to return in her last breath
Anonymous
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Anonymous
The Broken Column
the maiden voyage she ascends
against colors against winds
skin dreamy slow simmering dreams
soaked in amber-lust purged by sea
tips singed aurora golden kisses
blaze aflame red spanish roses
ashes across sky
be still
mi’ corazón
the end is almost near
this earth shall never hear
the silent cries of agony and pain
heart-shaped splinters piercing skin
bleeding rusty wounds
splattered in cold hands
rivers ravines shrinking faith's frays
crown of moss boldly dares bastions
circling dark coal of her eyes
midnight in hair a veil of frail light
she tucked her flesh folded inside out
under crimson moon and warped clouds
plucking thorns piece by piece
nailed to her tongue
unknown mysteries
loneliness and ache ghosts in the night
silence
rattled cage of bones
the barren womb covered with dust
sing songs of love whispered in muted tones
lulling lullaby a mother’s adieu
te' amo mas que mi piel
nothing is permanent
but lover’s regrets
and the rain came unexpectedly
from fractured skies
tear
by
tear
falling
where they may
Diego
Diego
Where is her grave?
the maiden voyage she ascends
against colors against winds
skin dreamy slow simmering dreams
soaked in amber-lust purged by sea
tips singed aurora golden kisses
blaze aflame red spanish roses
ashes across sky
be still
mi’ corazón
the end is almost near
this earth shall never hear
the silent cries of agony and pain
heart-shaped splinters piercing skin
bleeding rusty wounds
splattered in cold hands
rivers ravines shrinking faith's frays
crown of moss boldly dares bastions
circling dark coal of her eyes
midnight in hair a veil of frail light
she tucked her flesh folded inside out
under crimson moon and warped clouds
plucking thorns piece by piece
nailed to her tongue
unknown mysteries
loneliness and ache ghosts in the night
silence
rattled cage of bones
the barren womb covered with dust
sing songs of love whispered in muted tones
lulling lullaby a mother’s adieu
te' amo mas que mi piel
nothing is permanent
but lover’s regrets
and the rain came unexpectedly
from fractured skies
tear
by
tear
falling
where they may
Diego
Diego
Where is her grave?
Anonymous
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chump
Forum Posts: 417
Thought Provoker
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Gods gift of a womb
Spelled her dominance doom
She wanted a shovel not a broom
Not content to nurture or brood
Nature thinks her position is rude
Changing your role according to mood
She could have been happy
She could have been whole
Refusing to settle for her gender dole
A lack of passion
For normal in fashion
Hard truth for your dreams to smash on
Spelled her dominance doom
She wanted a shovel not a broom
Not content to nurture or brood
Nature thinks her position is rude
Changing your role according to mood
She could have been happy
She could have been whole
Refusing to settle for her gender dole
A lack of passion
For normal in fashion
Hard truth for your dreams to smash on
Anonymous
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Vandel_Viaclovsky
Van
Forum Posts: 126
Van
Thought Provoker
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Joined 21st July 2013Forum Posts: 126
un poema algo sobre Frida Kahlo
“They thought I was a Surrealist, but I wasn't. I never painted dreams. I painted my own reality.”
― Frida Kahlo
end-over-end the mural extends
(out from this pelvis of thorns and string)
and watermelons consort with lemons instead
(atop a dusty sheet of broken things)
en la casa azul
(Frida Kahlo sits on her stool)
weeping golden medallions or lead
(in a house of tangible blue )
tears of quartz soak bleeding through
(cursing outward from the empty womb)
in a blue house in Coyoacán
(the wound wraps itself around the room)
butterflies bloom by morning, and peacocks
(bloom looming conduits of memento mori )
a parrot sings tequila scenes
(beating the double ire of its wings)
bleeds and bleeds within the dream
(smokes upon the pulse and sleep)
sweeping arrows into the stag
(how they stick like a spider's web)
an osprey flies away with the thread
(the wound wraps itself around the head)
she levels her brow like a blade
(we sing alone for our bread)
the ionic column of her spine embeds
(in the cracked collarbone of that sky)
no Mexican sun nor moon so bright
(time over time of barren white)
branches of pink streaked with lime
(we strip its skins for green pine)
beneath the tree which bears no fruit
(we gather the rinds to remind)
to remind this life itself of life
(we fill our brushes with the blood we find)
“They thought I was a Surrealist, but I wasn't. I never painted dreams. I painted my own reality.”
― Frida Kahlo
end-over-end the mural extends
(out from this pelvis of thorns and string)
and watermelons consort with lemons instead
(atop a dusty sheet of broken things)
en la casa azul
(Frida Kahlo sits on her stool)
weeping golden medallions or lead
(in a house of tangible blue )
tears of quartz soak bleeding through
(cursing outward from the empty womb)
in a blue house in Coyoacán
(the wound wraps itself around the room)
butterflies bloom by morning, and peacocks
(bloom looming conduits of memento mori )
a parrot sings tequila scenes
(beating the double ire of its wings)
bleeds and bleeds within the dream
(smokes upon the pulse and sleep)
sweeping arrows into the stag
(how they stick like a spider's web)
an osprey flies away with the thread
(the wound wraps itself around the head)
she levels her brow like a blade
(we sing alone for our bread)
the ionic column of her spine embeds
(in the cracked collarbone of that sky)
no Mexican sun nor moon so bright
(time over time of barren white)
branches of pink streaked with lime
(we strip its skins for green pine)
beneath the tree which bears no fruit
(we gather the rinds to remind)
to remind this life itself of life
(we fill our brushes with the blood we find)
Anonymous
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wallyroo92
Forum Posts: 1796
Tyrant of Words
147
Joined 11th July 2012Forum Posts: 1796
Centuries of Torture
Throughout your centuries of torture
Your art showed everyone your pain
And still you delved deep into culture
Your vision showed us another plane
Oh your reality! the torment and the gravity
The tragedies and maladies this life bestowed upon you
And yet out of that a beautiful gift was born
Torn as the entire world can witness - your house in blue
All that time confined to bed
As you poured the images from your head
In that isolation you found some consolation with your painting
And amid all those love affairs
You two were quite the pair
As panzon’s love for you seemed to keep you both sustaining
But still you pushed through the agony
As you wished for death somehow valiantly
You experienced so many tragic and awful ordeals
And through that we saw your heart
Your tortured soul expressed in art
Your expression was like magic, beautiful and surreal
Throughout your centuries of torture
Your art showed everyone your pain
And still you delved deep into culture
Your vision showed us another plane
Oh your reality! the torment and the gravity
The tragedies and maladies this life bestowed upon you
And yet out of that a beautiful gift was born
Torn as the entire world can witness - your house in blue
All that time confined to bed
As you poured the images from your head
In that isolation you found some consolation with your painting
And amid all those love affairs
You two were quite the pair
As panzon’s love for you seemed to keep you both sustaining
But still you pushed through the agony
As you wished for death somehow valiantly
You experienced so many tragic and awful ordeals
And through that we saw your heart
Your tortured soul expressed in art
Your expression was like magic, beautiful and surreal
Anonymous
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Anonymous
Thank you very much Aemelia for the award. It's a great honor to share it with Van and all the poets who participated in this comp in highlighting a great artist and a wonderful woman.