Poetry competition CLOSED 4th January 2015 2:06pm
WINNER
UnleashedHeathen
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RUNNERS-UP: johnrot and LobodeSanPedro

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microMADNESS

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1301

Ahh...grt entries evryone here..
tq craic, john,cannaballester,tonyscales (aww gud..4/4 entries in a row), crazy_admirer, quill-in-heart,SirCreepy, eatfat97..
Keep them coming more from u all poets, the mad mad madnessezz in micropoemz

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
Sierra Leone 109awards
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304

I want my soul back
Going to Hell to claim it
You taught me the way

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
Sierra Leone 109awards
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304

hag rode me last night
kidnapped my body for jest
left my mind to watch

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
Sierra Leone 109awards
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304

weaned
 
Take Him in your mouth
The good Father guides my path
Unholy water 
 
The pup taste first blood
Cut my teeth in His glory 
Thorns for the crowned King 

UnleashedHeathen
Fire of Insight
United States 3awards
Joined 6th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 578

Animosity:

There was a time
when the clouds
fell
and I suffocated
in the mystery
of their
coming
and
going.

horrorlord99
ronin graham
Strange Creature
Joined 31st Dec 2014
Forum Posts: 1

The world of infinite pain
Where we live to fail
The purpose of it all is insane
called God and went to voicemail

SirCreepy
Colten Sorrells
Fire of Insight
United States 4awards
Joined 13th Oct 2013
Forum Posts: 375

Spoke to God earlier

He said
that you're a cunt

and he would really
rather you didn't
tell everybody he speaks

to you

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1301

right now

his
mystical airs
tumbles
topsy turvy
over my
languishing
boundaries

lingers  lacerates
deep magnetic cuts

into our
abyss

hysterical
mysteries


that was not an entry..madness though:)

Fine entries coming in as new year mania setz in..keep them coming more



LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
Sierra Leone 109awards
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304




no    HOME    in     this       ROOM      >              >             >
Jack Daniels   Mary Jane  and
  Remington true friends.  
    but   those  kids
     in    chem.  
     bam! laugh
     Now bitch.

UnleashedHeathen
Fire of Insight
United States 3awards
Joined 6th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 578

Solemn:

I slide the blade
across my heart
to make the hurt
squirt out my veins.

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1301

Jyz few hours left out,  but that's so much tym fr the microentriezz if u wished to make it
Madnesses making within the deadline r still welcome dear poetz:)


summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1301


Ahh..a grt exercise fr me judging this comp,  n tq fr all de wonderfully put entries. For me, each n every one is a winner, but for the limitations of a comp. n subsequently its judgement, am into this process of shortlisted onezz out of totally v.few replies though.

To say about the scoring, was inspired by a recent micropoetry comp,"on depression" by mikimoondancer. So had scored somewhat on those lines.  Had aggregated the scores for chaotic/cryptic content plus innovativeness

Some of the best entries were: (scored out of 20)
craicdealer(18), johnrot(19), tonyscales(18 each for 'morning service' n ' lost girl), LobodeSanPedro(18 each for first, second n fourth entry, third entry disqualified for exceeding word limits), UnleashedHeathen( 19 for 'animosity')

Other replies are not far behind too:
Cannaballester(13), crazy_admirer(14 n 16), tonyscales (17 n 16 for first n third replies), SirCreepy (17,14 n 16 for the respective poems), Tony Pena(16),  eatfat97(15), ronin graham(15),  UnleashedHeathen(17 for second post)


Andddd the trophy goes to:

UnleashedHeathen -WINNER
johnrot- FIRST RUNNER UP
LobodeSanPedro - SECOND RUNNER UP


CONGRATZZ to winnerz n everyone here.
I look forward for more such comps n ur support:) tq n luv

UnleashedHeathen
Fire of Insight
United States 3awards
Joined 6th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 578

Oh boy. Thank you for the opportunity. Also congratulations to all who entered. Lovely competition.

LobodeSanPedro
Tyrant of Words
Sierra Leone 109awards
Joined 16th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 3304

Great comp! Thanks for the humbling scores uma- I'm glad you liked the work ... That one you disqualified - What can I tell you other than I'm now part of the same piss poor American education system that taught me how to count ... Either that or I was drunk or high or both.

Congrats! Unleashed! ... cool running johnrot.

johnrot
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 10th Oct 2012
Forum Posts: 3645

word up heathen!!!

high five LSP

good stuff miss uma.............

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