Poetry competition CLOSED 2nd March 2016 2:53am
WINNER
calamitygin (Jennifer Michael McCurry)
calamitygin (Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Quick Write.. Can You Keep Up?
PleasuresOfPain said:I was going to go next but your topic caught me off guard and the coincidence was too strange.I just lost my mother about three weeks ago and it's awfully painful to think about.Losing someone that you love is an emotional roller coaster through memories and moments of the past.Sorry
I am so sorry for your loss.
I am so sorry for your loss.
Baywatch episode
While Chad is eating his packet of dorito's
"I love these doritos only $2.99. Oh yeah"
scanning for beached babes
in their swim suits
revealing so much
but hiding a lot as well
"Woah! Samantha is that you...oh shi-"
Running in slow motion
as Samantha is about to open her coke
"No!! Not the white shirt!"
an eruption of coke splashes her white t shirt
revealing those heavenly D cups
Chad stops in front of her
the sweat shines his body
gleaming over a golden six pack
"hi" says Chad smiling like an idiot
"hi" says Samantha unimpressed
Chad is getting desperate
time for a pick up line
"Babe you must get sunburnt all the time because you're so hot"
"Oh my gosh...that poor boy" Samantha screams "sorry duty calls"
Samantha runs for the water
a guy in a red speedo
runs up to Chad and says "You like my girlfriend Samantha"
"I am Rob" he continues
as both Rob and Samantha leave
Chad is left with nothing
except sand in his pants
turnip
Revelations
stoners/junkies
high priest
prostitute
While Chad is eating his packet of dorito's
"I love these doritos only $2.99. Oh yeah"
scanning for beached babes
in their swim suits
revealing so much
but hiding a lot as well
"Woah! Samantha is that you...oh shi-"
Running in slow motion
as Samantha is about to open her coke
"No!! Not the white shirt!"
an eruption of coke splashes her white t shirt
revealing those heavenly D cups
Chad stops in front of her
the sweat shines his body
gleaming over a golden six pack
"hi" says Chad smiling like an idiot
"hi" says Samantha unimpressed
Chad is getting desperate
time for a pick up line
"Babe you must get sunburnt all the time because you're so hot"
"Oh my gosh...that poor boy" Samantha screams "sorry duty calls"
Samantha runs for the water
a guy in a red speedo
runs up to Chad and says "You like my girlfriend Samantha"
"I am Rob" he continues
as both Rob and Samantha leave
Chad is left with nothing
except sand in his pants
turnip
Revelations
stoners/junkies
high priest
prostitute
turnip
Revelations
stoners/junkies
high priest
prostitute
*
neon city nights ~
i spent sunday nights
trying to prostitute
my immorality to
the stained glass saints
at st. george's ...
... would have accepted
turnips for payment
if one of them
absolved me temporarily
so I could
keep selling myself
to the high priest
of vodka & valium
*
we were
two junkies, living
in the shadows
of a flat mountain,
obeying
heroin revelations
preached by that nigerian
dealing the corner
of loop & long ...
... there wasn't a prayer
in our veins
up on kloof
but i kept
visiting the saints
kept walking
the labyrinthine streets
[searching]
\\
ash
rubicon
bones
wax
cathedral
Revelations
stoners/junkies
high priest
prostitute
*
neon city nights ~
i spent sunday nights
trying to prostitute
my immorality to
the stained glass saints
at st. george's ...
... would have accepted
turnips for payment
if one of them
absolved me temporarily
so I could
keep selling myself
to the high priest
of vodka & valium
*
we were
two junkies, living
in the shadows
of a flat mountain,
obeying
heroin revelations
preached by that nigerian
dealing the corner
of loop & long ...
... there wasn't a prayer
in our veins
up on kloof
but i kept
visiting the saints
kept walking
the labyrinthine streets
[searching]
\\
ash
rubicon
bones
wax
cathedral
ash
rubicon
bones
wax
cathedral
It is done
The injustice of my rubicon matters little to me..
But that i won and his corpse
My trophy
I have turned his bones into an alter
Of my cold hearts cathedral
Genuflect before them in worship
Of my bloody thrill kill
Instead of the humiliating kneel
Of cock suck
And pre fuck duties
Done to his scorching approval
I light a candle
Let it burn for ages
(as i did)
And drip the scarlet wax
Where his monstrously
Watching watching watching
Eyes will never be again
You have found your lover in the arms of his mistress...or reverse sexes
Prick
Lipstick
Gun
Gum
Pillow
rubicon
bones
wax
cathedral
It is done
The injustice of my rubicon matters little to me..
But that i won and his corpse
My trophy
I have turned his bones into an alter
Of my cold hearts cathedral
Genuflect before them in worship
Of my bloody thrill kill
Instead of the humiliating kneel
Of cock suck
And pre fuck duties
Done to his scorching approval
I light a candle
Let it burn for ages
(as i did)
And drip the scarlet wax
Where his monstrously
Watching watching watching
Eyes will never be again
You have found your lover in the arms of his mistress...or reverse sexes
Prick
Lipstick
Gun
Gum
Pillow
sun shining lake glistening
me pissing in the bushes thinking
Doritos and coke what am i missing
ahh my Bathing suit fuck I'm drunk and naked
friends are laughing im sunburned and sweating
nothing like a good picnic with friends again
topic
a boat ride with one friend
weed
a boat
nitrous
duct tape
me pissing in the bushes thinking
Doritos and coke what am i missing
ahh my Bathing suit fuck I'm drunk and naked
friends are laughing im sunburned and sweating
nothing like a good picnic with friends again
topic
a boat ride with one friend
weed
a boat
nitrous
duct tape
On the boat my friend and I
we're off to the reef, beautiful blue sky
swimming 'round after we smoked some weed
got the munchies where's the speed
suck the nitrous till I cant feel my toes
riding a dugong, chuck'n a pose
take my photo before it goes
it's cruel to duct tape my hands to its nose!
Topic: At the beach
shells
sea snake
nudity
pirates
tide
we're off to the reef, beautiful blue sky
swimming 'round after we smoked some weed
got the munchies where's the speed
suck the nitrous till I cant feel my toes
riding a dugong, chuck'n a pose
take my photo before it goes
it's cruel to duct tape my hands to its nose!
Topic: At the beach
shells
sea snake
nudity
pirates
tide
Gloucester Waters
Tides slide away, like
lady-pirates’ skirts, billowing
in the winds, revealing their
nudity beneath.
A sea snake shaped
sand bar, rises from the
receding waters, as if a slumbering
empress from the deep,
awakening.
I walk off-shore, time
conscious of when the sea
comes to reclaim the sands.
For now, the brine-scented
shells are mine for the gathering.
___________________________________
Topic: At a Funeral
Words: Sun
Lace
Beauty
Time
Hope
Tides slide away, like
lady-pirates’ skirts, billowing
in the winds, revealing their
nudity beneath.
A sea snake shaped
sand bar, rises from the
receding waters, as if a slumbering
empress from the deep,
awakening.
I walk off-shore, time
conscious of when the sea
comes to reclaim the sands.
For now, the brine-scented
shells are mine for the gathering.
___________________________________
Topic: At a Funeral
Words: Sun
Lace
Beauty
Time
Hope
Trace my eyelids with the pounding of sunlight
The spark of sea salt grips my fuzzy tongue
searching for a flit of you
though I know you've left with the tide
Topic: Drinking with the band after the last set at a grunge bar
willow
cinnamon
dew
washboard
ice cream
The spark of sea salt grips my fuzzy tongue
searching for a flit of you
though I know you've left with the tide
Topic: Drinking with the band after the last set at a grunge bar
willow
cinnamon
dew
washboard
ice cream
The Mystery
rusty ice cream truck parked in line with the willow trees
you feel the calmness with the smell of cinnamon in the breeze
an old washboard was peaking out from the truck with faded crease
morning dew shined on her pale frozen body covered in fleas
bold
satin
spark
wet
glass
rusty ice cream truck parked in line with the willow trees
you feel the calmness with the smell of cinnamon in the breeze
an old washboard was peaking out from the truck with faded crease
morning dew shined on her pale frozen body covered in fleas
bold
satin
spark
wet
glass
Bold letters on the side of the broken store
Blood soaked satin billows in the breeze
Sparks of lighting illuminating the secne
Freezing wet rain pours down
Shards of glass litter the ground
Warrior
Travel
Down
Snake
Tree
Blood soaked satin billows in the breeze
Sparks of lighting illuminating the secne
Freezing wet rain pours down
Shards of glass litter the ground
Warrior
Travel
Down
Snake
Tree
Sorry just noticed i have to write on the mentioned topic 
Topic: Drinking with the band after the last set at a grunge bar
cinnamon flavoured ice cream to recover from the drinks
dew on the leaves of the willow tree makes me think
where did he found this washboard damn it really stinks
this poem need another line so dinky binky pinky minky chink
topic. sexy evil witch on a dark night
bold
satin
spark
wet
glass
Topic: Drinking with the band after the last set at a grunge bar
cinnamon flavoured ice cream to recover from the drinks
dew on the leaves of the willow tree makes me think
where did he found this washboard damn it really stinks
this poem need another line so dinky binky pinky minky chink
topic. sexy evil witch on a dark night
bold
satin
spark
wet
glass
