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Poetry competition CLOSED 29th February 2016 5:46am
WINNER
Artemios
Artemios
RUNNERS-UP:
wallyroo92
and gardenlover
Sex Ritual
Poetry Contest Description
Create an erotic ritual..a chant, prayer, sacrifice to the sex Gods, Goddess...
This should be wild and of a religion of your own design....
Spiritual sex...
No "unwanted" violent brutal sadism please...be an adult...but hedonistic and creative...
2 weeks
2 entries
colabs welcome
new to anywhere...not just DU
i will answer any questions and add info ...so go ahead...
get creative!
Spiritual sex...
No "unwanted" violent brutal sadism please...be an adult...but hedonistic and creative...
2 weeks
2 entries
colabs welcome
new to anywhere...not just DU
i will answer any questions and add info ...so go ahead...
get creative!
Ex piece....
Sex Cult Starman
you are laid in our star...
shackled there and we dance around your wild eyes
naked of clothing and mercy..
we bind you...a ribbon wrapped around your balls and big cock...
the blood gathers as your heart races
to our chanted song..
do you like what you see John?
look hard look long...
see us grind and moan into one another...
we devour....
we are ravenous...
and we escalate as your staff rizes to our wild humping..
like beasts torn from virtue...
loud music drums the rhythm of your lust for us..
high priestess nips your sack...
her filed teeth prick deep...
her sharp teeth bite into your red flesh
we have chosen you John...
to give us our next daughter...
we each suck from your drip drip testicle ..
you ooooze our bloody desire
we feed
off your strange fire...
then blood red lips on your mouth...
you are going to be ridden...
broken and tamed....
collared as our Slave
Your semen collected and saved...
be prepared for some pain baby...
but also much pleasure...
your body will shake and tremble..
ritual de la habitual in outrageous measure
your balls suns of fire..
feel them in super nova burn
ova and ova our ovaries yearn and sing....
plunge you in our tight ring...
when you shout..
you will receive the whip..
a special one..
just for you moon lover..
long thread of black leather with two sharp stars at the end. .
it is cold john...
the metal stars like ice...
kept in a freezer until taken out....
one stars edge has a hooked prick..
it will catch your skin...
a letting often as your ass is Smacked..
all blood sucked
so if your tender bottom flesh is torn
a red mouth will catch every drop..
just like the tip of your cock...
any drops there will be prayed to
and upon...
are you ready to be a feast...?
you are the chosen one...
a banquet for our many hungry hands, mouths..
and jennifer's womb....
she loves you...
and we approve.
Sex Cult Starman
you are laid in our star...
shackled there and we dance around your wild eyes
naked of clothing and mercy..
we bind you...a ribbon wrapped around your balls and big cock...
the blood gathers as your heart races
to our chanted song..
do you like what you see John?
look hard look long...
see us grind and moan into one another...
we devour....
we are ravenous...
and we escalate as your staff rizes to our wild humping..
like beasts torn from virtue...
loud music drums the rhythm of your lust for us..
high priestess nips your sack...
her filed teeth prick deep...
her sharp teeth bite into your red flesh
we have chosen you John...
to give us our next daughter...
we each suck from your drip drip testicle ..
you ooooze our bloody desire
we feed
off your strange fire...
then blood red lips on your mouth...
you are going to be ridden...
broken and tamed....
collared as our Slave
Your semen collected and saved...
be prepared for some pain baby...
but also much pleasure...
your body will shake and tremble..
ritual de la habitual in outrageous measure
your balls suns of fire..
feel them in super nova burn
ova and ova our ovaries yearn and sing....
plunge you in our tight ring...
when you shout..
you will receive the whip..
a special one..
just for you moon lover..
long thread of black leather with two sharp stars at the end. .
it is cold john...
the metal stars like ice...
kept in a freezer until taken out....
one stars edge has a hooked prick..
it will catch your skin...
a letting often as your ass is Smacked..
all blood sucked
so if your tender bottom flesh is torn
a red mouth will catch every drop..
just like the tip of your cock...
any drops there will be prayed to
and upon...
are you ready to be a feast...?
you are the chosen one...
a banquet for our many hungry hands, mouths..
and jennifer's womb....
she loves you...
and we approve.
Anonymous
!
my vomit encristed pen longs
for her virgin embrace
I shagg my load into lyme and lace.
I pregnate the human race
with some on my face
I feel dismorse and regrace
ballrooms soon fill
dancing airs
icy chill
to you I give chase
my lather your vocal base
yours or my place?
for her virgin embrace
I shagg my load into lyme and lace.
I pregnate the human race
with some on my face
I feel dismorse and regrace
ballrooms soon fill
dancing airs
icy chill
to you I give chase
my lather your vocal base
yours or my place?
rabbit..
Gotta say..
My lather your vocal base
yours or my place...
Wow...that is really genius word play..
I pregnate the human race
with some on my face
I feel dismorse and regrace
the ice bitch ball..they turn their heads..thats your trigger...
I know what this is. and it feels a little cathardic actually, knowing you as a person and poet... And I think this is a great place and great way to say it...
Very raw real stuff...what i hoped to find here....
bit of brilliant darlin...
disturbing chilling...
I really appreciate this....
Thanks for starting this off!
Gotta say..
My lather your vocal base
yours or my place...
Wow...that is really genius word play..
I pregnate the human race
with some on my face
I feel dismorse and regrace
the ice bitch ball..they turn their heads..thats your trigger...
I know what this is. and it feels a little cathardic actually, knowing you as a person and poet... And I think this is a great place and great way to say it...
Very raw real stuff...what i hoped to find here....
bit of brilliant darlin...
disturbing chilling...
I really appreciate this....
Thanks for starting this off!
Multiple Tongues
She spreads her legs wide open
Giving them access to her beautiful shell
And they on their knees lap at her
Like beasts with a ravenous hunger to quell
She moans in delight despite her position
Seated on the altar up on high
A line of men and women stands and waits
To taste the juices that flow from her thighs
They idolize her like a goddess divine
But she definitely is not a saint
As she gives herself freely to the sinners
Who kiss and lick her clit and her taint
Some women stand in quiet amazement
As they themselves get wet at the sight
Of the goddess being eaten out
In constant joy and throes of delight
Others softly kiss her legs and her feet
In complete reverence of her sensuality
The pleasure of multiple tongues
Is a wicked fantasy turned into reality
They take turns worshipping her sex
The sacred ritual to see who is the one
To please her and make her release
To satisfy her until she’s able to cum
The goddess looks at each of them lovingly
As she whimpers and closes her eyes
And all of them linger waiting to see
Which one of them she would baptize
Then a beautiful young girl walks up and kneels
They feel the connection when their eyes meet
And as her youthful mouth opens to lap
The goddess delightfully quivers in heat
The young woman kisses and licks with such a passion
That the goddess begins to writhe and shake
Climaxing into the young woman's full lips and mouth
Releasing all her nectar with an enormous quake
They all witness the young girl being doused
The goddess comes off her throne to give her a kiss
Their lips and tongues locked with a fever
“I love you” the young girl whispers in bliss
The girl then is disrobed and carried off
By the animals who are under a spell
To satiate all their wants and their needs
By the cannibals with a hunger to quell
Giving them access to her beautiful shell
And they on their knees lap at her
Like beasts with a ravenous hunger to quell
She moans in delight despite her position
Seated on the altar up on high
A line of men and women stands and waits
To taste the juices that flow from her thighs
They idolize her like a goddess divine
But she definitely is not a saint
As she gives herself freely to the sinners
Who kiss and lick her clit and her taint
Some women stand in quiet amazement
As they themselves get wet at the sight
Of the goddess being eaten out
In constant joy and throes of delight
Others softly kiss her legs and her feet
In complete reverence of her sensuality
The pleasure of multiple tongues
Is a wicked fantasy turned into reality
They take turns worshipping her sex
The sacred ritual to see who is the one
To please her and make her release
To satisfy her until she’s able to cum
The goddess looks at each of them lovingly
As she whimpers and closes her eyes
And all of them linger waiting to see
Which one of them she would baptize
Then a beautiful young girl walks up and kneels
They feel the connection when their eyes meet
And as her youthful mouth opens to lap
The goddess delightfully quivers in heat
The young woman kisses and licks with such a passion
That the goddess begins to writhe and shake
Climaxing into the young woman's full lips and mouth
Releasing all her nectar with an enormous quake
They all witness the young girl being doused
The goddess comes off her throne to give her a kiss
Their lips and tongues locked with a fever
“I love you” the young girl whispers in bliss
The girl then is disrobed and carried off
By the animals who are under a spell
To satiate all their wants and their needs
By the cannibals with a hunger to quell
Written by wallyroo92
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oh Walt!
What a wonderfully wicked story ..
with enough tender touch to begin with to make the ending a shock thrill!
am making a quick response now...late and about to sleep, am reading again first thing morning and will elaborate, but awesome my darlin!!
What a wonderfully wicked story ..
with enough tender touch to begin with to make the ending a shock thrill!
am making a quick response now...late and about to sleep, am reading again first thing morning and will elaborate, but awesome my darlin!!
Okay Walt...
Hunny buns this is yummy...
Have one like it called Second cumming...
Except you give this Woman more power.Beauty, great divinity...i love that both Men and Women are there...and seeming mercy...inititially..
I loved the "I love you"
Do the people know what might happen?
I suspect so which makes me love tjis even more..
Great piece! loved this..Thank you Darlin!
Hunny buns this is yummy...
Have one like it called Second cumming...
Except you give this Woman more power.Beauty, great divinity...i love that both Men and Women are there...and seeming mercy...inititially..
I loved the "I love you"
Do the people know what might happen?
I suspect so which makes me love tjis even more..
Great piece! loved this..Thank you Darlin!
Erotic Ritual
How shall I worship your body?
Create a heaven of our own
Our actions should not be bawdy
Our urges we must hone
We should strip naked
Caress with skin to skin
Feels sensual ;not overrated,
Our emotions begin to spin.
Our hands feel for the part
That responds to light touches
Arousal ready to start
Both have a hand on our crutches
Genitals begin to react
But will hands be sufficient
Mouths will have an impact
They may be more proficient
Oral manipulation
Is what our genitals expect
Giving vaginal dilation
Making the penis erect
Shall we now attempt
To enter heaven's gate
Our love we will cement
Every time we mate
Gently ease into the entrance
The walls of the passage are moist
Full length at her insistence
Our ecstasy must be voiced
In and out is the motion
For the best sensual feel
Raises a loving emotion
And a tingling that's hardly real
Orgasms are soon on the horizon
Her G-spot is aflame
Her passage begins to tighten
We seem to achieve our aim
How shall I worship your body?
Create a heaven of our own
Our actions should not be bawdy
Our urges we must hone
We should strip naked
Caress with skin to skin
Feels sensual ;not overrated,
Our emotions begin to spin.
Our hands feel for the part
That responds to light touches
Arousal ready to start
Both have a hand on our crutches
Genitals begin to react
But will hands be sufficient
Mouths will have an impact
They may be more proficient
Oral manipulation
Is what our genitals expect
Giving vaginal dilation
Making the penis erect
Shall we now attempt
To enter heaven's gate
Our love we will cement
Every time we mate
Gently ease into the entrance
The walls of the passage are moist
Full length at her insistence
Our ecstasy must be voiced
In and out is the motion
For the best sensual feel
Raises a loving emotion
And a tingling that's hardly real
Orgasms are soon on the horizon
Her G-spot is aflame
Her passage begins to tighten
We seem to achieve our aim
Gardenlover..
Oral manipulation
Is what our genitals expect
Giving vaginal dilation
Making the penis erect
First of all..i love very textbook terms for genetalia in pieces..i say textbook...i think penis and Vagina are much prettier words than cunt and dick...And i think it can be very hot..
maybe not as sensual..
Now i use the others too..
What you did here with them was nice, the initial text book terms turn worship...
Lets keep a cult of one for each other..
Worship each other...
My original piece..was a Valentine for my honey..Im always calling myself his cult of one...Finding love in a spiritual way and making love, be making love and spiritual...im very into exploring that now that i see someone that way..
So this was cool..and much more like mine than you might have guessed..
Not that being like mine is the important thing...just thought it was cool..
Really enjoyed!! thank you!!
Oral manipulation
Is what our genitals expect
Giving vaginal dilation
Making the penis erect
First of all..i love very textbook terms for genetalia in pieces..i say textbook...i think penis and Vagina are much prettier words than cunt and dick...And i think it can be very hot..
maybe not as sensual..
Now i use the others too..
What you did here with them was nice, the initial text book terms turn worship...
Lets keep a cult of one for each other..
Worship each other...
My original piece..was a Valentine for my honey..Im always calling myself his cult of one...Finding love in a spiritual way and making love, be making love and spiritual...im very into exploring that now that i see someone that way..
So this was cool..and much more like mine than you might have guessed..
Not that being like mine is the important thing...just thought it was cool..
Really enjoyed!! thank you!!
Saint Mozart
I kill your condom
in the name of God
in order for you
to breathe some cum
build on my belly
A creamy castle for my dick
danger to slip
my holy lip
make it easy to play
with my pink crust of thing.
I wish your desire
is not feeling cold
cause in that case
you don’t have to worry
I’m preparing for you
a condom from gold.
I now see your eyes are red
your heart booms a lot
my hole gets expanded
feels like it’s gonna be torn
but I don’t care at all
I have the tools to sew it back
I know all the prayers
for stuff like that.
I’ll call saint Mozart
whose tongue is a drug
each moment he licks
my glorious arse
he is composing my squeeze
and sex-full melodies
are coming out again
from my sweet little thing.
*ps: no offence for Mozart. I play with the title of his song “Leck mich im Arsch”(Lick me in the arse) that was thought to be a party piece for his friends.
I kill your condom
in the name of God
in order for you
to breathe some cum
build on my belly
A creamy castle for my dick
danger to slip
my holy lip
make it easy to play
with my pink crust of thing.
I wish your desire
is not feeling cold
cause in that case
you don’t have to worry
I’m preparing for you
a condom from gold.
I now see your eyes are red
your heart booms a lot
my hole gets expanded
feels like it’s gonna be torn
but I don’t care at all
I have the tools to sew it back
I know all the prayers
for stuff like that.
I’ll call saint Mozart
whose tongue is a drug
each moment he licks
my glorious arse
he is composing my squeeze
and sex-full melodies
are coming out again
from my sweet little thing.
*ps: no offence for Mozart. I play with the title of his song “Leck mich im Arsch”(Lick me in the arse) that was thought to be a party piece for his friends.
