Poetry competition CLOSED 3rd November 2015 4:56am
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rabbitquest
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A dribble challenge

Phaedra_Farrow
Ina
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 12th Oct 2015
Forum Posts: 22

Poetry Contest

In exactly 50 words tell me a secret or talk about one being kept.
Fifty words. No more no less. On anything you like. Except, this is a challenge, so give me a secret.

You can make it your own secret, or a story about secrets, or the distilled essence of secret. You can tell me the secret nature of secrets, or about the secret scent of your love, or the secret hurt at the center of you that he unlocks and heals every time he screams.

But do it in fifty words.

No more. No less.      

One entry....



Here is an example.  

"I'm afraid"


I'm afraid...

If I close my eyes..... I might forget your face.

If I fall asleep I might want to stay there.

Blissfully unaware of your mortality, and that
Secret you like to keep.

about how you're already gone. ...

Before having the chance to walk in this dream of mine.

seekingkate
kateA
Tyrant of Words
Australia 28awards
Joined 20th May 2014
Forum Posts: 2079

I Knew


The moment I read your message
I knew you wanted to say goodbye

You changed your mind when I told you
I was performing that night

Instead, you loved me
Held me tenderly in your arms

In those moments I loved you deeply
Knowing you wanted this to be goodbye



Phaedra_Farrow
Ina
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 12th Oct 2015
Forum Posts: 22

Beautiful,  thanks for kicking it off.  

iowahuman
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 19th Oct 2015
Forum Posts: 42

title: City Love

in bed alone
i remember him

once i hired a man
he came to me adorned
muscles and pretty

i was a queen came to
by a man city-crowned

he let me be...
let my lovely iowa tears fall upon his hair

in the morning
i dressed and flew home

AloneInMyHead
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 13th Sep 2015
Forum Posts: 141

Title: Secret Hearts

Broken heart sick with lies.
Dark deception fills my eyes.

You lay me down and love me so,
Run your fingers through my hair,
Touch my tender swollen breasts.

Your kiss,
Your gaze,
Your touch so bold...

I long for you but go back to him.

Secret hearts torn apart.


Phaedra_Farrow
Ina
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 12th Oct 2015
Forum Posts: 22

Nice entries so far.  Thank yous.  

cheesa
Fire of Insight
United Kingdom 2awards
Joined 5th Oct 2015
Forum Posts: 109

I know you're my cousin but how I lust to be intimate with you. Seldom a day goes by when I don't pleasure myself over the thought of you on your knees performing oral pleasures. And that body that I long to feel against mine. An ass ide love to taste.

Zazzles
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
United States 24awards
Joined 23rd Nov 2013
Forum Posts: 1781

I  killed a man in cold blood then tied
His body to a flagpole
He was a mean motherfucker so I have no conscience if truth be told

It's not like I'm a psychotic killer
I felt like I was doing society a favor
No need for thanks, your welcome!

toniscales
Lost Girl
Fire of Insight
United States 36awards
Joined 16th Dec 2014
Forum Posts: 420

Moment

It’s funny
It never occurred to me till yesterday

I screamed in pleasure
I screamed too in pain

I wanted you inside me
I still screamed no

You didn’t take the time
to ready me for that particular thing

You raped me
but I never knew

toniscales
Lost Girl
Fire of Insight
United States 36awards
Joined 16th Dec 2014
Forum Posts: 420

iowahuman said:title: City Love

in bed alone
i remember him

once i hired a man
he came to me adorned
muscles and pretty

i was a queen came to
by a man city-crowned

he let me be...
let my lovely iowa tears fall upon his hair

in the morning
i dressed and flew home


gorgeous

rabbitquest
Dangerous Mind
Ukraine 2awards
Joined 20th May 2012
Forum Posts: 2051

In the first year of our love
I loved my ex and called her
Name during sex thank God your name
Was the same
In the ninth year
of our love you grew me in
Our garden of flings and pawned diamond rings
your devotion to children
the little things

rabbitquest
Dangerous Mind
Ukraine 2awards
Joined 20th May 2012
Forum Posts: 2051

Thanks phaedra for a nice challenge

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