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Deep Underground Creepy Valentine

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
United States 34awards
Joined 8th June 2013
Forum Posts: 1613

Poetry Contest

Be a creep to one you desire

Inspired by the Cheesy Valentine comp. But this time let's see how big of a creepy lust filled stalker. But not just anyone, someone from Deep Underground needs to be your target of affection. Enter as many times as you wish.

TWO WEEKS

MAKE IT CREEPY

MAKE IT FUNNY

NEW WRITES ONLY


SatInUGal
Kumar
Dangerous Mind
United States 24awards
Joined 31st Dec 2015
Forum Posts: 903

INTACT
for calamitygin

You dropped these,
The man in the top hat said,
Handing the stunned young lady
The panties that she didn't know
She wasn't wearing,
Intact
But for the phone number
He'd written inside.

SatInUGal
Kumar
Dangerous Mind
United States 24awards
Joined 31st Dec 2015
Forum Posts: 903

DEAR HIGHWAYTOHELL

Eyeholes that bleed
So hot and so wet
You're what I need
You're what I will get

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 86awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5594

All For You....Craic


Here it is, my
heart, for you; there
was an organ harvest
last night at the hospital,

and I watched....

I saw how to do it ...fascinating...
so I did. I harvested my own heart
afterwards, all for you.

I wrapped it in wax paper--don't
you want to touch it? Please touch it.

You've wanted my heart for so long, and I finally gave in. It's yours now.

How could I have made you wait? It's all for you... It was always all for you,

Craic.

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 86awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5594

Who Sat In Who?

SatInUGal, I'll draw down
the tab on the zipper of your
spine....I can step right in, and
this gal will sit in U.

I'll wear U like the man-suit
you were meant to be, touch
my own skin, with your hands...

SatInUGal
Kumar
Dangerous Mind
United States 24awards
Joined 31st Dec 2015
Forum Posts: 903

LAVENDER

To say I'm impressed
With the way you've undressed
Me is perhaps a little too mild-

Such a gentle flaying
It goes without saying
Poetry in slaying
So styled!

But I caution you, lest
On your laurels you rest-
I must ask you
Who is wearing who?

I've spent a little rhyme
And a lot of my time
Searching for a hat
Filled with you!

highwaytohell
Greg
Thought Provoker
South Africa
Joined 24th Sep 2015
Forum Posts: 449

Across the hall:

Once you asked me to care for your house
along with that came your nice blouse
you gave me a key
now there is nothing I can't see
you know my history
as well as my mystery
just let me in
I know I already have
across  the hall

Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1779

Craic..
I am no longer single and I am happy and better for it
But if I were available, I would hand my heart to you...
There is something about you that makes us ladies fawn for you.
You are strong, smart, clever and sexy ")
There I said it for all of Dup to read...

Happy Valentine's Day Gorjus!

poet Anonymous

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~ Valentine Hades

my dear[est] sanguine Valentine:
you don't know
how many times
I've committed this crime,
standing `neath
your poetic rain
holding back
my burning lust, or trying to keep
from bursting an orgasmic [blood] vein;
and there was also a time
~and perhaps maybe even two~
when I felt like
gutting into my flesh and
ripping out my heart
and sending it directly to you
just so you could hold it, feel it
bloodied, beating,
oozing black and
pulsing blue
just a simple, harmless token
of how I'm such a fanatical for you;
so will you do me the honor
by sending me your best knife,
I promise I'll keep us a secret
especially from your wife ~


happy Valentine's day, baby;)


MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 86awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5594

A Date With Devlin


Devlin, be my Valentine
your morbid self, will be just fine
for when we dig our little graves
In the yard on Cupid’s Day.

We’ll fill them up with candy hearts,
lace and chocolate, then we’ll start
a song of “Pure Imagination”,
dressed like Willie Wonka’s creations

I’m Veruca, you be Violet,
and we’ll listen, very silent,
to see if anything comes to life
from the graves we dug tonight.

But first we’ll have to suck the juice
from blood oranges, or it’s no use
and we won’t get that bad ju-ju,
conjured up by me and you.

I have confidence—let’s begin
did you bring your VooDoo pins?
We’ll stick them in each other’s skin
let our juice flow out, then in

the holes with all the hearts and lace,
chocolate, smear it on our face
and when we’re covered, you and I
surprise, my love—it’s time we die!

Krosgood
Violence
Thought Provoker
United States 12awards
Joined 21st Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 163

To the beauties and the beasts

So many of you look good thus far
Hiding behind your little miss avatar
Is that your real face captured by the still frame recorder?
I'll start my research now in alphabetical order

Ladies beware on these cold nights
And look over your shoulders in fear that I
Will come tonight just like the stars
And compare your face with your avatars

Close your curtains so I can't see
Get a dog if you don't have one
Or don't and put on a show for me
But creepy peeping sounds like fun

Latch and lock the doors and windows
In your home and in your cars
I've come a stalker and want to watch her
Who hides behind your avatars?

Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1779

Krosgood said:To the beauties and the beasts

So many of you look good thus far
Hiding behind your little miss avatar
Is that your real face captured by the still frame recorder?
I'll start my research now in alphabetical order

Ladies beware on these cold nights
And look over your shoulders in fear that I
Will come tonight just like the stars
And compare your face with your avatars

Close your curtains so I can't see
Get a dog if you don't have one
Or don't and put on a show for me
But creepy peeping sounds like fun

Latch and lock the doors and windows
In your home and in your cars
I've come a stalker and want to watch her
Who hides behind your avatars?


Perfect!👁

Krosgood
Violence
Thought Provoker
United States 12awards
Joined 21st Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 163

Zazzles said:

Perfect!👁


Starting with the letter Z.

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122awards
Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 16069

Be My Valentine

Oh Tornado how I pine
for the hails of wisdom
falling from your lips
blue as the sky white as snow

Be my Valentine please please
I promise to give you my heart
Or a semblance of one
to hold to feel to savour
touch with pervent desire

I will pirouette for you
in a blue tutu
to the tune of fur elise
showing you my lacy panties
and thighs strong  as a teak tree
or two...
I will succumb to you
like the limp swan at the lake

I will nail myself to the cage
nary a sqawk shall I utter
as I feel your hands
freeing me and declaring
your knowledge of my existence

Oh Tornado will you wont you
be my Valentine....
I will preserve my heart in turpentine
for you...

Oh...just dark chocolates
I'm border line diabetic
and roses makes me sneeze.

SatInUGal
Kumar
Dangerous Mind
United States 24awards
Joined 31st Dec 2015
Forum Posts: 903

i don't know if intended, but the word pervent is absolutely awesome. Great last stanza too.

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