Poetry competition CLOSED 12th February 2015 3:05pm
WINNER
Jestalessa
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RUNNER-UP: DancingAlone

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Colours of Love

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1301

Poetry Contest

what hues you picturize your love? capture them all in a micropoem
with the v-day countdown beats heard aloud, yet agn another comp. on the ever-enigmatic 'love'..but all in few words.
whatz your love..flaming passionate reds or the delicate pinks or the classic ol' sepias... just the colourless forgottens..or the bitter blacks..whatever, put it your way in the spirit of love


n the simple rulez:
     one entry per poet
     within 40 words
     new post only
     any style

     no extreme or erotic content

winners based on creativity, intensity n poetic feel.expecting your brimming love all over this thread..in juz a,weekz tym.
any doubts on comp, am juz a pm away.
Cheerz dear Poetzz.all love this season:)



BrokynSyn
Lost Thinker
Australia
Joined 19th Dec 2014
Forum Posts: 19

Love is sorrow and mourning, love is just boarding hate. It's painful and delightful, heaven and hell. It's your villain and you hero. Love is black, a shade of nothingness that everyone wants to make bright.

toniscales
Lost Girl
Fire of Insight
United States 36awards
Joined 16th Dec 2014
Forum Posts: 420

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Synesthete's Love Poem in Blue

my love
pale blue rain music
colors my walls
of this house
we loved within
the many lives
we’ve shared
dripping
from blue heavens
blue tears
where I sit
by your grave
aching to kiss
your
blue
lips

DancingAlone
Calum Oliver
Twisted Dreamer
United States 3awards
Joined 16th Jan 2015
Forum Posts: 64

It blurs. It spins.
I fall. I forget.
No colours matter.
The lines are blurred.
In the grey between love and hurt.
I see only my love.
The rest of the world is grey.
No today,tommorow or yesterday.

poet Anonymous

green

i imagine our love a verdant green
plush and new like spring poking through
dark brown soil
budding on barren branches
but sometimes marshy green
like your eyes before release
dark and full of old life
our love is growth

DreamSeed
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 21st Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 22

my love is a ghost
  of gray foggy thoughts
that carries away
  on crests and on troughs
the feelings that stay
  till daybreak knocks off
my love is the smoke
  that festers and coughs

Jestalessa
Dangerous Mind
Scotland 35awards
Joined 27th July 2010
Forum Posts: 2329

Love: horizon, skyline, sky lights
building, demolishing
the view out my kitchen window to the loch
and landscape on the other side
always moving, changing with the day

or is it only white insanity
waiting for our projections?

poet Anonymous

Kaleidascope

White dust of innocence
turns to beige,paper crumbled
Reading
with azure eyes
Lavender lips
Green greed
for your mauve mouth
We enter the saphire starlight
Our souls unite
In a tourmaline dream

AndyWritesPoems
Lost Thinker
United Kingdom
Joined 31st Jan 2015
Forum Posts: 12

Paper Perfect:

Clean, pristine,
perfect and pure,
the paper unmarked,
has glowing allure,
A page without pen,
A line without ink.
Unspeakably white,
to make my heart sink.

ThePintSizdSlasher
Aaiden
Thought Provoker
Canada 3awards
Joined 7th May 2012
Forum Posts: 455

You were so full of life
But all if took was one strife
And all the life drained from your face
When I pulled the knife out of your back

There will be no forgiveness this time, no remorse
This is what you've forced me to do

The crimson water stains your elegant white dress
And you're skin as become so pale
I must confess I never thought itd come to this
But now
Looking at you so still beneath me

Lying motionless in white and so cold
I feel the lust building up inside me

So I give In to the temptation, it's a cold sensation
But I fill your body with warmth one last time
And I feel your love one last time

ThePintSizdSlasher
Aaiden
Thought Provoker
Canada 3awards
Joined 7th May 2012
Forum Posts: 455

Sorry I can't count

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1301

Ahh, de colour-filled canvas of love.. inerasable streaks of emotions stamped hard, clear n short...tq all here who took up this micropoem challenge:)

n watta diversity of reads n interestingly same hues taking opposing emotions too:
an acrid shoutout of black n nothingness, mesmerizing blues made eternal heavens, the blurred grey bands b/w love n hurt, the same grays turning ghostly fog n smoke, eloquent fertile greens, the ever-changing equation like a chaotic hue of a sorta maya of presence-absence, the whites of insanity n the pristine purity, the kaleidoscopic soulfulness, bloody crimsin n pale whites...ooh, only wished if more cud have posted;) all great in each uniqye way.


winners n runners up in my limited judging sense:

the metaphysical realm juz gleaming spiritualistic n romantic, Mourganna the second runner up

the lucid lifeline love that is the only thing felt despite blurriness, pains n time sense n existence as such, DancingAlone..first runner-up

the ever-changing equation, the maya, the illusion, or posing that to be juz a white insanity fr our own projections...complex n creative n intense, Jesta the winner, Congratz:)

thorougly enjoyed this comp. n hope u all too. Tq n cheerz:)

poet Anonymous

Many thank you`s dear Uma,for including my poem as runner up.
It was an inspiring competition,congrats to winner,and runner up

Jestalessa
Dangerous Mind
Scotland 35awards
Joined 27th July 2010
Forum Posts: 2329

yay, thank you, uma. [:

great job, everybody, and i really enjoyed Minerva's "green".

poet Anonymous

well done everyone! congrats to to Jestalessa and the runners up. i thoroughly loved this competition.

so glad you enjoyed "green" Jestalessa. that made me smile this morning.

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