Space & Time or Time & Space

Poetry Contest Description
See below
Today, I've been here (on DUP) for 4 years
so I thought I'd hold a competition :)
one new entry each, please
on Space and Time, whatever that inspires in you...
have fun

you can edit to the end as I won't read until the comp. ends.
thank you all in advance!
Beukez
Forum Posts: 79
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 20th Mar 2013 
Forum Posts: 79
Time and space
As time slowly tears away at me
i stare up at the sky,
realizing what i used to be
Dare i say with shivers up my spine
a snake flexing
vexing a feeling
of inner meaning
something all know of
through space and time
i see these beings
cast there eye
through space and time
to see us see them
As time slowly tears away at me
i stare up at the sky,
realizing what i used to be
Dare i say with shivers up my spine
a snake flexing
vexing a feeling
of inner meaning
something all know of
through space and time
i see these beings
cast there eye
through space and time
to see us see them

thank you, beukez
for going first and kicking it off :)
for going first and kicking it off :)
deepthreat1490
Joined 24th Feb 2016
Forum Posts: 56
Twisted Dreamer

Forum Posts: 56
Time and space
i don't need time and space
i am going hard like i am running for a race
you is the one i want under and behind me
as long as you do not backstabbed me
maybe i need some space and time
because i need to take my time to unwine
love care and becoming a friend is all about giving people space and time
i don't need time and space
i am going hard like i am running for a race
you is the one i want under and behind me
as long as you do not backstabbed me
maybe i need some space and time
because i need to take my time to unwine
love care and becoming a friend is all about giving people space and time
SatansSperm
Forum Posts: 3112
Dangerous Mind
13
Joined 19th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 3112
Without you
Once
we cast the same shadow
now the vast
space between us
leaves a lump in my throat
as deep
as the oceans
&
i cannot
swallow
nor
breathe...
I sit in
shadows of remembrance
in deja vu
of when
mismatched hands
touched
& echos
of repentance bells
did not ring
in my ears
Once
we cast the same shadow
now the vast
space between us
leaves a lump in my throat
as deep
as the oceans
&
i cannot
swallow
nor
breathe...
I sit in
shadows of remembrance
in deja vu
of when
mismatched hands
touched
& echos
of repentance bells
did not ring
in my ears
lepperochan
CraicDealer
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 14648
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows


Forum Posts: 14648
Space within - touhtiw ecaps
(ก)
and time ain't no Robin Hood
wouldn't give it space on my wrist
because it cares for nothing
(กก)
She offered me space
and I refused
then she forced it upon me
so I filled it with anger
(กกก)
look at it, fool
do you think ol' Mr Higgs
gives a fiddler's fuck
where the little hand points
(ก)
and time ain't no Robin Hood
wouldn't give it space on my wrist
because it cares for nothing
(กก)
She offered me space
and I refused
then she forced it upon me
so I filled it with anger
(กกก)
look at it, fool
do you think ol' Mr Higgs
gives a fiddler's fuck
where the little hand points

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anna_grin
ANNAN
Forum Posts: 3367
ANNAN
Dangerous Mind
15
Joined 24th Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 3367
i wasn't watching the clock
and a year passed
needless to say i burned the fucking pizza.
and a year passed
needless to say i burned the fucking pizza.
wallyroo92
161
Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1952
Tyrant of Words


Forum Posts: 1952
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Quill-in-Heart
Tony Pena
12
Joined 6th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1078
Tony Pena
Fire of Insight


Forum Posts: 1078
Connecting dots
Seconds tick off and burn
like embers passing into
a deep dark pouch nestled
between bosom and brain
till which time the heart
demands answers of the head
spilling the sparkling contents
onto a vast black velvet
like pieces of a jigsaw puzzle
and the child within you
sits for hours rearranging
the tiny shapes to form
constellations to shine
forever in the nighttime sky.
Seconds tick off and burn
like embers passing into
a deep dark pouch nestled
between bosom and brain
till which time the heart
demands answers of the head
spilling the sparkling contents
onto a vast black velvet
like pieces of a jigsaw puzzle
and the child within you
sits for hours rearranging
the tiny shapes to form
constellations to shine
forever in the nighttime sky.

A big thanks to everyone who's participated so far
3 weeks to go...

3 weeks to go...
HarleyQinn_2
DarkSnake1010
2
Joined 26th Feb 2016
Forum Posts: 218
DarkSnake1010
Thought Provoker


Forum Posts: 218
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Raychel
Joined 8th Mar 2016
Forum Posts: 1
Strange Creature

Forum Posts: 1
Nice work :)
HarleyQinn_2
DarkSnake1010
2
Joined 26th Feb 2016
Forum Posts: 218
DarkSnake1010
Thought Provoker


Forum Posts: 218
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dejure
vick
Forum Posts: 2884
vick
Dangerous Mind
29
Joined 17th Aug 2015
Forum Posts: 2884
bet on me
mute your ears and
blind your eyes
set your soul free
as I did mine
sync your heart beat
aligned with mine
hear my life how it
runs racing the time
time passed my soul
waving good bye
leaving me locked
inside this dice
take it and roll it
and turn it upside
bet on the two as
am standing on five
I locked myself from
the world outside
within this space
I crawled inside
choked by the torrid air
I prayed and cried
for a soul like mine
to step inside
break my shell
of egos and lies
free me from my
innocent pride
mute your ears and
blind your eyes
set your soul free
as I did mine
sync your heart beat
aligned with mine
hear my life how it
runs racing the time
time passed my soul
waving good bye
leaving me locked
inside this dice
take it and roll it
and turn it upside
bet on the two as
am standing on five
I locked myself from
the world outside
within this space
I crawled inside
choked by the torrid air
I prayed and cried
for a soul like mine
to step inside
break my shell
of egos and lies
free me from my
innocent pride