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State a nation you do not like.

poet Anonymous

Poetry Contest

Talk bad about some nation you do not like.
One entry please.
No need a new poem.

Poetryman
Tyrant of Words
United States 29awards
Joined 14th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 1530

"Alienation"

Prejudgegians are all so fondly unlikable
Striving vainly to pit one nation against another
Manifesting hatred while they sit back and enjoy the battle
Bathing in bloodthirsty verse as flags proudly wave o'er head
Oh that most foreign land of frozen hearts and blind visionaries
I just can't bear the thought of briefly thinking of their un-kind
I loath them so thoroughly I'll not offer another forethought
Or write nary an unkind rhyme of how I despise their treacherous lies
I hope no one takes offense, but if so, then I suppose I apologize

BoFantastic
Thought Provoker
7awards
Joined 24th Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 333

Stag Nation

the Universe is a dancer
in perpetual motion
yet people feel stuck
like headlights on a buck
but the waves on the ocean
say hello and goodbye
all the time
we all want change
revolution on our buffalo plain
how is it then
we stay the same?
we have potential
but our power is tame
our life is a chore
we have so much desire
but we are too afraid to explore

deer fear wolves
and wolves fear bears
but the stifling
of our imagination
is what I abhor
the Nation that I loathe most
is Stag Nation,
it is a bull and a bore
and I know I deserve much more



RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
Joined 24th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1257




Americano



They use the word freedom
as though those
in their borders, know what
it tastes like
They do
If they're the blue eyed
'specials' then freedom is
their right. They say the
word 'democracy' as if they
invented it
I wish they'd
read the history.

From Government to the street kid
they'll try sell you
the advantages of that horrid
paper, the "IOU". Credit
is their second name
and we can't blame them
ruined the monetary system
tried to to turn
a silly paper dollar into
the mineral called gold.

They have the biggest this
the fastest that
the cleverest this
and the smartest that
have the richest this
and the wealthiest that
It hasn't occurred to them
it's all in their mind
they never actually invented the tatt!



-x-

edead
Thought Provoker
United States
Joined 9th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 47

fat and stupid fat and stupid fat and stupid fat and stupid
loud and dumb loud and dumb tits and tits and tits and tits
my country my country my country
kill the sand niggers kill the wet backs fuck the chinks
my country my country my country 'tis of thee
tits and tits and tits and porn
tits and god and porn and Yaweh
but fuck dem jews and fuck dem fags
bankers bankers bankers bankers
wall street wall street
jobs for main street
fake fake fake fake  you fucking liar
fuck mainstreet anyway build a fucking highway over it
fat and stupid brain washed left and brain washed right
controlled like lemmings
brain washed left and brain washed right
consume consume consume consume
force fed crap entertainment
dont read a book dont read a book
and crowds and crowds and crowds
fear and paranoia
small minds small towns
big city same frowns same frowns
raped by a crowd on a beach
fake a rape by a crowd what a peach
hell hole nation wave your flag
maimed for the rich oh what a drag
squint eyed red faced pig
selling prayers to stop the gays
mom and piss and apple pie
slobber and drool as you watch Christ die
bible bible bible bible
fear and fear and fear and dumb
ho hum ho hum ho hum ho hum
no hum
god is looking down on us
this is his promise land
god will guide us
god will judge us
Yaweh and FDR and some cock
crying about blood and treasure and our
sacred honor
I pledge what?

and the home of the
brave



lepperochan
Craic-Dealer
Guardian of Shadows
Palestine 67awards
Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 14449


nations don't hurt people
same way guns don't
they're just organised notions
to take your mind away
from being part  
of their general population

that said
if a few nukes are on offer
I wouldn't cry too many tears
if Israel was took out

..obviously text the people first
 give them a chance to get away

thelovepoet
Fire of Insight
United States 1awards
Joined 2nd Feb 2015
Forum Posts: 2

Back in the real USA
way back before the US of A
was turned into a hell hole
there wasn't a lot of danger
to get out and have a little
or a lot of fun now and then
yeah way back when
it was safe to run around
go around and see your friends
I reckon they were good days
they sure look good these days
everyone was out running around
I can't say you could call
doing that fun...we didn't then
it was only the way we lived
but it would sure seem
like fun these days when
the police is your worst enemy
and a bandit may be standing on
the next corner you come too

ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
Tyrant of Words
United Kingdom 28awards
Joined 10th Oct 2010
Forum Posts: 1347

England
I judge you
I hold you accountable for Kingdoms, for dislodging people's trust, for encouraging extremism by religion and race.
I hold you accountable for making me ashamed of my own home,
for creating an ignorant population, for misleading the masses and for not putting right your mistakes in South Africa, Israel, America and many other countries. If I could suck the poison from you, my England, I would.

personanongrata
Astral Gift
Thought Provoker
Greece 5awards
Joined 8th June 2015
Forum Posts: 272

Hey, Greece regardless to all your ministers'skills..
It's the poor people's pockets the goverment steals..

Just bring an image in your head..summertime in Greece
White sand, ancient stuff, suvlaki and hashish..(****)
You're determinded yet?
         come for a friendly visit..
On second thought, over a GREXIT risk,
         it's not worth it, is it?

The greeks fought for my freedom the turkish troops and then
For 400 years they'd been forced to be their chattels

But now..we are europian.Nevertheless we're slaves
of those "kind&nice creditors" of going bankrupt states

Someone may say 'Assholes you asked E.U. for help'
Sure we did, but most had no idea what
'International Monetary Fund' meant

Although, everything is a concequence of ourselves
Our way of thinking and state-run system is a
fucking (self made)mess
Greeks wanted to 'steal' but not get cought
I'll tell you this 'common secret' sold..

What I mean is that most didn't like rules
and now some of us cry, politicians made us fools
All right, many deceived authorities for annuity 'packs'
Noone was asking for a receipt to help to avoid tax
Elected bastards defrauded funds contrarily to what they 've said
I still don't know why they didn't end in the'club fed'..

We accused every goverment which WE had voted for
We never learned from our mistakes,but hell!
We made more!

Some greeks are racists, some think they have guts
Some can't quite understand belief in different Gods
But I guess good and bad are spreaded around the world
How come 5 mother fuckers trying to rule us all?

Panic and fear of tomorrow
1st part of plan accomplished
We all should feel accomplices
democracy is demoted

The Greeks founded for science,
trigonometry and maths
They made  highlighted civilization paths
Hey, Greece creator of philosophy
Hey, Greece mother of democracy
You disgrace new history and children's hope for peace
You begun the olympic games
You gave birth to most inventors and theory names
but you won't untie E.C.B. lease

The WIT of our FATHERS had been fading away..
And now Greece withers with a europian debt to pay

Anarchitect
Twisted Dreamer
United States 1awards
Joined 21st Apr 2015
Forum Posts: 105

Go Team Iron Dome


Would you like to be
A part of something grand in scale
So great
Unique?
Come join the practice squad  
Go Team Iron Dome
No one is ever cut
Positions always open due to high mortality rate  
You aren't required to speak
You're most welcome to play from home

WANTED: Gazans only need apply
Preferably
Gazans who are willing to die  
Oh, say can you see
The rocket's red glare in the starry night sky?
Right over there
Crisscrossing the border  
Mortar exchanged through the air

Who fired the first shot?
The order of occurrence matters not
Who was responsible?
The answer is inconsequential
Any excuse for more shelling from each side  
Upon this battlefield  
All retribution is justified  
The true nature of the power they wield
Operation Human Shield

Innocent bystanders aplenty in this spectator sport

Scurrying like rats in their concrete maze
Beneath cities smoldering
Reduced to ashen rubble
Lingering sulfuric cloudy haze
Hamas proudly makes its arena power plays
Banking on Israel being so goddam predictable

Always going over the top
Bat shit crazy
Insane
Eager to unleash the war machine
And let the hellfire rain

Running up the body count
That's the strategy of the game
Yesterday
Today
Tomorrow
It's all the same

A single rocket guarantees retribution
In the form of excessive force

Excessive force guarantees retribution
In the form of a single rocket

Sock it to'em
Back and forth
No one ever wins
Back and forth
A single rocket
Punishes thousands of civilians
Back and forth
Put into harms way
Every single day
The elderly
Children
Entire families
Who never volunteered to play

You cheered on Hamas
Go team Iron Dome
Invited bloodshed into your neighborhood
Inside your very home
Don't come crying to us
Armchair quarterback hero
When your arms and legs are blown away
Just get on your bloody stumps  
And pray

Pray that this doesn't go into Overtime
And no one survives
 
Score : Zero to Zero
Israel versus Hamas

Playing games with human lives

gazellemon
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
United States 6awards
Joined 6th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 372

The wealthiest human beings in America need me,
Their greed achieves for it is we who fuel their machinery,
communities divide like they must pick teams,
Told to choose a political party by their TV,
Deceived to believe this country is still a Democracy,
In capitalism the top dog watches with a grin,
A zero sum game means we get nothing when they win,      
So those in control stole the show,      
If I go toe to toe with these foes,      
Flows that expose may result in a group of crows,
Whoa....
Better lie low,              
challenging the  largest egos,      
So carve what I wrote into Rosetta stone,      
Better yet let these words rest on your flash disk,      
Disseminate this,      
Racial stereotypes are a myth,      
What do you risk from becoming non-complacent?      
Look at the police statements and claim they are not racist,      
Losing patience because  I want no stake in this fake matrix,        
The basics used by the world patrons are persuasive,      
If we unite they may turn abrasive,
put humanity through its paces,      
Safe to say even the greatest nation needs a replacement,      
No more debt payments,
no patience for enslavement,      
Do you see the blatant arrangement?      
You work hard while they vacation,
Your dreams wasted,
They run the operation,
Look at the houses left vacant,
And look at the cases-
individual's can’t afford the price of being born,  
Let alone support a family always struggling for more,  
After minorities they will just hate the poor,    
We all have delusions of grandeur,      
But I am unsure how much more we can endure,      
at this rate what will it take to secure our fate,
when self-hatred is the affliction,        
I've seen the busy bee's believe the system’s mission,
Seen their miseries and the sweat glisten,  
As they're bent into a  position,    
A transition to submission,      
Please recognize suicide is a crime,
So we can’t even destroy their opposition,      
They would rather you enlisted,        
Use you as ammunition,      
Or even better put you in prison and earn a commission,  
While politician’s crimes have not been forgiven,      
They think we are blind and can't tell that it's scripted,
Listen, I wish this was fictitious but it is the situation we live in.

poet Anonymous

To those living in USA, this is not an USA hate post but i do get most of users here are from there and they hate their own country like many others would do. Here an hit, you had some vacations or a job opportunity in another country, it went good or bad, what do you feel about it. I do know your country is hated a lot but the competition is not about this.

snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
United States 77awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 1873

A desert Hellhole of poverty
Populated by an incestualize linage  
They refuse to speak English
Conversing in tribal gibberish
They are proud of their ignorance
And tendency of uncivilized violence
Is there any country on earth worse
Than Texas?

poet Anonymous

I am not still pratice at this things, i voted for one winner and gave a prize for some more. If you did not receive your price tell me. Thanks.

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
Joined 24th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1257

Holly Shmolly, I didn't even see that I won the Prize!

Thank You so much, glad you liked my musing

Nice comp btw... Do host more!

Sharp!

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