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Poetry competition CLOSED 23rd March 2015 10:54pm
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PsychicApocalypse (Darker Half)
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Decaying Fifty Shades

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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Poetry Contest

lights, camera, action!
A few months ago I ran two comps about necrophilia with plays on the Fifty Shades series. Now here we are again. This time you are a director of a snuff/necrophilia movie. Tell me about your film in a twisted poem of sex and death and beyond.

TWO WEEKS

TWO POEMS, MAX, PER POET

150 WORDS MINIMUM

NEW POEMS ONLY

MAKE IT SEXY

MAKE IT GORY

MAKE US ASHAMED OF READING IT

GRAB SOME LUBE

OR JUST GO IN DRY

HELL, THEY'RE GONNA DIE ANYWAY, RIGHT?


Spike
William The Bloody
Strange Creature
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My dearest love was absolutely insane.
Driven there in her life by a horrible pain.
She had no pulse.
She had no breath.
She infected me with liquid death.
She saw the future.
I saw only the past.
She made it clear we were made to last.
Her skin was cold.
She only felt pain.
Unlike in life, my death was untamed.
She made me wild.
She drove me to kill.
And forever for her I gladly will.
We are forever.
We are undead.
Her eyes and her body are stuck in my head.
The taste of her flesh.
The smell of fresh blood.
In the midst of all chaos is the time to make love.
She was undead.
I lived an unlife.
So she helped me feel more alive.
And I never felt more alive than when I was dead.

We liked teeth and chains and crosses and knives.
Blood and sex, in death we found life.
Fire and water both used to burn.
She never let me go till she finished her turn.
She was sadistic. She also like pain.
I was her toy. I was her plaything.
All hours of night.
All hours of day.
I was her toy.
And she loved to play.
We would have killed each other
If we weren't already dead.
But my favorite thing
Was the way she gave head.
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   v   v

HadesRising
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Awesome, William, thanks for kicking it off and welcome to DU

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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Bump

_shadoe_
yiyi
Tyrant of Words
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fucked with a knife ~ [love me to death]

pare me like a bloodroot
& imbue my vitality
with the darkest shades
of your hunger ~
sink your scarred cock
into my wounds
& masturbate your rage
against my pulsing insides
[feel my life?]
... feel the way its wet fear
lubes your way through
my intestines...
[touch my heart?]
... hold it in your hands
& squeeze
until i'm breathless...
*
plunge the knife
in up & out
in up & out
in up & out
in up & out
in up & out
*
french kiss
the death rattle
suck the air from my lungs
& love me to death
while you gut me
from cunt to throat ~
[i'd apologise for the leak]
... but you call it
splatter art
on the cold tiles...
[i'd tell you i love it]
... but all i manage
are these godforsaken
hopeless sounds...
//
i cool
like meat
between your teeth
pick my decay
from your gums
& keep eating
my rotting dent ~
[do i taste like death]
... like corpse flowers
melting on
your bloodied tongue...
[show me meaning]
... to
the ultimate
le petit morte...
*
plunge the knife
in up & out
in up & out
in up & out
in up & out
in up & out
*
spread
like a snow angel
with severed wings
drowning in the ripples
between stab & thrust
& the shudder
of
the maggot infestation
swarming from your loins ~
[rest now]
... think of flesh
slipping
from fractured bones...
[sleep now]
... you'll enjoy this
more
tomorrow...
//

poet Anonymous

Eastwould revizittdid wittuh ded gote

Eye pikkd upp rodekill duh uthirr dai.
Itt wuzza ded gote.
Bloatdid.
Smellee und swollynn.
Eye tooke itt home.
Eye putt itt inn mai bedd.
Eye phuckt dat ded gote
evry witch weigh butt luce.
Eye fellt lyke Klintt.
Rememburr hiz moveveez!
Uh huh.
Gote phuckher.
Da gud.
Da badd.
Itt wuz beeyoutifffull lyke muzik.

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
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Camera, Blood, Action!

http://graphics8.nytimes.com/images/2014/03/12/blogs/20140312-lens-syria-slide-CAX3/20140312-lens-syria-slide-CAX3-blog480.jpg

I want gore.
I want you to slowly slit
her pretty pale throat.
I want shrilling screams.
I want the dread being
captured, as she begs and pleads.

Flash to me her breast.
Let it jiggle and bounce,
as you tear open her chest.
I want the sanguine sex.
Slash and cut,
make out with the blood,
dig deep to have it splashing
unto the lens.


Camera, Blood, Action!

No!! Dammit give me more!
I want you to fuck that
stiffing body like porn whore.
Give me a seducer.
Seduce the psychopath in me,
make my spine tail shiver.

Make me wet honey.
Let that dying form,
experience its last gasping ecstasy.
Ripping through the body,
forgetting,
kissing death,
your last act of chivalry.


Camera, Blood, Action!

You useless piece of shit!!
You're waste of space.
I'm wasting breath, you just
don't get it!!
Don't just tickle her with your dick!
She's dying because she doesn't like it!

I want you to hump her like a dog.
Feel the cold in her inners,
and do her like limp doll.
You'll be taking her place,
I swear, if she dies.
I'll take my sweet time
ripping your asshole open,
relishing in your useless cries.


Camera, Blood, Action!

I guess I'll just have to use you as example.
I've got it in the right mind,
to rip your face off, as if you've were trampled.  
You know,... not a bad plan.
I guess you need to experience
the pain, so to understand.

Kneel before me,
my sweet puppet of fascination.
I'll be the protagonist,
since the bitch died far too soon
for my satisfaction,
We'll make use of her situation.
Tomorrow is a new day for necromancy
and beautification.
I'll have to teach you the ropes first,


Camera, Blood, Action!

gray_child
gray_the_great
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 31st July 2014
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Jane Doe at it

Useless waste of human flesh
Nobody wants you
But I do
I can make you do anything
Let's just take it slow
Strip you of this dirty dress
Body smells of decay animal
I love it
Kissing every inch of this vassal
Tasting every insect
No sure if it's a gangbang
Or memories from my childhood
I wanna fuck you alive
Going in never felt so cold and good
Fuck the warmth at least I have control
This isn't rape my dear jane
This is my love

HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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Goddamn, it's getting hot in here

Dead_Poet
Strange Creature
United States
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I laid her down
She fought as she was bound
Soon to be another corpse on the mound
To bathe in human blood
To know what is true love
Just a quick cut to the neck when you're about to cum
Makes all the difference to some
But for me it's a lot better
To let her get a little wetter
Strangle her with her boyfriend's sweater
You know she loved you more
When she gave you those doe eyes from the peephole in her door
It was love at first sight
But the bitch still fought with all her might
Now she gasps for air
With that dead stare
Her heart stops
Just as my first load pops
Things are just getting better
As I wipe her down with the now cum stained sweater
Now we can be together forever
I present my veins which are quick to sever




HadesRising
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Anyone else?

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
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Amma drop another one in l8er today... jejeje

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
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The Dope Show

http://www.porjati.net/uploads/posts/2012-02/1329503467_1-3.jpg

Puffin smoke circles,
         the show has just begun.
Skipping the introduction,
         Action! Roll on one.

I don't want to scream,
         the pain feels so damn good.
This is my night to shine,
         in this segment so taboo to boot.

Fuck my lovely pussy,
         make it shine red.
Smack this bubbly ass,
         and bash open my head.

Thrust into me,
         as if escaping death.
Suffocate me with chloroform,
         making me gasp out for breath.

I want you to go insane,
         fuck me hysterically.
Don't stop plowing my form,
         until I'm sagging lifelessly.

Take a bat,
         shove it in any hole available.
Keep the camera rolling,
         my thirst for death growing insatiable.

Get your freak on,
         zooming up on the screen.
Get my frozen face,
         obscenity on the scene.

Make me bloodless,
         carve out celtic designs on my pale skin.
Marvel at my pulselessness,
         then take this body for a next spin.

Don't stop!
Don't stop!
Keep going!
Keep fucking!

Stain the white sheets,
         with the color of my blood.
Then cover me completely,
         with ropes of your seedy spunk.

Even if I say no,
         I love every bit of the gore.
You can freeze the dead body for a week,
         then roll on one for one more round      
                      with my decaying corpse.

My deceased existence,
         wants to keep the camera rolling,
                 recording our memories of the dope show.
Even with society's horrified resistance 
         by the end of the film,
                 we'll have them cumming,
         and begging us for more.



HadesRising
Tyrant of Words
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Unholy smokes! The bar is set high

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
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I can't believe that picture was from an actual Chinese snuff film ...
It's banned in my country... it's going to be a bitch finding the real movie.

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