Poetry competition CLOSED 18th September 2015 4:52am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
lepperochan
and MadameLavender
Good Stalkers Are Hard To Find
case28
Alexander Case
Forum Posts: 2077
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 16th June 2013Forum Posts: 2077
Poetry Contest Description
Write two short poems about being a stalker or being stalked in a world of virtual strangers.
The Topic:
The idea for the comp is based on a rambling mash-up of ideas I posted in the forum about stalkers, voyeurism and Big Brother. For inspiration and to share your thoughts on this topic go to the following link:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/discuss/read/8407/#313240
The Challenge:
Write two poems in the theme of the forum thread "Good Stalkers Are Hard To Find". The first poem must be exactly 19 words in length and the second poem exactly 84 words in length [excluding the title].
The Rules:
1. No collabs
2. One entry [consisting of two poems] per poet
3. Title your poems
4. Anybody who writes a poem about "Big Brother" the reality tv show will be disqualified... just because!
fathermadness
Forum Posts: 69
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 4th Sep 2015Forum Posts: 69
The Walk
Two people
warm nights walk
the peacefull sounds
the smells
the passion in the air
but only one knows
Leather and Lace
stalked you in the dark
while you walked in the park
raven hair and eyes of blue
pain to come you never knew
who are you i do not know
soon the tears will start to flow
grabbed your arm and cut your face
i am leather you are lace
grab your breast while i choked you out
are you up to this deadly bout
put my fingers in the pink
hot and moist as you would think
dark nights
stalkers delight
watching you
Two people
warm nights walk
the peacefull sounds
the smells
the passion in the air
but only one knows
Leather and Lace
stalked you in the dark
while you walked in the park
raven hair and eyes of blue
pain to come you never knew
who are you i do not know
soon the tears will start to flow
grabbed your arm and cut your face
i am leather you are lace
grab your breast while i choked you out
are you up to this deadly bout
put my fingers in the pink
hot and moist as you would think
dark nights
stalkers delight
watching you
case28
Alexander Case
Forum Posts: 2077
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 16th June 2013Forum Posts: 2077
Thank you, fathermadness, for kicking off the comp with your cool entry, and nice touch with the new DU profile for that real stalker vibe.
Anonymous
Banquet
I ate your words
to find out
how you tasted,
never knowing I
would spit commas
in leaving protests.
Anonymous
I picked your bones clean
and feasted on your ideas
professed passion
to pixelated photographs
that spiked my blood
with the eroticism
of the missing
looked at the map
above my bed
where we existed,
two pin points
across the ocean
while I kept you
locked inside;
a secret I stroked
in silence
because the world
holds enough failure
to make the thought of us
palatable.
For they were all me.
Every thought
that kept us warm,
while your ignorance
was my only company.
I ate your words
to find out
how you tasted,
never knowing I
would spit commas
in leaving protests.
Anonymous
I picked your bones clean
and feasted on your ideas
professed passion
to pixelated photographs
that spiked my blood
with the eroticism
of the missing
looked at the map
above my bed
where we existed,
two pin points
across the ocean
while I kept you
locked inside;
a secret I stroked
in silence
because the world
holds enough failure
to make the thought of us
palatable.
For they were all me.
Every thought
that kept us warm,
while your ignorance
was my only company.
MadameLavender
Forum Posts: 5598
Guardian of Shadows
87
Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5598
PROLOGUE
I slipped my tongue inside
his mind,
and lapped up his thoughts,
becoming
the succulent juices they
were….shhhhh…..
HEAD CASE
All I ever wanted, was for him to
Let me reciprocate,
Even if it meant an
X-ray into his soul;
Alexander, oh Alexander…Aussie-Man
Now you will feel me in every one of your pretty bones
Dusting my fingertips along your
Electric nerve pulses,
Right into your
Core.
Ask me, beg me, invite me--
See all the things we can become…
Eternal, as
I
Step inside and wear you like a coat over
My own body.
I
Need to see through your
Eyes….
crimsin
Unveiling
Forum Posts: 2636
Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
121
Joined 25th Jan 2011 Forum Posts: 2636
MadameLavender said:
PROLOGUE
I slipped my tongue inside
his mind,
and lapped up his thoughts,
becoming
the succulent juices they
were….shhhhh…..
HEAD CASE
All I ever wanted, was for him to
Let me reciprocate,
Even if it meant an
X-ray into his soul;
Alexander, oh Alexander…Aussie-Man
Now you will feel me in every one of your pretty bones
Dusting my fingertips along your
Electric nerve pulses,
Right into your
Core.
Ask me, beg me, invite me--
See all the things we can become…
Eternal, as
I
Step inside and wear you like a coat over
My own body.
I
Need to see through your
Eyes….
this made me giggle with delight I love it ML
PROLOGUE
I slipped my tongue inside
his mind,
and lapped up his thoughts,
becoming
the succulent juices they
were….shhhhh…..
HEAD CASE
All I ever wanted, was for him to
Let me reciprocate,
Even if it meant an
X-ray into his soul;
Alexander, oh Alexander…Aussie-Man
Now you will feel me in every one of your pretty bones
Dusting my fingertips along your
Electric nerve pulses,
Right into your
Core.
Ask me, beg me, invite me--
See all the things we can become…
Eternal, as
I
Step inside and wear you like a coat over
My own body.
I
Need to see through your
Eyes….
this made me giggle with delight I love it ML
Magdalena
Spartalena
Forum Posts: 2993
Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
62
Joined 21st Apr 2012Forum Posts: 2993
Idee fixe
you loved me broken
because I didn't know
and you forced your intentions
with toxic indifference
sucking me hollow
Slither
eyes mauling
crystal screen flesh
undressing her safety
pinning her to his desk(top)
for his pleasure
putting himself between her lines
he wrote her fate
played with consternation
where she flirted with debate
moved ink through her blindness
gaining strength from her defect
carelessly displayed
he hacked her lifeline
invaded the place she slept
through an unsuspecting eye
exploring her profile
until he knew her
—on the inside
he was outside
expelling poetry from lips
to the attention of his quarry
killing time
.
you loved me broken
because I didn't know
and you forced your intentions
with toxic indifference
sucking me hollow
Slither
eyes mauling
crystal screen flesh
undressing her safety
pinning her to his desk(top)
for his pleasure
putting himself between her lines
he wrote her fate
played with consternation
where she flirted with debate
moved ink through her blindness
gaining strength from her defect
carelessly displayed
he hacked her lifeline
invaded the place she slept
through an unsuspecting eye
exploring her profile
until he knew her
—on the inside
he was outside
expelling poetry from lips
to the attention of his quarry
killing time
.
case28
Alexander Case
Forum Posts: 2077
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 16th June 2013Forum Posts: 2077
Missy and Magdalena thank you for your great entries... Madame, I think I'll be seeking legal advice before making further comment on this competition, ahem.
BoFantastic
Forum Posts: 333
Thought Provoker
7
Joined 24th Apr 2014Forum Posts: 333
Jesus
as the holy one tap danced and broke danced on the water
every one gathered with mouths agape
for his encore he made it rain loaves and fishes
and all the bitches, ALL THE BITCHES were throwing their panties
except for one bitch
he was eating his fish sandwich
mumbling and complaining softly that there was no fried chicken.
Judas
this motherfucker had the nerve to rat out the best break dancer in the history
of mankind, breakdancing on water with the smoothness of silk
this motherfucker had the holy one kill't
all so that he may purchase fried chicken and biscuits
who is this Bitch?
that betray the Son of the Most High?
he is none other than a sour peach
with a black hole of a pit.
as the holy one tap danced and broke danced on the water
every one gathered with mouths agape
for his encore he made it rain loaves and fishes
and all the bitches, ALL THE BITCHES were throwing their panties
except for one bitch
he was eating his fish sandwich
mumbling and complaining softly that there was no fried chicken.
Judas
this motherfucker had the nerve to rat out the best break dancer in the history
of mankind, breakdancing on water with the smoothness of silk
this motherfucker had the holy one kill't
all so that he may purchase fried chicken and biscuits
who is this Bitch?
that betray the Son of the Most High?
he is none other than a sour peach
with a black hole of a pit.
case28
Alexander Case
Forum Posts: 2077
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 16th June 2013Forum Posts: 2077
Jesus, Bo! I hate to be the Jude at the final supper, but your poems will be crucified if you don't read the rules and revise your entries before the cock crows three times. 😏
rabbitquest
Forum Posts: 2051
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 20th May 2012Forum Posts: 2051
Little Brother
in problem 19 + 84 =
I'm fumbling all over his pencil and paper
cant take eyes off his physique
face red
I JUST NEED TO MAKE SURE HE IS ok
i just need
to make sure
he is OK
Park down the block
learn his schedule
"what a coincidence!"
bumping into him
in the produce aisle
i get a genuine smile
9:57PM
His blue eyes bursts forth from the
employee exit like clockwork
Tonight
he stops
This is different
A girl answers the door
if I get out I will kill
A guy
bouncing a basketball
carefree swish
studies grief stricken eyes
"whats up"
" boyfriend is fucking another girl"
"Sucks. wanna get some McDonalds?"
in problem 19 + 84 =
I'm fumbling all over his pencil and paper
cant take eyes off his physique
face red
I JUST NEED TO MAKE SURE HE IS ok
i just need
to make sure
he is OK
Park down the block
learn his schedule
"what a coincidence!"
bumping into him
in the produce aisle
i get a genuine smile
9:57PM
His blue eyes bursts forth from the
employee exit like clockwork
Tonight
he stops
This is different
A girl answers the door
if I get out I will kill
A guy
bouncing a basketball
carefree swish
studies grief stricken eyes
"whats up"
" boyfriend is fucking another girl"
"Sucks. wanna get some McDonalds?"
Sundae
Joined 17th Mar 2015
Forum Posts: 11
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 11
Stalkers for Hire
Stalkers for hire,
Yes that's right,
Stalkers for hire,
Day and night,
Do you like following girls?
Watch them shower?
Would you stalk her to the end of the world?
Does it overwhelm you with power?
The stalking might be,
What you should do,
Stalking could be your destiny,
Apply today, yes you,
Stalkers for hire,
Yes that's right,
Stalkers for hire,
Day and night,
Good Stalkers are Hard to Find
He thinks I don't see him,
But I even know his name,
His name is Jim,
I wish Jim never came,
He follows me,
In a very obvious way,
Wearing neon green,
He always has something to say,
Once Jim told me,
His perverted plan,
He would stalk me,
In his purple van,
Oh it saddens me to say,
Good stalkers are hard to find these days,
Stalkers for hire,
Yes that's right,
Stalkers for hire,
Day and night,
Do you like following girls?
Watch them shower?
Would you stalk her to the end of the world?
Does it overwhelm you with power?
The stalking might be,
What you should do,
Stalking could be your destiny,
Apply today, yes you,
Stalkers for hire,
Yes that's right,
Stalkers for hire,
Day and night,
Good Stalkers are Hard to Find
He thinks I don't see him,
But I even know his name,
His name is Jim,
I wish Jim never came,
He follows me,
In a very obvious way,
Wearing neon green,
He always has something to say,
Once Jim told me,
His perverted plan,
He would stalk me,
In his purple van,
Oh it saddens me to say,
Good stalkers are hard to find these days,
lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Forum Posts: 14457
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
67
Joined 1st Apr 2011Forum Posts: 14457
Chill pill
Despite the likes
pokes, funny anecdotes
the songs, pics, sarky quips
she never warmed to my advances
...while lucid
How to terrorize a tease
Take a light bulb
ordinary household bayonet
drill a five mil hole
in the top of it
fill it
with lighter fuel and cooking oil
seal hole
she leaves her house
at five past four
go through the field
jump wall
lift the ceramic frog
for the key to the door
turn the power off at the mains
take the stairs to her bedroom
and fit bulb
get out, stay close
so you can hear screams
when she clicks the power back on
Despite the likes
pokes, funny anecdotes
the songs, pics, sarky quips
she never warmed to my advances
...while lucid
How to terrorize a tease
Take a light bulb
ordinary household bayonet
drill a five mil hole
in the top of it
fill it
with lighter fuel and cooking oil
seal hole
she leaves her house
at five past four
go through the field
jump wall
lift the ceramic frog
for the key to the door
turn the power off at the mains
take the stairs to her bedroom
and fit bulb
get out, stay close
so you can hear screams
when she clicks the power back on
Anonymous
A totally unexpected win, thank you!