Poetry competition CLOSED 7th June 2015 5:46pm
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
RUNNERS-UP:
snugglebuck
and toniscales
SYMBOLS FOR HAPPINESS
Anonymous
Poetry Contest Description
tell me about your version of it
Create a poem about happiness
Use a rich form of descriptive language
Try to symbolize it, let it be visible!
What does it look like, sound like
Is it a sunflower, a bluebird, a butterfly
Minimum two stanzas, no explicit language-
Enjoy
Use a rich form of descriptive language
Try to symbolize it, let it be visible!
What does it look like, sound like
Is it a sunflower, a bluebird, a butterfly
Minimum two stanzas, no explicit language-
Enjoy
BoFantastic
Forum Posts: 333
Thought Provoker
7
Joined 24th Apr 2014Forum Posts: 333
A Box Full Of Bitches
better than a box full of kittens
is a box full of bitches
the symbol of happiness is no mistake
bitches in their panties I must take
into a whole new world of booty hole
never let a bitch tell me what to do
I tell the bitches where they itches
scratch it my bitch
and scratch my balls too
the way to my heart is down your throat
I love bad bitches that like to quote
Shakespeare in times of pleasantry
their booty hole must be entered in my journal
of lust diary
allow me to inquire about your hourly wage
because I'm not paying a damn cent
your booty is bent
I enter the darkness and the rhythm
bitches unite and swallow my wisdom
better than a box full of kittens
is a box full of bitches
the symbol of happiness is no mistake
bitches in their panties I must take
into a whole new world of booty hole
never let a bitch tell me what to do
I tell the bitches where they itches
scratch it my bitch
and scratch my balls too
the way to my heart is down your throat
I love bad bitches that like to quote
Shakespeare in times of pleasantry
their booty hole must be entered in my journal
of lust diary
allow me to inquire about your hourly wage
because I'm not paying a damn cent
your booty is bent
I enter the darkness and the rhythm
bitches unite and swallow my wisdom
Anonymous
THANK YOU HEAPS Bo, for starting off this comp!
theskinnyone
Joined 24th Mar 2015
Forum Posts: 38
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 38
you are my happiness
i confide whatever is chewing my mind
you talk to me so kind
a boy of your demeanor is so hard to find
when you are having a bad day you are nice to others
just to make up for it.
God could a girl find a better boyfriend.
i confide whatever is chewing my mind
you talk to me so kind
a boy of your demeanor is so hard to find
when you are having a bad day you are nice to others
just to make up for it.
God could a girl find a better boyfriend.
Anonymous
Thank you for a great entry, SKINNY
Grace
IDryad
Forum Posts: 16209
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
122
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 16209
Happy in my Happiness
the yellow sun rays
shining on green hills
tall grasses waving
caressed by the wind
the subtle colours
of a rainbow against the sky
when the day drizzles
like angels shedding tears
the sounds of birds
busy as the evening falls
shades of grey on the ground
as the sun sets
the cacophony of sounds
mating frogs and cicadas
gentle breeze on bamboo leaves
hum a haunting lullaby
happily in happiness
of familiarity
like a mother's hug
love's embrace.
the yellow sun rays
shining on green hills
tall grasses waving
caressed by the wind
the subtle colours
of a rainbow against the sky
when the day drizzles
like angels shedding tears
the sounds of birds
busy as the evening falls
shades of grey on the ground
as the sun sets
the cacophony of sounds
mating frogs and cicadas
gentle breeze on bamboo leaves
hum a haunting lullaby
happily in happiness
of familiarity
like a mother's hug
love's embrace.
snugglebuck
Forum Posts: 1873
Dangerous Mind
77
Joined 3rd Feb 2014Forum Posts: 1873
http://i1317.photobucket.com/albums/t623/curlycue23/thWEINK7FX_zpsu5jqltkt.jpg
HAPPY AM I
A newborn’s first cry
Creatures that fly
A slice of apple pie
Kids playing outside
Sunset in the sky
Another day done
And I’m still alive
HAPPY AM I
A newborn’s first cry
Creatures that fly
A slice of apple pie
Kids playing outside
Sunset in the sky
Another day done
And I’m still alive
toniscales
Lost Girl
Forum Posts: 420
Lost Girl
Fire of Insight
36
Joined 16th Dec 2014 Forum Posts: 420
On the Nature of Happiness
I know happiness must taste different
than the dry mouth of desperation.
Some sweet concoction, dripping
warm and golden on the tongue.
Happiness must have a different forecast
from the day's first fall of sadness.
I believe happiness has a texture,
not raised but smooth and slippery
as Venetian glass. It seems that joy
would logically create a vibrant,
bubbling brew of voices and happenings,
but in truth I believe it is a transparent,
liquid legato of silence. That weightless,
eerie quiet one experiences when
she suddenly finds herself content
within her own skin. Not needing anyone
to make her feel complete or whole,
knowing that inside her lies
all the answers to all the questions
she has ever asked, all the love
and tenderness she has ever ached for.
Perhaps a light lullaby of rain
like the tinkling of piano keys
against the echoes of tears which have
finally cessated their song. Just perhaps,
an impossibly faint, evanescent,
effluent music, like the tugging
of a smile at the corners or her mouth.
I know happiness must taste different
than the dry mouth of desperation.
Some sweet concoction, dripping
warm and golden on the tongue.
Happiness must have a different forecast
from the day's first fall of sadness.
I believe happiness has a texture,
not raised but smooth and slippery
as Venetian glass. It seems that joy
would logically create a vibrant,
bubbling brew of voices and happenings,
but in truth I believe it is a transparent,
liquid legato of silence. That weightless,
eerie quiet one experiences when
she suddenly finds herself content
within her own skin. Not needing anyone
to make her feel complete or whole,
knowing that inside her lies
all the answers to all the questions
she has ever asked, all the love
and tenderness she has ever ached for.
Perhaps a light lullaby of rain
like the tinkling of piano keys
against the echoes of tears which have
finally cessated their song. Just perhaps,
an impossibly faint, evanescent,
effluent music, like the tugging
of a smile at the corners or her mouth.
Anonymous
Thank you much Snuggle, Grace,and Toni for great entries!
hornyatmorn
Forum Posts: 124
Twisted Dreamer
2
Joined 8th Dec 2014Forum Posts: 124
I don't think that there is a "happy" life, but there may be some happy moments in it.
ARRIVALS
There I show you, coming out of the arrivals,
I could fight for you to death a million rivals,
Cause you are the sweetest girl in the whole world,
like a million stars your eyes are bright and shinning,
love is in your face again my life defining,
Let’s begin, let our love story to unfold.
You are smiling and your hand to me you're waving,
in my heart this picture I'm for ever saving,
where the flow of time never can obscure,
just two seconds and you jump into my bosom,
like a flower is your scent, in its full blossom,
and you kiss me with a love for which I'm sure.
The whole universe our kissing is approving
and the airport with our happiness is grooving,
passers by just take a look and then they smile,
bit by bit my heart is tuned to your arrival,
your heart beat confirms this "Summer Blast" revival,
let us take the road and share our every mile.
There I show you, coming out of the arrivals,
I could fight for you to death a million rivals,
Cause you are the sweetest girl in the whole world,
like a million stars your eyes are bright and shinning,
love is in your face again my life defining,
Let’s begin, let our love story to unfold.
You are smiling and your hand to me you're waving,
in my heart this picture I'm for ever saving,
where the flow of time never can obscure,
just two seconds and you jump into my bosom,
like a flower is your scent, in its full blossom,
and you kiss me with a love for which I'm sure.
The whole universe our kissing is approving
and the airport with our happiness is grooving,
passers by just take a look and then they smile,
bit by bit my heart is tuned to your arrival,
your heart beat confirms this "Summer Blast" revival,
let us take the road and share our every mile.
Anonymous
greying temples ~
its as though eons devoured
an ancient civilisation
and left the wind
to scatter
its silvery remains
against the slopes
of his bones...
... sometimes i think
its the crumbling corners
of Craigneith's dust
trapped
in once ebon silk
and my fingers roam
those remnants,
curling into
the stories i tell
i can taste
the salt
of his experience
when i press my lips
to the greying strands
and whisper
my secrets into
their silence,
only they know
he's my happy place,
a place to call home
its as though eons devoured
an ancient civilisation
and left the wind
to scatter
its silvery remains
against the slopes
of his bones...
... sometimes i think
its the crumbling corners
of Craigneith's dust
trapped
in once ebon silk
and my fingers roam
those remnants,
curling into
the stories i tell
i can taste
the salt
of his experience
when i press my lips
to the greying strands
and whisper
my secrets into
their silence,
only they know
he's my happy place,
a place to call home
Anonymous
Horny, and Katja, great works!
summultima
uma
Forum Posts: 1301
uma
Dangerous Mind
34
Joined 3rd Feb 2012Forum Posts: 1301
'you' syllable: 'the' fulfilling mantra
1.
in your presence
a vaporizing feverish
crisis, arise in wafery
trembling layers
over heavy beating
pain gravity
tongue licks in
your nostril warmth:
a relief of new normalcy
streamlines
upon sliding down spathy lids
with narrowy frillridges
running inbetween
to deviate
daylights
beautysleeps instant
in vivid dreamvisions
within twin darkmoons
in random zigzagging
chants your name
repititive
in just smooth vowel syllables
even over consonant hitpeaks
thusly unhurting your arrival
in fullness permanence
skies
2.
in your absence
fingers roll
in an invisible spiral
in endless innard turns
like your concentric depths
of pulsating shimmer-eyes
which I stare forever
in magnetic
fixations
gulps,a string
of sweetsour anxious chunks
over silences
in hard-immobilized logjams
that need shameless revelations
by even a slightest chime
of real talkings, in
awaits
so long
ears heaten up
from inner volcanic cochlears
spitting electric
its molten lava
unto reddening papery margins
in switching glisten-embers
like those fuelling links
between us
energies
keep deep-delving
in your intricate searches
those which phase-transforms
melting away
my fleshy dilutions
cell by cell, in your gradual
crave-haunting hope-memories
merely leaves
an unseeing pithy dot
of holistic me
orbiting to be an integral one
with your
soul spherule
1.
in your presence
a vaporizing feverish
crisis, arise in wafery
trembling layers
over heavy beating
pain gravity
tongue licks in
your nostril warmth:
a relief of new normalcy
streamlines
upon sliding down spathy lids
with narrowy frillridges
running inbetween
to deviate
daylights
beautysleeps instant
in vivid dreamvisions
within twin darkmoons
in random zigzagging
chants your name
repititive
in just smooth vowel syllables
even over consonant hitpeaks
thusly unhurting your arrival
in fullness permanence
skies
2.
in your absence
fingers roll
in an invisible spiral
in endless innard turns
like your concentric depths
of pulsating shimmer-eyes
which I stare forever
in magnetic
fixations
gulps,a string
of sweetsour anxious chunks
over silences
in hard-immobilized logjams
that need shameless revelations
by even a slightest chime
of real talkings, in
awaits
so long
ears heaten up
from inner volcanic cochlears
spitting electric
its molten lava
unto reddening papery margins
in switching glisten-embers
like those fuelling links
between us
energies
keep deep-delving
in your intricate searches
those which phase-transforms
melting away
my fleshy dilutions
cell by cell, in your gradual
crave-haunting hope-memories
merely leaves
an unseeing pithy dot
of holistic me
orbiting to be an integral one
with your
soul spherule
lanooz
Forum Posts: 240
Twisted Dreamer
14
Joined 21st July 2012Forum Posts: 240
Cascading Waterfall
Happiness? A waterfall
Cascading off the cliff
Against a singing low curl.
Vigorous overjoyed oafish,
Discreet heat hits the bones
My argument for this stage
Absorbed by the whoosh
Organic smile, jolly heart,
My stocking for the year,
Now I'm receptive to
The occasion of happiness.
I was a slave to sadness,
Watching the ants rejuvenated
My inner soul from quicksand
The negative sheep melted
Confidence lacking, apologies
Nimble with the wooden grin.
Beautiful waterfall!
From soggy I jumped
Now I respect all life,
The windy breeze to the face
Punctured a premium of grace,
Scientifically flooded space
With the lowest self-esteem.
Plants approve of my change
"Welcome to happiness,
Where have you been sir?"
I was trapped in the land of
The undeserving love cycle,
A place of great turmoil,
I'm back to prove my worth
To the great waterfall of Earth,
No longer removed from the scene
Peel my gorgeous armour beneath
Can you see my glowing perception?
Off a cliff cascaded a waterfall,
Off a cliff self-esteem returned anew
Tomorrow is here, yesterday passed
Happiness has reared its beautiful head.
Happiness? A waterfall
Cascading off the cliff
Against a singing low curl.
Vigorous overjoyed oafish,
Discreet heat hits the bones
My argument for this stage
Absorbed by the whoosh
Organic smile, jolly heart,
My stocking for the year,
Now I'm receptive to
The occasion of happiness.
I was a slave to sadness,
Watching the ants rejuvenated
My inner soul from quicksand
The negative sheep melted
Confidence lacking, apologies
Nimble with the wooden grin.
Beautiful waterfall!
From soggy I jumped
Now I respect all life,
The windy breeze to the face
Punctured a premium of grace,
Scientifically flooded space
With the lowest self-esteem.
Plants approve of my change
"Welcome to happiness,
Where have you been sir?"
I was trapped in the land of
The undeserving love cycle,
A place of great turmoil,
I'm back to prove my worth
To the great waterfall of Earth,
No longer removed from the scene
Peel my gorgeous armour beneath
Can you see my glowing perception?
Off a cliff cascaded a waterfall,
Off a cliff self-esteem returned anew
Tomorrow is here, yesterday passed
Happiness has reared its beautiful head.
Anonymous
Uma and Ian, thanks for the great entries!