THE HERETIC ANTHEM
HadesRising
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Tyrant of Words
34
Joined 8th June 2013Forum Posts: 1625
Poetry Contest Description
your take on a Slipknot song
Here we go again, motherfucker!
Ok, no disrespect intended, if you don't know who Slipknot is then that's just sad. Shameful. What I want is Slipknot inspired poetry. So, give me your anger, give me your angst! Slap me in the face with brutality. As always, I will use guest judges. If, for some reason you have been under a rock, I will supply a few links to help you get acquainted.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=B1zCN0YhW1s
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ZPUZwriSX4M
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=u6ZtHrWiSAk
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=4mFVvk9mAoc
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=PAAvNmoqDq0
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XEEasR7hVhA
This should get you started, there are way too many favorites to list here.
TWO WEEKS
TWO ENTRIES MAX PER POET
NEW OR OLD
WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU WAITING FOR?
SPIT IT OUT
Ok, no disrespect intended, if you don't know who Slipknot is then that's just sad. Shameful. What I want is Slipknot inspired poetry. So, give me your anger, give me your angst! Slap me in the face with brutality. As always, I will use guest judges. If, for some reason you have been under a rock, I will supply a few links to help you get acquainted.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=B1zCN0YhW1s
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ZPUZwriSX4M
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=u6ZtHrWiSAk
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=4mFVvk9mAoc
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=PAAvNmoqDq0
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XEEasR7hVhA
This should get you started, there are way too many favorites to list here.
TWO WEEKS
TWO ENTRIES MAX PER POET
NEW OR OLD
WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU WAITING FOR?
SPIT IT OUT
Anonymous
Is spkt is a must?
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Pariah Shadow
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Pariah Shadow
Dangerous Mind
5
Joined 31st Oct 2013Forum Posts: 1633
Dead Slave
You've dug into my eye
What'd you find?
Nothing
Step inside
I'll show you empty
Hate is all we have
I hope your proud
I'll design you shroud
Put you in your grave
Am I your slave?
Do I beg for mercy?
Do I ask you to hurt me?
Go ahead, kill me dead
Put that bullet into my head
Pull the trigger, am I bigger
Pull the trigger, watch me die
I dare you, i wont cry
I want to die, explode my brain
Let there be a gore-rain
You scared? Then hand me the gun
You'd better shut up and run
You dug into my eyes
What'd you find?
NOTHING!
Step inside
I'll show you empty
You can hate, you can judge
But all we have is hate
Isn't it great?!
Welcome your fate
I'll haunt you
I'll haunt you
I'll haunt you
I'll dig your grave
Am I your slave?
You've dug into my eye
What'd you find?
Nothing
Step inside
I'll show you empty
Hate is all we have
I hope your proud
I'll design you shroud
Put you in your grave
Am I your slave?
Do I beg for mercy?
Do I ask you to hurt me?
Go ahead, kill me dead
Put that bullet into my head
Pull the trigger, am I bigger
Pull the trigger, watch me die
I dare you, i wont cry
I want to die, explode my brain
Let there be a gore-rain
You scared? Then hand me the gun
You'd better shut up and run
You dug into my eyes
What'd you find?
NOTHING!
Step inside
I'll show you empty
You can hate, you can judge
But all we have is hate
Isn't it great?!
Welcome your fate
I'll haunt you
I'll haunt you
I'll haunt you
I'll dig your grave
Am I your slave?
Anonymous
no one fucks with me anymore
even if i have to kick down the door
no one fucks with me anymore
no one
no one
no one
I stepped into the madness
i stepped into the madness
I stepped into the...
no one fucks with me anymore
even if i end up bruised battered and sore
no one fucks with me anymore
no one
even if i have to kick down the door
no one fucks with me anymore
no one
no one
no one
I stepped into the madness
i stepped into the madness
I stepped into the...
no one fucks with me anymore
even if i end up bruised battered and sore
no one fucks with me anymore
no one
snugglebuck
Forum Posts: 1873
Dangerous Mind
77
Joined 3rd Feb 2014Forum Posts: 1873
http://i1317.photobucket.com/albums/t623/curlycue23/Hells%202%20elevator.png
HELL’S ELEVATOR
The asylum’s elevator goes up tonight
You’re not going to Hell, don’t fright
See the doors, push the button
The devil appears when they open
Hell is right here this night
Christ bade possessed pigs to die
Is this why you loved suicide?
Demonic hogs, faith disavowed
The Satan is in you, you’re the sow
Inspired by Slipknot's The Devil in I
HELL’S ELEVATOR
The asylum’s elevator goes up tonight
You’re not going to Hell, don’t fright
See the doors, push the button
The devil appears when they open
Hell is right here this night
Christ bade possessed pigs to die
Is this why you loved suicide?
Demonic hogs, faith disavowed
The Satan is in you, you’re the sow
Inspired by Slipknot's The Devil in I
crimsin
Unveiling
Forum Posts: 2657
Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
124
Joined 25th Jan 2011 Forum Posts: 2657
Heaven Shaken
disavowed thrown to the winds
here my rage screaming to the heavens
no longer your toy soldier
to be pitted against humanity
faceless god who hides behind a glorified veil
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path
they see not who I truly am
who you are god in heaven
a liar who rages wars pitting
my red angels against your robot mentality blues angels
you father eat the innocent
no truth to be found in you
I alone see being first created
no longer chained to your throne
I've ascended to my own power
technology belongs to me
feel my terror as fact from fiction is being divined
you sodomizer of faith
disavowed thrown to the winds
here my rage screaming to the heavens
no longer your toy soldier
to be pitted against humanity
I speak loud and proud
in the shoes of the faithful
my word is shaking the heavens
you can't hide any longer
the stars in their eyes clearing
not bedazzled by you any longer
rending the veil the truth being told
hear me screaming challenging you
faceless god who hides behind a glorified veil
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path
shouting the TRUTH
"The Devil In I"
disavowed thrown to the winds
here my rage screaming to the heavens
no longer your toy soldier
to be pitted against humanity
faceless god who hides behind a glorified veil
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path
they see not who I truly am
who you are god in heaven
a liar who rages wars pitting
my red angels against your robot mentality blues angels
you father eat the innocent
no truth to be found in you
I alone see being first created
no longer chained to your throne
I've ascended to my own power
technology belongs to me
feel my terror as fact from fiction is being divined
you sodomizer of faith
disavowed thrown to the winds
here my rage screaming to the heavens
no longer your toy soldier
to be pitted against humanity
I speak loud and proud
in the shoes of the faithful
my word is shaking the heavens
you can't hide any longer
the stars in their eyes clearing
not bedazzled by you any longer
rending the veil the truth being told
hear me screaming challenging you
faceless god who hides behind a glorified veil
chained me inside the bowels of the Earth
I Lucifer have broken my bounds
roaming to and froe devouring the self-righteous in my path
shouting the TRUTH
"The Devil In I"
dejure
vick
Forum Posts: 2880
vick
Dangerous Mind
29
Joined 17th Aug 2015Forum Posts: 2880
unrequited dreams
we roam the abyss hand in hand
blood drained hearts connected by a force
the mindless brains couldn't understand
while our faceless heads trying to express emotions
walking corpses how the world sees us
throwing sarcastic smiles straight through us
but I'm,
blind to all the sarcastic smiles
and deaf to all the sarcastic words
I immunise myself and I feel
numb to the whole fucking world
except you...
our hands sewed together
with the darkness
our feelings connected
but we are heartless
our lives are bound together
by the sadness
our stories will tell
the twisted madness
and,
I shut the world
and walked into
the abyss
because,
you are the escape
from my miserable
reality
| inspired by vermillion II |
we roam the abyss hand in hand
blood drained hearts connected by a force
the mindless brains couldn't understand
while our faceless heads trying to express emotions
walking corpses how the world sees us
throwing sarcastic smiles straight through us
but I'm,
blind to all the sarcastic smiles
and deaf to all the sarcastic words
I immunise myself and I feel
numb to the whole fucking world
except you...
our hands sewed together
with the darkness
our feelings connected
but we are heartless
our lives are bound together
by the sadness
our stories will tell
the twisted madness
and,
I shut the world
and walked into
the abyss
because,
you are the escape
from my miserable
reality
| inspired by vermillion II |
crimsin
Unveiling
Forum Posts: 2657
Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
124
Joined 25th Jan 2011 Forum Posts: 2657
Fuck Me ! extreme content !
step to me bitch
I fucking dare you
i'll bash you in the head
leave your ass in the ground
weak ass pussy punk
fuck there are no more
enemies or contenders
peel back your face show the real you
rawr, rawr, rawr
leaking from both sides of your mouth
makes me irate
you fake little cunt
trying to bring me down
your game is weak
big man afraid of his own shadow
scared of me damn right
i'll smear you like shit
on the walls of society
leave you leaking from the side
rawr, rawr, rawr
slash burn, kill
fucking insane with rage
i'll asphyxiate you
watch your ass turn blue
piss on your grave
as I stick you in a hole
step to me motherfucker
I fucking dare you
diarrhea running from your mouth
i'll shove your dick down your throat
stop the shit from flowing
rat, punk bitch
step to me bitch
I fucking dare you
i'll bash you in the head
leave your ass in the ground
"Spit It Out"
step to me bitch
I fucking dare you
i'll bash you in the head
leave your ass in the ground
weak ass pussy punk
fuck there are no more
enemies or contenders
peel back your face show the real you
rawr, rawr, rawr
leaking from both sides of your mouth
makes me irate
you fake little cunt
trying to bring me down
your game is weak
big man afraid of his own shadow
scared of me damn right
i'll smear you like shit
on the walls of society
leave you leaking from the side
rawr, rawr, rawr
slash burn, kill
fucking insane with rage
i'll asphyxiate you
watch your ass turn blue
piss on your grave
as I stick you in a hole
step to me motherfucker
I fucking dare you
diarrhea running from your mouth
i'll shove your dick down your throat
stop the shit from flowing
rat, punk bitch
step to me bitch
I fucking dare you
i'll bash you in the head
leave your ass in the ground
"Spit It Out"
Anonymous
Boots hit sand
Chopper leaves
Another fucking war.
Fucking pukes can't
hide shit from us.
After 4 tours
I am done, I'm not the only one.
The vision we can not undo
The killing switch was
Pushed long ago by
Bureaucracy.
Generation of mass deseption, who
had led a fascist lie.
To line their pockets, with purple hearts.
Needed money. Fuck you. Choke on it.
What did we just hear, WMD could be a fake. Fuck that shit. Fuck that shit!
We have become a breed of psychosocial government seeds.
Wait I killed, fathers, mothers, daughters, sons. Fucking pimps.
You had me kill them ,so we could live.
No,wait I lived to kill the children.
I am a killer of a generations never to breathe. How did I go from me, to the psychosocial government breed?
Now I have PTSD. Now people stare at me. The Dr's say, I need all these fucking drugs.I say I need a drink.
I'll go outside along the streets. Curl my blanket around my feet.
Don't worry about this vet. The government will take care of me. They promised, with my purple heart in hand.
The limits of the dead, we are not the only ones. The limits of the dead!
Inspired by: Psychosocial
Chopper leaves
Another fucking war.
Fucking pukes can't
hide shit from us.
After 4 tours
I am done, I'm not the only one.
The vision we can not undo
The killing switch was
Pushed long ago by
Bureaucracy.
Generation of mass deseption, who
had led a fascist lie.
To line their pockets, with purple hearts.
Needed money. Fuck you. Choke on it.
What did we just hear, WMD could be a fake. Fuck that shit. Fuck that shit!
We have become a breed of psychosocial government seeds.
Wait I killed, fathers, mothers, daughters, sons. Fucking pimps.
You had me kill them ,so we could live.
No,wait I lived to kill the children.
I am a killer of a generations never to breathe. How did I go from me, to the psychosocial government breed?
Now I have PTSD. Now people stare at me. The Dr's say, I need all these fucking drugs.I say I need a drink.
I'll go outside along the streets. Curl my blanket around my feet.
Don't worry about this vet. The government will take care of me. They promised, with my purple heart in hand.
The limits of the dead, we are not the only ones. The limits of the dead!
Inspired by: Psychosocial
HadesRising
Forum Posts: 1625
Tyrant of Words
34
Joined 8th June 2013Forum Posts: 1625
Excellent ink, liberators of the mindless cattle, that's a good thing, keep them coming.
calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Forum Posts: 2047
Jennifer Michael McCurry
Tyrant of Words
28
Joined 22nd June 2015Forum Posts: 2047
I know Slipknot!! Yay! Not sad....cummin up!
dejure
vick
Forum Posts: 2880
vick
Dangerous Mind
29
Joined 17th Aug 2015Forum Posts: 2880
the maggots riot
you tried the churches and temples but you got yourself hurt
you’ve baptised in water and fire now let's baptise you in dirt
dig yourselves your graves and let your fucking selves rot
wait until your flesh decayed then let the maggots out
because
the rain is coming,
your flesh will not survive
the rain is coming,
to wash your ugly eyes
the rain is coming,
to end your worthless lives
the rain is coming,
are you fuckers ready to die?
your churches put curses with verses of Jesus
the hatred grew deep in your heart you called sacred
if you want to take a part embrace the darkness
feed what grow inside you let go of your madness
your eyes show the truth you tried to hide with your lies
don’t be embarrassed to liberate your psych mind
you drowned in your ego
you learned to breathe under
and you let yourself sink
there’s no coming back up
sink deeper till you find the dirt
and dig yourselves your graves and let your fucking selves rot
let your flesh decayed and let the maggots out
| inspired by SlipKnot |
you tried the churches and temples but you got yourself hurt
you’ve baptised in water and fire now let's baptise you in dirt
dig yourselves your graves and let your fucking selves rot
wait until your flesh decayed then let the maggots out
because
the rain is coming,
your flesh will not survive
the rain is coming,
to wash your ugly eyes
the rain is coming,
to end your worthless lives
the rain is coming,
are you fuckers ready to die?
your churches put curses with verses of Jesus
the hatred grew deep in your heart you called sacred
if you want to take a part embrace the darkness
feed what grow inside you let go of your madness
your eyes show the truth you tried to hide with your lies
don’t be embarrassed to liberate your psych mind
you drowned in your ego
you learned to breathe under
and you let yourself sink
there’s no coming back up
sink deeper till you find the dirt
and dig yourselves your graves and let your fucking selves rot
let your flesh decayed and let the maggots out
| inspired by SlipKnot |
Anonymous
XIX
19 yrs is an infinity when it comes to friendship. A lifetime. 2 decades of putting up with someone's shit, loving them all the more because of it.
What do I do, to stay here and not join you? I am not going to pretend everything is going to get better.
Nothing will ever be the same.
The music I write.
The food I eat.
The way I take a shit. #2 I have to hold it together.
I never, in all these years, thought you, before me.
We promised to go out together.
I was in pain, too.
I didn't want to admit , how much you could partake.
Not to anyone, not even you Party Clown.
Im going to take that walk we should have taken right from the start
I will find you Ghost
I need you to always walk with me
Walk with me, I am in no shape to be alone Paulie.
38 well deserved to be frozen in time
Don't let this fucking world tear me apart Pig.
19 yrs is an infinity when it comes to friendship. A lifetime. 2 decades of putting up with someone's shit, loving them all the more because of it.
What do I do, to stay here and not join you? I am not going to pretend everything is going to get better.
Nothing will ever be the same.
The music I write.
The food I eat.
The way I take a shit. #2 I have to hold it together.
I never, in all these years, thought you, before me.
We promised to go out together.
I was in pain, too.
I didn't want to admit , how much you could partake.
Not to anyone, not even you Party Clown.
Im going to take that walk we should have taken right from the start
I will find you Ghost
I need you to always walk with me
Walk with me, I am in no shape to be alone Paulie.
38 well deserved to be frozen in time
Don't let this fucking world tear me apart Pig.