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Give A Month... Of Dark Love

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
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Poetry Contest

Just as it says above... Gothic Even
I'd like to dedicate this month of February to Dark Love .

Dark Love ....
As in anything that can relate to loving or being in love with some one or something unnatural...

Just dark and weird. (not nasty and disgusting)
I wanna read your piece and be like 'wtf!' lol



Rules

250-200 Words
Please Title your poem (or else it won't be considered an entry)
No Collabs (I just don't think I'm that experienced to judge collabs)
2 Entries per poet(some times it's too hard to judge with just one piece)
New Entries only peoples... (exercising one's mind.)


Inspired by HadesRising Goth Romance Competition.

HadesRising
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Thanks for the shout out. Just one poem per poet? I'll see what I can come up with

Poetryman
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"Ghosts"

Flashes of recall strike at my thoughts      
Thunderous echoes of faces forgotten      
Shimmer in the back of my clouded mind      
They could be from reveries or lost moments of time      
I don't know if I knew them or imagined we had met      
I may have made love to the ghosts I cannot see      
In brief glimpses of passion that might have been fantasy      
I can't tell if they're real or can remember me      
Still I long to merge spirits with vaporous phantoms      
Share corporal warmth, kiss sweat covered skin    
What is the difference between veracity and erratic dreams    
When the lines have broken as gray swirls in my skull      
No boundaries exist to separate humidity from mist      
And I feel so lost and alone within my own mind      
Imagined vague figments who loved like lightening at night      
Now haunt the dark hallways of black holes in my brain      
Sucked into the void of my dead memory      
I hear their tears dripping to moisten my head  

PsychicApocalypse
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HadesRising said:Thanks for the shout out. Just one poem per poet? I'll see what I can come up with

oh yes thank you for reminding me ... I knew something else was missing ....

that's be 2 entries per poet....
I'd like to see pencils and pen points scalding paper.

PsychicApocalypse
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Anonymous said:<< post removed >>

yes please... it forces to exercise one's brain... lol

BrokynSyn
Lost Thinker
Australia
Joined 19th Dec 2014
Forum Posts: 19

Mistress Seduction

I can't help the chills down my back,
When I think of her sweet attack.
The way her nails skin into my flesh,
And the way her teeth work like my skin was mesh.

She is my dark sultury queen of lust,
Her crimson smile keeping me hushed.
My own blood taste on her lips,
Always craving her death kiss.

I can't the way I lust for her,
My sesual queen beyond nature.
I know I'm knocking of the devil's door,
Doing the death dance with his whore.

My blood could stain her teeth,
And leave splatter marks on her cheek.
It would be the sweetest type of destruction,
To be the victim of Mistress Seduction.

DancingAlone
Calum Oliver
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    "Hahaha"

Your crazy laugh. Wicked smile.
Your lust drives me a mile high.
Intoxicated, incarcerated, inebriated.
I lust for you. I want you.
Laugh for me. Lust for me.
Tell me how you got your scars.
Everyone has seen you laugh,
Only I have see you cry.
No more makeup, darling.
I lust to see your face.
Mistah Funny,
Mistah Monster,
Mistah Master,
Mistah J.
Beat me, baby.
I'll beat you right back.
And I'll love it, and you'll love it.
Laugh for me.
Cry for me.
Come on, Mistah, play with me.
You perfect little creep.
You amazing little monster.
I want you. You need me.
To keep you insane.
You lovely clown.
Take off your face, and let me see your true mask.
Darling, hit me. Please.
Make me beg. I'll beg for you.
I lust for you.
Intoxicating, infatuating, inebriating.
Pull my hair. Bite my lip.
I'll leave scratched down your back that you will never forget.
Honey, I want you so bad.
I want you to love me.
Love me.
Lust for me.
Want me.
Take it all.
I give it to you.
I gave it to you.
I'm nothing.
Beat me, hit me, play with me.
I'm your toy, Mistah.
I lust for you.
I love your pain.
Give it all to me.
I'll take it away.

PsychicApocalypse
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Thank you Poetryman, BrokynSyn and DancingAlone for starting off this competition...

jitters can't wait to see what y'all have for me

millertyme
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 22nd Jan 2015
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This is my first entry for a competition,do I just post on quick reply

millertyme
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 22nd Jan 2015
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I Feel Fire'

Pale skin and beautiful crimson lips
Eye's to die for that makes my mind trip
Who is this gorgeous creature from this deep abyss
For the look in her eyes is something not to be missed
Her gaze makes me feel fire
For my desire burned for her
As I watched her burn my living world around me
Her burning body engulfed me,to go deep inside thee
For this passion was just pure sin
But felt so great to feel her fire within
The fire in our eye's burned so bright
For her magical touch I just couldn't fight
Hotter and hotter I loudly groaned I Feel Fire
As my mind and soul traveled higher
Seeing my world and soul had gone
The power of her burning fires had been shown
Smoke,ash,and fire fuck me and my burning desires
I Feel Fire,I Feel Fire...

HadesRising
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BETWEEN THE DEVIL AND THE DEAD

A precipice stretches the distance
Immortality is resistance
Found inside all the lies
When hearts turn to granite this instant

I have grown cold just like your facade
Like a dying god becoming a fraud
Devoted followers realizing
The truth behind their decaying queen

I once said
I will love you
Past the grip of death
And you see
Bury your idol
Between the devil and me

Long lived in the shadow of statues
You have never seen me walk past you
I've seen faces in places
In dark alleys where I pursue you

The seeds lead a trail of my dismay
Just another downpour on rotten days
You slip like a wisp out of my arms
Leaving me lonely to face the storm

So, you see
Persephone
That dead hearts still bleed
Words were said
Inside the shadows
Between the devil and the dead

The path lost
To Elysium
At a heavy cost
Empty needs
When the deals are made
With the devil inside me

Losing faith, dying love
On a trail of pomegranate seeds
Sealing fate in cooling blood
Satisfy the devil inside of me
Where did the time go
When it seems wishes were granted?
And you broke on stones below
When I took you for granite

Fragile but strong
Loved but alone
My hopes were dashed
When you played the part
A stone's throw from my heart

So, you see
Persephone
That dead hearts still bleed
Words were said
Inside the shadows
Between the devil and the dead

I once said
I will love you
Past the grip of death
And you see
Bury your idol
Between the devil and me

HadesRising
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THE GUILT AND REGRET OF WEEPING SERAPHIM


She lays In my arms on a bed of roses
Tears drops stain her cheeks
The pills that kill the pain
And the whiskey that cases dreams away
Have finally taken their toll
On a soul that broke on the rocks
Far below where angels fear to venture
Guilt and regret are lovers entwined
Where seraphim weep over fallen stars
The pain and abuse endured
Seems so pointless now
That the agony never stops
Is this what love truly is?
Why can't we just die together
Like we should have
Right from the start?

ThePintSizdSlasher
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Thought Provoker
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Pale Love


You were so full of life
But all if took was one strife
And all the life drained from your face
When I pulled the knife out of your back

There will be no forgiveness this time, no remorse
This is what you've forced me to do

The crimson water stains your elegant white dress
And you're skin as become so pale
I must confess I never thought itd come to this
But now
Looking at you so still beneath me

Lying motionless in white and so cold
I feel the lust building up inside me

So I give In to the temptation, it's a cold sensation
But I fill your body with warmth one last time
And I feel your love one last time

Zombie_B
Rotting Rhymes
Twisted Dreamer
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Forum Posts: 47

Sacrifice in the name of love

You look so wonderful
So beautiful, with your hands tied at
your back.
The noose hangs round your neck.
Your feet barely touch that shelf.
Your beauty gives me the shivers
More so with your attempts to untie
yourself
And I stare at you
Enjoying the pleasures of your pains
And I sacrifice you
For your blood to wash away these
stains
Stains of your memory,
Of my sad but true story
Please don’t wriggle dear!
Please don’t cry
The time has come
Time for you to die
And here I come
With me comes your help
Just stay calm!
And I will slowly remove this shelf.
(Good Bye! !)

PsychicApocalypse
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Daaammmnnn.... yea I got my work cut out for me hahaha... I'm enjoying this so much

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