erotic collaboration*

Co-write w/ Gahddess_Worship


~Ravenous Lust


Despite legends of horror
befalling the foolish
who dare enter the cave
with torch in hand
undaunted I brave the abyss

Hedonic chants
sung by unearthly voices
greet my entrance
possessing me
with visions of carnal desire

He moves through the blue veil of night
illuming his path in fire's light
Who's summoning my touch?
Aroused, I reach from the shadows drawn
to meet his lips; to taste his sanguine tongue

His torch takes its last flicker of breath
as he finds me deep in the cavern's expanse
next to a lucent waterfall's edge
Astir of lilacs sweet, urges him closer to me
Riled in passion, he sheds away his bindings
Ah yess, I gush...as he lowers himself

Perched atop a crude stone altar
satin robe, thighs splayed
revealing her humid Eden
my serpent tongue explores
savoring the womanly nectar
pouring forth from her dark pink orchid

libidinous incantations escape
from beneath the hood
enshrouding her face
suckling her silken pearl
enraptured by her heady scent
ferociously I bury my face deeper

I slide my fingers through his soft raven hair
gyrating my hips, rising 'gainst his whet tongue
Trembling, I fight back the urge to succumb
Afire, stone to flesh, I idolize his phallus
It's risen, he stands in an arrested stance
and I lower myself down, taking his rod in hand

My tongue tempts 'round his cock's sleek crown  
Deeper betwixt my lips, I slowly take it
In and out, the rhythmic fever increases
exposing my need to be lewdly taken  
He tenses...and quickly lifts me up
and lies me back upon the altar of lust
then slides his cock into my slick avalanche of down

Lingering at her threshold
spellbound by her seductive curves
hot breath lures me to it's wanting source
our lips collide with ravenous lust
medusa gaze turns manhood to stone
anticipation glistening on its tip

Entranced by her sumptuous breasts
attacking her ruby nipples jutting like islands
amid vivid crimson areola seas
nails bite into my ass flesh
forcibly planting me deep
gold flecked emerald eyes dilate
igniting with deafening cries of ecstasy
crashing against the sanctum walls

The waterfall pounded harder atop the onyx stones
as we become one, laving its cool mist upon us
Rainbow plumes form and shimmer in the air
bejeweling us in tangerine-gold, and sapphire flare
He ravages me, and I him,
nipping, and kissing in synchronized sin

With an explosive thrust
my stars shower across
her dark universe
grabbing her in my arms
kissing her smiling sated lips
we enter together the cold cascading water
baptizing our forbidden union



http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/229931-ravenous-lust/

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Temptation of Eve

A Wallyroo92 and Calamitygin colab


The serpent slithered near the garden when he saw Eve
Lying naked on the grass underneath a tree
At the shade’s edge where it cooled her skin in the afternoon sun
With her eyes closed she listened to the sound of the wind rustling the trees
The cool grass blades caressed her back, her legs, her feet and her thighs
And she found a new pleasure in her nether lips
When the wind caressed her gently
And her body ached for more

Hello my sweet dear, I saw you sunning yourself on the grass,
Your beautiful breasts and sex exposed to the elements.
I can sense you’re curious about that strange fire between your legs
As I can be the one to ease the ache that only your master transcends…

Oh! Hello I guess, you startled me by your company....
I thought I was alone here Sir…
My breasts and sex give you pleasure...hmmm?
The strange fire you speak of is stirred some,
By your comment and to be honest by your sibilance...I do not want to offend you, but,
The stir causes an ache I'm leery of.
And the flick of your tongue is a bit frightening...
No need to be anxious or suspicious about this hiss
It’s just my native style of speech
But I can reveal the secrets to the sweet and loving pleasures
And wetness from between your delicious thighs
For I know the elixir that will give freedom and will savor
Truth and ecstasy

Ecstasy and the ease of being free...Ahhh bliss...
I will try and be soothed by your hissing to me secrets....
I feel in my tummy a mix of something yummy but also a danger...I expose so to you strange serpent...
Pardon the phrase, but it is strange…the way I fear you and still want to tell you things...
This wetness...
(She blushes and lowers her lash)
Please, Sir tell me why I flood, why my "fire" rages when you mention it?

Eve rolls onto her trim belly and props her head up on fists as if listening intently. Her round bottom like an upside down heart, and inviting. She crosses her ankles and bends shapely legs at her knees twiddling her feet in the air…Giving an air of carefree juxtaposed by her words.
Her hair, smolders in the daylight reds and flashes of orange like embers. It cascades down her back, resting in the small of it. She is a glorious vision of pure woman.
The serpent continues, encouraged by the sight and her inquest....

The secret lies in your awaiting cunt, those sweet velvet lips between your thighs
You’ll find that by placing your fingers there and caressing that precious pearl
It will raise your spirits and your body high above like those celestial beings…
But wait there’s more
And if you probe deeper you’ll feel your soul elevated in all the pleasures
Spread your legs wide to access your hidden treasures you’ll find intoxicating
Then taste them and will you savor just how exquisite you are

Eve rolls back over on her sweet bottom. Unknown to her that as she spreads her dewy thighs, she exposes her pink wet womanhood to temptation. The serpent is quite pleased with himself...

My hand shakes for some reason Sir...
As I slide them over tummy to the pearl you say is there...
I do feel it throb as I aim for this touch...
But am suddenly very aware of your eyes...
As if you had twenty, and they are everywhere!
And even in my unease, the wet the fire, they increase so deep...

No need to be nervous sweetie, it’s your inhibitions setting you free
There are no judging eyes here except your own
So let go and dig deep into that beautiful agony
And soon you’ll discover and feel a satisfying swell you must surrender to
Faster and faster caress that precious clitoris
Dip softly between your silky lips…

Okay Sir and I must say I want too, oh need!
I am going to do as you say and try to feed this aching need…

Eve closes her eyes and her head rolls to the side. Here she lets her legs spread some, exhales deep and her thighs roll apart. Her glistening pink cunny exposed through the sunfire ringlets of her labia...Her fingers find her precious pearl. She begins rolling it round and moans. Her thighs shake as her rhythm increases. She looks as if she is on the verge of breaking and stop

You know something my sweet, there’s something that you can do to fulfill that precipice
The serpent slithers against her skin, just above the waist
I know you’re almost there, I see it in your quivering thighs, in your gasping sighs
In your beautiful eyes
The delicious fruit just above this tree here should fill that emptiness
Take it and let your instincts guide you and it will release your soul…

Oh serpent the hard muscular long of you feels so good on my skin…
It put me in mind of inside...
But this fruit, I was warned of its effects...
I long to taste its nectar...
But am afraid of later regret....

If you think I feel good, the fruit is better
It will give you knowledge, pleasure and joy to know that you will be as wise as your divine creator
Take it and insert it, let it fill your nether lips, let both nectars come together and taste bliss

Oh my! Like this?
I feel as if breaking open as it slides inside..
Some sting…gasp! And ohhh!
Sweet pleasure ...
I long to feel it deep and deeeeper..
(Eve plunges herself hips rocking)
Oh I ...Uhhhhh!...
I....this nectar…my juices, they cuuuum!
(Eve lays panting and writhing for some time)
Snake, twas bliss...but what have I done?

‘Tis but a glimpse into another paradise that you should share with your husband
He should taste your juices so he too can see how good it is and you will both experience bliss
Away from this place and anywhere you go
Go, take it to him, let him see how delectable you really are

And as she walks toward her husband, fruit in hand dripping with nectars, dazed in the afterglow of her new experience
The serpent smiles and slithers back toward his realm

just to say i haven't forgotten about this one
[real life bent me over a barrel & totally shafted me]
i promise to have winners picked by the weekend...
.... please bear/bare with me
~ koshka

firstly, spasiba to everyone who participated, i loved reading all the entries ...
... 1st place goes to miss mags & case because i read it drunk & still loved it when i sobered up ^.^
i shall put in a request with the powers that be for a second trophy
~ 2nd place to geoff & titanium
~ 3rd place to jade & ms jackson
cheers again folks, see ya next comp

Miss Katja, darling host, what a watershed competition you designed and beautifully ran, for many in the community to come together in collaborative glory of erotic expression in the true Art of poetry.  It was such an honor to be a part of it all.

Now I have the pleasure to congratulate the winners🏆:  
🎉To Sir Case & Miss Mags for your fine duel effort.👏
🎉To Sir Geoff & Miss Titanium, I'm proud of you both for your loveliest ink.👏
🎉And, I take my partner, Ms Jackson's, hand as we turn to you all and bow in thanks for placing 3rd; it's been such fun!

Everyone is to be congratulated!🏆👏

Thank you to our beautiful host for running such a swinging comp.  There were heap of talented poets exchanging poetic mojo here, so I'm stoked that the lovely Magdalena and I were given the honour amongst worthy competition.

Magdalena, thank you for writing this collab with me, I'm super stoked with this sensually dark piece.

My dear Katja,


Thank you for such a great competition. I am humbled and honored at placing so highly with our little  High School romance... to the our first place poets, case28 and Magdalena, great write and well deserved, to Jade and Ms. Jackson, it was such a fun read, I bow...  but most thanks to my collaborator, brokentitanium, who most literally threw caution to the wind and blindly took up the challenge with me... you made it fun...

For all those who teamed up and penned your play, thanks, it made for uplifting reading...

I need to take a moment to correct an egregious oversight –

The gratitude I should have shown first – not as my swan song…  

I need to thank the person without whom I would not still be here – on DU.  

I would definitely not have entered this competition, probably any competition; the person who literally taught me everything I know about collaborative poetry, and without whose discussion and critique would have had us submit an entirely different poem for this competition.  

To my often collaborator, Jade-Pandora, who owns my eternal gratitude.  

Thank you, jadey!

Thank you, Katja, for the honour.....That was unexpected and so encouraging to a timid newbie!
Congratulations to the other winners, and all the great poets for the inspiration and fun reading.
And Geoff, thank you for your kindness and gentle response to my impulsively random proposition.....it was a real pleasure. :)

Katja, thank you for the titillating tingle generating comp. Congratulations to the winners. I had a blast writing with the fascinating, mystical, sensuous, andsuper talented Lady Blue Angel...we'll always have the cave

case28 said:Thank you to our beautiful host for running such a swinging comp.  There were heap of talented poets exchanging poetic mojo here, so I'm stoked that the lovely Magdalena and I were given the honour amongst worthy competition.

Magdalena, thank you for writing this collab with me, I'm super stoked with this sensually dark piece.


Thank you greatly both our lovely host and Alexander for inviting me.  It was an honour, writing with you again, I've still yet to do an audio with you mister.  :)

Well done all.