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Poetry Contest Description
your take on a Type O Negative song
Get your goth on. Type O Negative is one of my absolute favorite bands of all time and has served as a great source of inspiration for me. October Rust and Bloody Kisses are, to me, the definitive goth albums. The world lost a true talent with Peter's passing. What I want is your take on Type O. As usual, I will supply some links to help get you prepared.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vFwYJYl5GUQ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3sMALbhJU6M
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xD5No_JRrZw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p9kbj_aeO2k
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgkBWZXVLyk
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NJ3aiM8K6D0
There are many more to be sampled and enjoy. So, please, explore to your heart's content.
TWO WEEKS
TWO ENTRIES PER POET MAX
NEW OR OLD
MAKE IT DARK
MAKE IT SENSUAL
MAKE IT TRAGIC
GET TO IT
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vFwYJYl5GUQ
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3sMALbhJU6M
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xD5No_JRrZw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p9kbj_aeO2k
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgkBWZXVLyk
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NJ3aiM8K6D0
There are many more to be sampled and enjoy. So, please, explore to your heart's content.
TWO WEEKS
TWO ENTRIES PER POET MAX
NEW OR OLD
MAKE IT DARK
MAKE IT SENSUAL
MAKE IT TRAGIC
GET TO IT
crimsin
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Eternal Darkness
rosary beads against pale milky flesh
ruby lips, raven hair
can you deny her anything?
as the clock strikes midnight
she is on the hunt again
crucifix upon her wall
keeps not ravishing bloodlust at bay
she is vampire her hunger will not wait
prowling after men
seductress of the night
black orchids dying in moonlight
under enchantment they revive when she feeds
slithering into my mind's garden
with her unholy ways
seducing me taken to her inner chambers
drinking my body dry as she rides
before taking my last breath
I hear her reciting the rosary
chanting for heaven to receive me
blood dripping from her fangs as she prays
she slips out into the darkness
that receives her well
walking among the tombstones
of past lovers she grieves
rosary beads against pale milky flesh
ruby lips, raven hair
can you deny her anything?
as the clock strikes midnight
she is on the hunt again
crucifix upon her wall
keeps not ravishing bloodlust at bay
she is vampire her hunger will not wait
"Christian Woman"
rosary beads against pale milky flesh
ruby lips, raven hair
can you deny her anything?
as the clock strikes midnight
she is on the hunt again
crucifix upon her wall
keeps not ravishing bloodlust at bay
she is vampire her hunger will not wait
prowling after men
seductress of the night
black orchids dying in moonlight
under enchantment they revive when she feeds
slithering into my mind's garden
with her unholy ways
seducing me taken to her inner chambers
drinking my body dry as she rides
before taking my last breath
I hear her reciting the rosary
chanting for heaven to receive me
blood dripping from her fangs as she prays
she slips out into the darkness
that receives her well
walking among the tombstones
of past lovers she grieves
rosary beads against pale milky flesh
ruby lips, raven hair
can you deny her anything?
as the clock strikes midnight
she is on the hunt again
crucifix upon her wall
keeps not ravishing bloodlust at bay
she is vampire her hunger will not wait
"Christian Woman"
HadesRising
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Thank you, lovely Crim, for kicking this off. Anyone else?
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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I am exploring their music
....plan on it Frank...I am loving a lot of it.
....plan on it Frank...I am loving a lot of it.
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Break
In need of
Vengeance...
For impure touch from mother fucker
That spilled his perversions
On my chest
And in my youth spitting
Snarling mouth
I take my flight in nightsong
Sung loud with Angel and Demon
Chorus
In perfect harmony
My wings spread wide despite your
Cruel clip
I toy with your weakest dimension
To bind you
In terror dream
And cause you blood curl scream
To wake in fetal position shake
My hostile mind
As sharp as any knife
Will cut your face to shreads
And erase it from
This
Horrific memory
Watch the bleed
Laughter rising
And adding dark pitch
To my hungry need
And rightful hell fury voice
And castrate your ego
And title
With daunting stare burn
Straight into your black eyes
And tremble your soul
With in tact furious femininity
That you could not
Take from me
Mother fucker
(Just listened to many...and wrote..)
In need of
Vengeance...
For impure touch from mother fucker
That spilled his perversions
On my chest
And in my youth spitting
Snarling mouth
I take my flight in nightsong
Sung loud with Angel and Demon
Chorus
In perfect harmony
My wings spread wide despite your
Cruel clip
I toy with your weakest dimension
To bind you
In terror dream
And cause you blood curl scream
To wake in fetal position shake
My hostile mind
As sharp as any knife
Will cut your face to shreads
And erase it from
This
Horrific memory
Watch the bleed
Laughter rising
And adding dark pitch
To my hungry need
And rightful hell fury voice
And castrate your ego
And title
With daunting stare burn
Straight into your black eyes
And tremble your soul
With in tact furious femininity
That you could not
Take from me
Mother fucker
(Just listened to many...and wrote..)
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Nice one, Jen. Who else?
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Death Comes For Us All
in the blackness of night
the grim reaper comes upon us all
with his unholy scythe
harvester of souls
the light blinks out in my eyes
as each person slips through my hands
a hole in me where they once were
pray death would come for me
embrace me in it's cold black hands
take me to my final destination
wraith like, shadow of a soul
withered from within and without
I've seen death up close
staring me in the face
ghostly specter
tormenting me with promises
never kept
one by one all I've loved
lost to that pale horse
ripping my innards out
vampire I can't die
I ride hard deep into the night
watching through centuries untold
as everything grows old then cold
tormented of mind
in the blackness of night
the grim reaper comes upon us all
with his unholy scythe
harvester of souls
comes for all but one
my blackened heart
too vile even for death
an empty vessel I ride on
"Everything Dies"
in the blackness of night
the grim reaper comes upon us all
with his unholy scythe
harvester of souls
the light blinks out in my eyes
as each person slips through my hands
a hole in me where they once were
pray death would come for me
embrace me in it's cold black hands
take me to my final destination
wraith like, shadow of a soul
withered from within and without
I've seen death up close
staring me in the face
ghostly specter
tormenting me with promises
never kept
one by one all I've loved
lost to that pale horse
ripping my innards out
vampire I can't die
I ride hard deep into the night
watching through centuries untold
as everything grows old then cold
tormented of mind
in the blackness of night
the grim reaper comes upon us all
with his unholy scythe
harvester of souls
comes for all but one
my blackened heart
too vile even for death
an empty vessel I ride on
"Everything Dies"
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Give me the darkness where obscenity wanders,
spiderlings creeping under deep lichen stones.
No moon to glitter on blood drenched fangs
as I slither to meet my forbidden destiny.
Beware all ye that dare to enter the stench
of my underworld caverns, even now preparing,
with jet black wings to launch upon the unwary
maiden in her lily white bed, the nightmare,
the phallus of horror embedded deep within.
Reaching down to devour her deepest soul
seeding unspeakable madness, her eyes no
longer seeing life, feeling only degradation.
spiderlings creeping under deep lichen stones.
No moon to glitter on blood drenched fangs
as I slither to meet my forbidden destiny.
Beware all ye that dare to enter the stench
of my underworld caverns, even now preparing,
with jet black wings to launch upon the unwary
maiden in her lily white bed, the nightmare,
the phallus of horror embedded deep within.
Reaching down to devour her deepest soul
seeding unspeakable madness, her eyes no
longer seeing life, feeling only degradation.
LobodeSanPedro
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In their '62 'vette
Sharing one cigarette
~ My Girlfriend's Girlfriend
the mechanic
got the call about 10 pm
Not a booty call
Dead battery call
Babe my car died at the garage at work
The attendant says it's my battery
It won't start even with jumper cables
she tells me
Take my last shot of Jacks
And last drag of the joint I'd been smoking
25 minute drive one way to the 24 hour Walmart
new battery
old car
55 minutes the other way to her job
I want to be mad with her when I get there
And I am
The Mets had just sent the game into extra innings
I get there wearing my jeans, work boots, white wife beater and a
You-called-Me-for-this-shit Attitude
She's wearing that skirt
Yeah that one
The one I hate to love her ass in
The one that I see all the construction guys check her out in
when I drop her off for work
It's a quick swap
The dead for the living
but the connection heads need changing too
We drive to my cousin's shop
I've got a key because I work on my bike there
Again, it's a quick swap
The dead for the living
Resurrection
But now it's time to tithe
I call her over to the work desk
Glide behind her
And start cuffing her wrists to the arms of the chair in front of her with electrical tape
First the left
Then the right
What are you doing?
she asks
Shut the fuck up
But I know her and that mouth
So I wad up more tape into a ball
Jam it in
And secure it with another piece
her eyes are watering
Stop being a baby
I tell her as I hike up her skirt
I see your wearing your big girl panties
For her that meant no panties
I get some light chains hanging from the side of the shop
Tie them in a figure eight around her ankles
shoulder width apart and
Around the legs of the chair
Tight
So tight that when I step between her legs onto the chains
It forces her knees to buckle
Rocking that bubble ass of hers onto me
Shut the fuck up
Stop being a baby
I grab two big clamps off the desk
The kind for holding work orders or invoices
Rip open her blouse and bra
Clamp one on her left tit
Then right
I disappear into the dark for a moment
Step back into the light with a car battery
already with cables on it
The cable's long enough for me
to make a noose of it around her neck
The connectors dangling between her breasts
Shut the fuck up
Stop being a baby
I've got the munchies now
and instinctively I drop to my knees
putting my weight on the chains between her legs
forcing her pussy down my throat
with my arms coiled around her thighs
She's buckling from my weight and the sensation
But scared to move
as the motion might send a connector right towards her clamped nipples
I stand up and take off my cowboy belt
Lash it across her ass
until it's pink
Like when you suck on a grape Blowpop
the sweet chewy part comes after licking the tasty dark veneer
Her gagged moans make me
A rock
I use the cables around her neck as reins
And pump deep inside her unmercifully
She's squirting all over the chains below
Her quivering knees making them rattle
I stop to catch my breathe
Didn't give a shit about hers
Reach over her shoulders from behind
And brush the connectors over her clamped nipples
Shut the fuck up
Stop being a baby
Just as it seems she will surely pass out
I prop her up
With my cock in her ass
Slow at first
so she can find the rhythm
And just when we were in sync
And I'm about to explode
I reach over her shoulders from behind
Brush her clamped nipples
With the cables
Moving the living a step closer
to facing the dead
We both collapse to the floor
When I finally catch my breath
I sit up and ask her
Is this why you don't join triple A
She looks over and simply nods
Yes
Sharing one cigarette
~ My Girlfriend's Girlfriend
the mechanic
got the call about 10 pm
Not a booty call
Dead battery call
Babe my car died at the garage at work
The attendant says it's my battery
It won't start even with jumper cables
she tells me
Take my last shot of Jacks
And last drag of the joint I'd been smoking
25 minute drive one way to the 24 hour Walmart
new battery
old car
55 minutes the other way to her job
I want to be mad with her when I get there
And I am
The Mets had just sent the game into extra innings
I get there wearing my jeans, work boots, white wife beater and a
You-called-Me-for-this-shit Attitude
She's wearing that skirt
Yeah that one
The one I hate to love her ass in
The one that I see all the construction guys check her out in
when I drop her off for work
It's a quick swap
The dead for the living
but the connection heads need changing too
We drive to my cousin's shop
I've got a key because I work on my bike there
Again, it's a quick swap
The dead for the living
Resurrection
But now it's time to tithe
I call her over to the work desk
Glide behind her
And start cuffing her wrists to the arms of the chair in front of her with electrical tape
First the left
Then the right
What are you doing?
she asks
Shut the fuck up
But I know her and that mouth
So I wad up more tape into a ball
Jam it in
And secure it with another piece
her eyes are watering
Stop being a baby
I tell her as I hike up her skirt
I see your wearing your big girl panties
For her that meant no panties
I get some light chains hanging from the side of the shop
Tie them in a figure eight around her ankles
shoulder width apart and
Around the legs of the chair
Tight
So tight that when I step between her legs onto the chains
It forces her knees to buckle
Rocking that bubble ass of hers onto me
Shut the fuck up
Stop being a baby
I grab two big clamps off the desk
The kind for holding work orders or invoices
Rip open her blouse and bra
Clamp one on her left tit
Then right
I disappear into the dark for a moment
Step back into the light with a car battery
already with cables on it
The cable's long enough for me
to make a noose of it around her neck
The connectors dangling between her breasts
Shut the fuck up
Stop being a baby
I've got the munchies now
and instinctively I drop to my knees
putting my weight on the chains between her legs
forcing her pussy down my throat
with my arms coiled around her thighs
She's buckling from my weight and the sensation
But scared to move
as the motion might send a connector right towards her clamped nipples
I stand up and take off my cowboy belt
Lash it across her ass
until it's pink
Like when you suck on a grape Blowpop
the sweet chewy part comes after licking the tasty dark veneer
Her gagged moans make me
A rock
I use the cables around her neck as reins
And pump deep inside her unmercifully
She's squirting all over the chains below
Her quivering knees making them rattle
I stop to catch my breathe
Didn't give a shit about hers
Reach over her shoulders from behind
And brush the connectors over her clamped nipples
Shut the fuck up
Stop being a baby
Just as it seems she will surely pass out
I prop her up
With my cock in her ass
Slow at first
so she can find the rhythm
And just when we were in sync
And I'm about to explode
I reach over her shoulders from behind
Brush her clamped nipples
With the cables
Moving the living a step closer
to facing the dead
We both collapse to the floor
When I finally catch my breath
I sit up and ask her
Is this why you don't join triple A
She looks over and simply nods
Yes
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A cross upon her bedroom wall
From grace she will fall
An image burning in her mind
And between her thighs
~ Christian Woman
eyes of the gypsy at St. Peter's
looking through the panes
assiduously crafted from your melted sands of promise
and the bellows of blackened men
you dare me not to love you with every wound you inflict
with a mere glance
your stained glass is the execution of my sanity
deceptive in their reflection of tranquility
I've spoken blasphemy in your deified walls
crucifying tears
let nimbostratus fears be moved
to elucidate burgeoning light
as I
genuflect
for no one
but you
bathe me in your oscillating waters
for my resurrection
coat my tongue and eyes
until I only
speak you
From grace she will fall
An image burning in her mind
And between her thighs
~ Christian Woman
eyes of the gypsy at St. Peter's
looking through the panes
assiduously crafted from your melted sands of promise
and the bellows of blackened men
you dare me not to love you with every wound you inflict
with a mere glance
your stained glass is the execution of my sanity
deceptive in their reflection of tranquility
I've spoken blasphemy in your deified walls
crucifying tears
let nimbostratus fears be moved
to elucidate burgeoning light
as I
genuflect
for no one
but you
bathe me in your oscillating waters
for my resurrection
coat my tongue and eyes
until I only
speak you
HadesRising
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Thanks everyone, excellent comp.
LobodeSanPedro
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Cool comp my Lord of Dark brother HR ...
Congrats Jen and Crim ... Always a pleasure to read y'all.
Congrats Jen and Crim ... Always a pleasure to read y'all.
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thank you Lord Hades for a great comp.
congrats Jen and Lobo I'm in great company![](/images/forum/smilies/smile.gif)
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congrats Jen and Lobo I'm in great company
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Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Wow....Frank I did not have a clue...man thanks...awesome entries