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Noir Haiku (Women's Comp)

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DevlinDLC
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Poetry Contest

see comp info below
Two Haiku Entry Max per Poetress
5-7-5 is the syllabus count
Keep it 'Noir'
One Week to Complete
Have Fun!


example:
'beneath Whiskey Moon
I gave him the kiss of death ~
sirens hound the blues'


poet Anonymous

he hides behind smoke,
but he canít mask those dark lips
tasting like a threat

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DevlinDLC
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Miss Minerva. . .Thanks for starting this comp off!

poet Anonymous

Smoke and shadow claw,
copulate in sirensí spin
bleed sin on brick wall  


poet Anonymous


his words are his hook
emotional con artist
the name he should wear





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Magnumgal
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  Death shall follow him,
His Lies don't hide his greedy ways,
 hunting for a thrill.

  A fallen warrior,
The traitor beyond our lines,
 A lost friend in war.

Forgive me, I am not very good at doing Noir haiku.

poet Anonymous

his kisses were a
smoking gun against her lips,
she bit the bullet

poet Anonymous

those bourbon whispers
burned her tongue when she swallowed
his well aged lies

poet Anonymous

Earth_Child said:those bourbon whispers
burned her tongue when she swallowed
his well aged lies


!!!!!!! oh my. oh my, oh my!

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Lena-underneath
Fire of Insight
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his whispers vibrate
rattling the chains of love
tremors richter deep

poet Anonymous

Scintillating smoke,
his whispers webbed her fortress,
crumbling stone gargoyles

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DeathnoteWhovian
Thought Provoker
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I couldn't find the delete button ... But I took back my entry :D

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mycoffeekilljoy
killer_venting
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Smoke hollows the bones,
Moonlight scalds the breath you capture.
Singeing calllousced lips.

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mycoffeekilljoy
killer_venting
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Crisp amber captured the wind,
Burning the forgotten sins.
Like ashes fallen.

poet Anonymous


Passion fills her soul
He leaves emotionally
And closes the door

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